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书面表达评分标准一档(1215分):内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。二档(811分):内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。三档(57分):内容切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。四档(14分):有一定内容,但语法错误较多。(注意:书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分;单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分;抄袭卷中阅读材料的,抄袭部分不给分。)2014年曲靖市中考满分作文欣赏1. How I relax myself?A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. Rose given, fragrance in hand. Rich or poor, young or old, we should learn to relax. Learn to relax, learn to enjoy life. Life is a song, sing it. Life is like a picture, draw it. Life is like a dream, achieve it. Life is a poem, read it. Life is a challenge, face it. No matter who you are, no matter where you are, no matter what you are facing, you should learn to relax yourselves.Time is just like a one-way road, if you goes, will never come back. Rome was not built in a day. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(只学习部玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻)2. How to be a good student?As a student, its necessary and important to behave well.At home, we should love our parents and respect them. We should try our best to help them with housework. At school, we should follow the school rules. We should also get on well with our schoolmates and help each other. In public, wed better not speak or laugh loudly. When we are on a bus, we should offer our seats to the old people.In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students. If we do, our society will be better and better.3. Helping others is happyLife to everyone is once, so we should help others who are in the hot water and who helped you.I will help you, my parents! I will let you be less tired, because its you who helped and supported; I will help you, my teachers! I will let you be pround of us, because its you who give us knowledge and teach us to be a better man; I will help you, my friends! I will let you feel happy, because its you who help me and encourage me when Im in the trouble.In a word, I will help others who have helped me. Helping others makes me happy. Lets help the people who need help.4. A talk to myselfHow time flies! Im leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a good man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life. However, Im also upset sometimes. I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know its not good for for me. I will try my best to join in more activities.I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.5. My plan for the coming school yearI have finished my study in the junior high school and will start my new life in a new school. Now Id like to share my plan with you.First, it is important to do well in all subjects. I will work harder at them to improve my grades. Second, Ill try to take part in some after-class activities and make more friends. Third, to have a strong body, Ill try to do as much exercises as I can.Im sure I can do better in the coming school year.6. An unforgettable school experienceSchool life is very unforgettable for me, which makes me always remember.Once I took part in an English speech contest. I felt nervous before my turn. At that time, my teacher came to me and encouraged me with a smile. Then I became calm and focused on my speech. I got a good result finally and I was very happy.Such experiences made me grow up and teachers were always very important on our way, so they were worth our respect.7. Lets save waterWater is life. People cant live without water. Plants will die without water. However, there are still many people wasting water. For example, they always keep the water running when doing washes. So we must take actions to stop them from doing something like this.First, more public service ads should be made to let people know the importance of water. Second, we should be made to use less water if necessary in our daily life. Third, we should call on the people around us to save water together.Lets take action from now on!8. How to protect the earth?Nowadays, the pollution on the earth is becoming more serious because trees are cut down. How to protect the earth? Here I have some suggestions.First, we should reduce the falling down of the trees, and we should plant new trees. Second, dont waste and reuse some resources. For example, we can go on to use the back side of the paper after we have used the front side. I think we can protect the earth by doing the above things. Lets work together to make the earth more beautiful.9. My country lifeI live in a small village in the countryside.There is a river near it. There are lots of trees around my house. The air here is clear and fresh. There is less noise in the morning except the sound of the birds. I can read aloud and clearly in the forest. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. I can enjoy watching the moon and the stars happily. Whats more, the government has built a beautiful teaching building for us to study in and wide playground to play sports.What a nice place I live in.10. UnderstandingUnderstanding is a bridge between teachers and students.Once I copied my deskmates paper during an exam and handed it in. the next day, my teacher told the whole class about it. I lost face. I hated the teacher. Days later, the teacher had a heart-to-heart talk with me. He said he could understand that I would like to be good. But to be good should depend on hard work. From then on, with his help, I became so interested in study that I made great progress. I think understanding is an important part of our life. Understanding can make us successful. Knowing that, I understand teachers better.11.Growing up with My FatherMy father always loves me and tries to help me. I grow up with my father.When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didnt like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.No matter what difficulties I meet, my father stands by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.12.A Wonderful TripLast weekend, my parents and I had a trip to Beijing. I was fantastic.On the first day, we went to the palace museum and I was attracted by the colorful crafts on display. I was really meaningful to have a look at such beautiful works. The next day, we went to the Great Wall. I was totally shocked by the beautiful scenery of it. As a saying goes, “one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero” so I was proud of myself. The third day, we went to Beijing Hutong and we enjoyed Beijing special food-Beijing duck there. It is delicious. We enjoyed ourselves so much that we even didnt want to return home.What a wonderful trip we had! I cant wait to go there again. 13.Sunshine in My LifeWithout sunshine, the world will be dark; without sunshine, plants will die. Smile is like sunshine in my life. It gives me energy and support.When I began to study in my primary school, I was shy and didnt like to talk with others. As a result, I was very lonely and didnt have any friends. When I heard others talking and laughing, I felt even sadder. Then one day, our teacher asked a new student to sit in front of me. He walked to me without any words, just smiling. Suddenly, I was deeply moved. I felt so warm at that time. The smile changed my life. I began to make friends and became more and more outgoing.I am thankful to that boy and for his smile. Since then, I smile to my classmates, teachers and families. That makes me feel very happy. Smile is like sunshine, and it makes flowers come out.14.My Summer VacationThe summer vacation is coming. I make a lot of plans about it.At first, I will travel to Hainan with my parents. We will enjoy the beautiful sea. After that, I will stay at home to have a good rest, watching TV and listening to the music. At the same time, I will help my mother with some housework to thank her for her looking after me all the time. During this time, I may take part in some meaningful activities, such as going to the old peoples home, going to the countryside and visiting the left-behind children and so on.I believe my summer vacation will be wonderful.15.The Spring FestivalIn china, The Spring Festival is the first day of the lunar year.People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food and decorate their home. On Chinese New Years Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get luck money from their parents.In all, people can enjoy themselves in spring festival and wish a lucky year.16.Should teenagers be allowed to use phones?Every coin has two sides. Some people think that teenagers should be allowed to use phones. Its a waste of time and money. However, some dont agree. As a teenager, I think we teenagers should be allowed to use phones. Here are my reasons. First of all, mobile phones can help parents to find their children easily.You know,many parents worry about their childrens safety.Second,mobile phones can also help parents talk with their parents face to face.So its a good way for teenagers to talk with parents on the phone.The third reason is that mobiles are good for teenagers study.Most of mobile phones have many funtions like dictionary. Mobile phones are pretty good,butyou cant use them all the time.Its bad for your health.At least you should put them away in the evening.Teenagers should get enough sleep and also use the mobile phones reasonably.17.My father(mother/ friend)My father is great. Because he provides everything that he has for me and no given. I love my father, because wh
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