2012看图作文精美实用课件(共33张ppt)

,记叙文(narrative essays)是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体。它分为记人和记事两种，通常以看图作文或文字提示的形式出现。记叙文的几个要点为： 1. 时间、地点、人物、事件、高潮、结局这几个要素在写作时要交代清楚。 2. 人称：记叙文一般可以有第一人称和第三人称两种叙事方式：第一人称是作者以当事人的口吻，把文章中的事情以“我”的所见所闻的方式来叙述，第三人称是写作者从旁观者的角度来叙述，反映事件中的不同人的感受和见解。,3. 记叙文的线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。也可以按照地点的线索来写，即以地点的转移为顺序。 4. 重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。 5. 注意文章的完整性。 6. 所用的时态通常为一般过去时。,写好记叙文的基本要领： 1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。,2. 突出中心，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详细描述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写那些次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。,3. 活用语言，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。,例1：假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意：1. 周记的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。,Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. , , , , , , .,该文章是看图作文，虽然要求写周记，但其实是记叙文，包括“我为爷爷奶奶准备出行”和“我送行”两部分内容。其中图一：查询信息(train tickets, weather, hotel)；图二：买票(buy tickets)；图三：准备行装(package)；图四：送行(see off)；图一、二、三都是并列关系，主题是旅游前的准备阶段，三幅图没有轻重之分，所占篇幅比例相当。图四是最后的送别阶段 ，因为文章末尾要有点睛之笔 ，所以考,生可以写送别感受，对爷爷奶奶的祝福，也可以是自己的成长和收获。从文章立意可知：作文和90后的学生特点相联系，积极引导高中学生培养独立性，增加实践能力，并要照顾体谅长辈，富有鲜明的时代特色。另外文章采用了第一人称和一般过去时。,Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.,After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.,看图作文,假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经 历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。,今天下午我去看电影.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,I went to the cinema this afternoon.I went to see a film this afternoon.,On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.,我捡起箱子,并想骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.,I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.,I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.,The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.,I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.,May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver wouldnt accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did.,一，合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,二，合并为复合句,三，把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,四，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,五，注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,六. 适当的联想与发挥。,I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.,On my way to the cinema this afternoon, I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.,I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.,After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me.,Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up, the man was riding so far away that he couldnt hear me.,I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up, however, he was riding too fast to hear me.,Suddenly, I had an idea./ I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man./ I caught up with him at last.,Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I held out for a taxi and got into it with the case. Of course, it didnt take me long to catch up with the man.,I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to catch up with the man.,I gave the case back to the man./The man took out some money to thank me./I refused.,Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely.,The driver took me the cinema.He was very moved. He didnt accept my money.,With the help of the driver, I went back to the cinema. When I was paying him, he pushed my hand away and said with a smile: “ Never will I accept your money.”,I went back to the cinema by taxi. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did. How proud I was!,请根据下面的漫画，以“What Will the Child Become”为标题，写一篇短文。要求：1词数约100，不包括已给出的开头部分。2内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己的这一现象的看法。提示：电子琴electronic piano What will the Child Become?Look at this picture,Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five. Who is the “King” of the family? The only child! He is riding his “horse” his father. What a proud“ King” he is ! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over him and cooling him with a fan. His mother is carrying his schoolbag and lots of other things for him.,What is his grandmother doing behind? She is trying hard to carry an electronic piano and a drawing- board.But what will the child become in the future? Hell think of himself more than anyone else. Hell be unable to do anything without help. Hell become no good for the world.,第六页,1. Play with water 2. Splash water here and there/ flow around on the ground,1.Pass by /walk by / go past2. Make him wet by splashing / splash him with water,Run away without / run away, leaving,1. Turn off 2. Be angry,1.Write a notice 2. save water 3. put up,1. Come back / return / get back2. Feel ashamed / be sorry,One day after school, Xiao Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there. At this moment, Xiao Nong happened to pass by. Xiao Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet. Xiao Ming ran away without turning off the tap. When Xiao Nong saw this, he went over and turned off the water. He was angry because he thinks water shouldnt be wasted. Then he went home and wrote a notice. He put it up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Xiao Nong went back and saw the notice. He felt sorry for what he had done.,昨天下午你到越秀公园游玩，刚好看到一个救人的过程。请根据下面所拍下的几幅照片，用英语写一篇报导，寄给“英文早报”。要求：1词数约100，不包括已给出的开头部分。2最后一幅照片因底片曝光，请自行补充合理的情节，使报导完整。,Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. At that time,At that time, some people were boating on the lake. Among them was a happy family. They were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was struggling and her parents cried out, “Help! Help!” It was obviously that they couldnt swim at all. From nearby a young man immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already tired out. At last he carried her to the bank. She was saved!How happy the parents were! Before they thought of thanking the young man, he had disappeared.,假设你是王林。七月二十一日是你在美国的笔友汤姆的生日。你给他寄了一盒中国的绿茶（green tea）作为生日礼物。现在，请你用英语写一封110词左右的信给他，祝贺他生日快乐，并根据下面的六幅图和提示词语详细描绘一下怎么沏茶。注意：1提示词：壶kettle 茶匙teaspoon茶壶teapot茶叶tea leaves茶杯teacup茶壶盖lid2词数100左右；3开头已为你写出。,Dear T