2012高考英语二轮复习书面表达课件_应用类之四_新闻稿

专题十七 新闻稿 新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁。掌握新闻的六要素，即：人物（who）/事件（what）/时间（when）/地点（where）/原因（why）/方式（how）。它的结构一般分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语。标题是新闻的题目，是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分，它用充足的事实表现主题。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概括性的总结，或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时，作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。 在写新闻报道时，首先注意新闻的标题要具有语言幽默风趣的特点，有较强的吸引力。同时，写作依据的材料要充分，要用事实来说话，语言力求简洁。最后，报道中要有亮点，能引人深思或能让人产生强烈的兴趣。,常用句式：In the past few years， there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in.在过去的几年里，在方面锐增/减。Nowadays， more/most important/dangerous for our society is.目前，我们社会更/最重要/危险的是Now there is a growing awareness that. 现在，人们日趋意识到It is time that we explored the truth of . 到了我们该揭露事实的时候了。Only in this way can you solve this problem.只有用这样的方法我们才能解决问题。,（2009浙江） 5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100120个词的新闻报道。1. 时间、地点、任务、活动；2. 老人们的反应；3. 简短评论。参考词汇：志愿者活动 voluntary work注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly_ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper,1. 文体信息：文体：应用文；语体：正式语体；人称：第三人称；中心大意：报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。2. 主导时态：一般过去时。3. 内容要点：简要陈述事情发生的时间、地点、任务和内容概要；陈述老人们的反应；对此次志愿者活动做出评价.4. 温馨提示：注意人称，除评论部分用第一人称外其他段落均应该用第三人称。新闻报道的必要要素不可缺少。,Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua, coming from Class Three, Grade Two, attended a voluntary activity. On May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home and visited the elderly with some flowers and fruits. They helped the elderly clean the rooms and sweep the floor. After that, they had a chat with the elderly. The elderly warmed up at the view of the sight. They said their gratitude was beyond their power of expression. They wouldnt forget this day forever. As the result of the efforts of the two volunteers, the elderly felt the warm sun shining on them. At the same time, Li Yue and Zhang Hua got a kick out of it. They said they would do it like this more in the near future. We should learn from them. If so, our world will become more beautiful. By Chen Jie, School Newspaper,该文符合新闻写作格式，思路清晰，要点齐全。用了大量的高级词汇和高级句式，如：warm up 温暖起来；at the view of 一看到；beyond their power of expression 无法言表；as the result of 由于；get a kick out of 获得乐趣；分词作定语（Li Yue and Zhang Hua, coming from Class Three, Grade Two, attended a voluntary activity.），省略句（If so, our world will become more beautiful.），状语从句等的运用，彰显了作者深厚的语言功底。如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：1. On May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home and visited the elderly.改为It was on May Day that they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home with some flowers and fruits where their voluntary work left people a deep impression.2. They helped the elderly clean the rooms and sweep the floor. 改为 The moment they arrived, they made use of every minute to do what they can, such as cleaning the rooms and sweeping the floor.,Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua are student volunteers coming from Class 3, Grade 2 at the senior middle school. One May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home to attend the elderly. They bought lots of fruits and beautiful flowers for the elderly. As soon as they got to The Sunshine Nursing Home, they began to clean the floor and tidy the rooms. At the same time, they had a chat with the elderly, laughing filled with the room. The elderly were so happy that their words couldnt convey their gratitude to them. Thanks to the two volunteers, they cant feel lonely any longer. Dear friends, no one can keep young forever, we will get old one day, so lets take more attention to the elderly. Never let them feel lonely and then our society will be full of happiness！ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper,报道问题及提出解决办法1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face the problem.A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, .(说明的现状)Second, .(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, .(解决方法一). For another.(解决方法二). Finally, .(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that.(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because.(带来的好处).,请根据下面所提示的信息,写一篇关于一起交通事故的报道。注意:1. 词数:100左右（标题已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 内容要连贯,不能逐句翻译； 3. 自己的见解、感受（写一两句话）；,One possible version:A Serious Traffic Accident Yesterday, a serious accident happened at the second turning of Central Street. It is said that the driver drank too much before driving. As a result, he began to feel dizzy and gradually he lost control of the truck. Unfortunately, the truck crashed into a small car, which killed four people and hurt some people. The accident had a bad influence on the city. The downtown area traffic had to be cut off for an hour. To make matters