谚语评论性四级英语作文

2015 12 谚语评论类作文 引语评论作文的特点 全英文给题 无中文提示 文章给出一句名人名言或是俗语谚语 并且进行评论 文章主题与 人生哲理 优秀品质 相关 不再是以往的校园 学习或社会热点 困惑 学生拿到这个没有中文提纲的写作题目之后 无从下手 一不知道文章的段落结构安排 而不知道文章的内容怎么去写 评论类作文的发展及怎样审题 StepI审题 2011 PartIWriting 30minutes Directions You reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld I vedoneithundredsoftime You dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words 用事例来例证strongwill是成功的关键 审题 2012 PartIWriting 30minutes Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln sfamousremark Givemesixhourstochopdownatree andIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutmorethan200words 用林肯的名言中来论证fullpreparation对成功的重要性 TheWaytoSuccess Persistenceandthedeterminationtosuccesscanovercomeprofoundobstacles TaketheexampleofthefirstwomanSupremeCourtJusticeofUnitedStates ShegraduatedfromStanfordwiththeprestigeofherdegreedreamedtobelawyerbutshewasrejectedfromtheentirelawcircuit Evensoshenevergaveup Intheend shewaseventuallynominatedandappointedthefirstwomanSupremeCourtJusticeintheUnitedStates TheWaytoSuccess Let stakeLinShuhaoforexample HeisaChinese Americancitizen Atthebeginning hewasnotverypopularinNBA Whenhefirstappearedinthematch quiteafewpeopleholdtheviewthathecouldnotsurviveinNBA letalonebecomeafamousbasketballstar However withhardworkandprofounddiligence heachievedsuccess TheWaytoSuccess Diligence hardworkingandpersistencecanhelpustotranscendanyhandicaps TheexperienceofHelenKellersetanexampleforus Shewasandisabledpeopleandshewasdeprivedofhearingandvisionwhenshewasborn butshefinallyacquiredmanylanguagesandbecomeafamouswriterandeducator TheWaytoSuccess Chancefavorstheprepared LesBrown aniconinAmericanbroadcasting couldbeoneofthemostconvincingcasesofhowfullpreparationworksinsuccess Hewassenttothespecialeducationschoolforthelearningdisabled Aftergraduation hebecameagarbagecollector sothefutureforhimisslim However henevergiveup becausehehadadreamtobecomeaDJ Hewenttothelocalradiostationandwantedtogetajobthere Buttherequestwasrejectedbythemanagerfornoworkexperienceinbroadcasting Despiteeveryone sdiscouragementandcriticism hewasdeterminedandwenttothestationeveryday Finallythemanagergaveinandtookhimtodosmalltaskatnopay DuringthetimespentwiththerealDJs helearnedbyhimselfhowtooperatethepanel andaccumulatedtheknowledgetobroadcast Owingtoit thechancearrived Onedayafternoon aDJfelttoosicktobroadcastandnoonecouldbefoundtotakeoverhim Atthistime themanagerassignedLestohaveatry Becauseofhisfullpreparation Leasucceeded HowcouldLesBrownhavedonewithoutfullpreparation TheWaytoSuccess DiligencePersistenceHardworkingDeterminationWell fullpreparation 2015年12月第一套 Directions Forthispart yourareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentinginthesaying Listeningismoreimportantthantalking Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceofpayingattentiontoothers opinions Youshouldwriteat120wordsbutnomorethan180words 自己举例或用理据论证倾听的重要性 2015年12月第二套 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingonthesaying Learningisadailyexperienceandalifetimemission Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceoflifelonglearning Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words 用事例 活到老学到老 或理据论证终身学习的重要性 2015年12月第三套 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingonthesaying Nevergoouttheretoseewhathappens goouttheretomakethingshappen Youcanciteexamplestoillustratetheimportanceofbeingparticipantsratherthanmereonlookersinlife Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words 用事例 扶不扶老人 帮助贫困生或特殊儿童 或理据论证主动成为参与人 贡献我们的才能 造福大众的重要性 Howtoorganize 1 直接引用引语文章的第1和2句 引用题中给予的原话Thereisawidespreadsayingthat 2 简化引语 表层评论改写引语使之简洁易懂对引语的表层含义进行评论 就引语的 事 说 事 3 提炼挖掘引语的深层含义Thesaying proverb sb sremarkaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofA 提出A的重要性 Paragraphone Howtoorganize 事例法 举自己的故事 1 父母怎样由criticize到listening的变化 由此带来的与父母关系的改善 和自己学习成绩的提高 2 与好朋友之间的相处或关系的改善等 例举身边发生的故事 故事能够体现倾听的重要性的 ParagraphTwo 2015年12月第一套试卷Writing Howtoorganize 例举论证法 1 正反面论述法 正面论述倾听的重要性反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果2 例举罗列法 itcan itcan anditcan ParagraphTwo 正反论述 Ifirmlybelievethatlisteningisofgreatersignificancethantalking Foronething Ifyoucannotlistencorrectly youcannottalkproperly Justimagineaworldwhereeveryonekeeptalkingbutnobodylistening it suselesstosayanythingthen Foranother ifyouwanttomakeachievementinsocialsettings relationshipsandbusiness onewaytoensureyoursuccessistobeagreatlistener 理据罗列 Asweallknow listeningisagoodwayincommunicationwithothers Becauseithelpsustounderstandtheideasofothersclearly avoidingmisunderstanding ithelpsuswidenourhorizon andithelpsusbuildupagoodrelationshipwithothers Howtoorganize 事例法 例举自己身边的例子 如你爷爷或奶奶学会用网上购物 微信视频聊天 开微博当博主等你周围的邻居40多岁了考上了大学等名人事例 86岁的著名经济学家于光远学会使用电脑 建微博 海伦 凯特的励志故事 ParagraphTwo 2015年12月第二套试卷Writing Howtoorganize 例举论证法 1 正反面论述法 正面论述倾听的重要性反面论述如果没有倾听会有什么样的后果2 例举罗列法 itcan itcan anditcan ParagraphTwo 正反论述 Asweallknow theknowledgechangessoquicklywiththeadvanceofmodernsociety thosewhodon tusethemobileInternettechnologywillfallbehindthetimes Forexample youcan tuseamobilephonetobookataxi payvariousfees buyallkindsofgoodsetc Whilethosewhomaintainthehabitoflifelonglearningwillbenefitfromthenewtechnologies Therefore inordertoenhanceourconversationskills hereareafewsimpleruleswecanfollowtohelpusbecomeabetterlistener suchasstoppingtalkingendlessly givingyourfullattentiontothespeakerandmakinganefforttoshiftthefocusoftheconversationtotheotherperson Allinall nothingcaninsteadoflistening PartIITranslation 云南省的丽江古镇是中国著名的旅游目地之一 古镇 旅游目的地 云南省的丽江古镇 Lijiang theancienttowninYunnanProvince isoneofthefamoustraveldestinationinChina TheancienttownofLijianginYunanProvinceisoneofthefamoustraveldestinationinChina ancienttown oldtown tourist traveldestination TheancienttowninYunnanProvince 那里的生活节奏比大多数中国城市都要缓慢 Wrong ThepaceoflifethereisslowerthanmostothercitiesinChina mostotherChinesecities Right ThepaceoflifethereisslowerthanthepaceoflifeinmostotherChinesecities that 丽江到处都是美丽