2017_2018学年高中英语Unit3AhealthylifeSectionⅤWriting_回复建议信教学案新人教版.docx

Unit 3 A healthy life Section Writing-回复建议信回复建议信是针对对方提出的问题或困惑，有针对性地提出自己的建议的一种书信文体。一、基本结构首先，要分析问题，表明自己的观点；其次，针对问题提出建议，并说明原因；最后，提出期望，希望收信者积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文。二、注意事项提出个人的建议时，应注意以下两点：1态度谦恭理智：不管对方提出的问题对自己有无实际价值、态度是否中肯，都要认真对待、理智分析，并对对方提出的问题给出合理的解释以及实际有效的解决方法。2简明扼要，以理服人：针对问题提出解决方法时，一定要语气柔和、态度明确、逻辑分明、重点突出，让对方感到“纳而有因，拒而有理”。三、增分佳句(一)开头常用句式引出话题I am sorry you have had so much trouble in .You have asked for my advice on .and I will try to make some suggestions.(二)主体常用句式提出建议In my opinion, it would be wise for you to take the following action.First of all, .; Meanwhile, .; In addition, .Its important for you to . In the first place, I would also recommend a balanced diet.Why not drink a little, exercise, stop smoking and eat more fruit?(三)结尾常用句式提出期望Cheer up！Your troubles will soon be over.Where there is a will, there is a way.Dont lose heart, whatever happens.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Please let me know if I can help further.题目要求假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John写信询问你关于如何过低碳生活的有关情况。请根据以下要点写一封回信，建议他也过低碳生活。1陈述理由：为什么要过低碳生活？(环境质量日益恶化等)2如何过低碳生活？提出至少三条建议。(必要时才开灯；让电器按节能方式运转；骑自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类等)参考词汇：过低碳生活：live a lowcarbon life第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为回复建议信；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，点出写建议信的原因。第二部分，三条具体可行的建议：正确使用电器；首选公交车或自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类。第三部分，提出希望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1go_from_bad_to_worse日益恶化2a_good_way_to_do_. 一种做的好方法3carry_out 执行4turn_on_the_lights开灯5keep_._working让运转6be_ones_first_choice是某人的首选7do_some_shopping/shop购物8be_possible有可能第三步：由词扩句雏形现1过低碳生活是减少温室气体(greenhouse gases)排放(emission)的一种好方法。(动名词作主语；主系表结构)Living_a_lowcarbon_life_is_a_good_way_to_reduce_the_emission_of_greenhouse_gases.2我将用以下几种方法执行我的计划。(主谓状结构)I_shall_carry_out_my_plan_in_the_following_ways.3只有在必要时，我才会开灯。(主谓状结构；when省略句)I_shall_only_turn_on_the_lights_only_when_necessary.4为了节省能源，我将让冰箱和空调以低碳模式(mode)运转。(keep宾语宾语补足语)I_shall_keep_the_refrigerator_and_air_conditioners_working_in_the_lowcarbon_mode_to_save_energy.5公交车或自行车将是我的首选。(主系表结构)The_bus_or_bicycle_will_be_my_first_choice.6当我购物时，我将限制使用塑料袋。(when省略句；主谓宾结构)When_shopping,_I_will_limit_the_use_of_plastic_bags.7只要有可能，我将把垃圾分成非循环类(nonrecyclable)和循环类(recyclable)。(whenever省略句；主谓宾结构)Whenever_possible,_I_will_separate_my_rubbish_into_nonrecyclable_and_recyclable_waste.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用as引导的原因状语从句连接句1和句2As_living_a_lowcarbon_life_is_a_good_way_to_reduce_the_emission_of_greenhouse_gases,_I_shall_carry_out_my_plan_in_the_following_ways.2用并列连词and连接句3和句4I_shall_only_turn_on_the_lights_only_when_necessary_and_keep_the_refrigerator_and_air_conditioners_working_in_the_lowcarbon_mode_to_save_energy.3用not only . but also .合并句6和句7Not_only_will_I_limit_the_use_of_plastic_bags_when_shopping,_but_also_I_will_separate_my_rubbish_into_nonrecyclable_and_recyclable_waste_whenever_possible.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_John，You_have_asked_for_my_advice_on_how_to_live_a_lowcarbon_life_and_I_will_try_to_make_some_suggestions.With_the_environmental_pollution_going_from_bad_to_worse,_I_sincerely_suggest_to_all_that_we_should_live_a_lowcarbon_life_today.As_living_a_lowcarbon_life_is_a_good_way_to_reduce_the_emission_of_greenhouse_gases,_I_shall_carry_out_my_plan_in_the_following_ways._To_begin_with,_I_shall_only_turn_on_the_lights_when_necessary_and_keep_the_refrigerator_and_air_conditioners_working_in_the_lowcarbon_mode_to_save_energy._Additionally,_the_bus_or_bicycle_will_be_my_first_choice._Last_but_not_least,_not_only_will_I_limit_the_use_of_