英语写作训练(上课)PPT课件

ClassPreparation 全力投入会使你与众不同 重视课堂 全神贯注 你一定能做的更好 请拿出你的英语写作训练学案 课堂笔记本 双色笔 激情第一 我是最棒的 我的课堂我的舞台 我的课堂我的舞台 英语写作训练 EnglishWritingPractice 2013 10 16 Tasks Demands Languageaim howtowriteanessay howtowriteawholesentence 句子构建 2 Abilityaim Groupcooperationandexploringthemysteryofwriting 合作探究 学会总结 自主学习 Self work 任务 ReadtheSelf workpaperandcompletethesetasks Agoodessayismadeupof parts Agoodparagraphshouldcontain 材料一 二 Whichisthetopicsentence 材料三 Whichlinkingwordscanyoufind three atopicsentenceandsupportingsentences linkingwords variedsentencepatterns Agoodessayisusuallymadeupof 1 Topicparagraph 主题段 SupportingParagraph Point12 SupportingParagraph Point2 扩展段 SupportingParagraph Point33 Concludingparagraph 结论段 Body supportingideas Conclusion Introduction topic Tomanystudents schoollifeisboringandtiring However Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful Topicsentence 主题句 Supportingsentences 扩展句 材料一 Therearedifferentkindsofbee Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall topicsentence Whereveryougoinourschool youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater 材料二 justlikeagarden Ourschoolis justlikeagarden Ourschoolis topicsentence 材料三 IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons Firstofall Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries Secondly Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet Ithasbecomeanon linelanguage Thirdly Englishalsoplaysanimportantroleintoday sbusinessworld Lastly 时间先后 first then later intheend eventually sincethen 转折关系 but however onthecontrary nevertheless 因果关系 because since as thanksto owingto asaresultof forthereasonthat 让步关系 although evenif though though inspiteofthefactthat 正确使用有关连接词 linkingwords 递进关系 条件关系 if unless aslongas onconditionthat 表列举 forexample instance take forexample that stosay inotherwords asfollows 表总结 inshort inbrief inconclusion inaword onthewhole ashasbeenstatedabove allinall 正确使用有关连接词 linkingwords what smore inaddition furthermore foronething foranotherthing 丰富的句式 常用到的句型结构 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 e g Whatakindboyheis Howdisappointedhewas 感叹句 强调句 e g Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible e g Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem Therecomesthepolicecar Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman e g Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus Cometomeifnecessary e g Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand 倒装句 省略句 with结构 e g Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation Let scometothemainteachingbuilding atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary 定语从句 e g That swhatIshoulddo Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent 各种名词性从句 e g Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Themomentwereachedthefarm wegotdowntoharvesting Solongasweworkharderatourlessons we llcatchupsoonerorlater 各种状语从句 1 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 使用名词性从句 2 ThoughI mweak I llmaketheeffort 使用倒装句 3 Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper 使用强调句型 4 Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp 用虚拟语气 surpriseshimis thelittlegirlknowssomanythings Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇 Weak Iam I llmaketheeffort notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper he whathadhappened I thephysicsexam yourhelp Line1 1林前钰 自主学习高效展示 What that as though Itwas that knew wouldn t havepassed without 5 Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 使用过去分词 6 Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool 使用V ing形式 7 Iwon tbelievewhathesays nomatterwhat状语从句 8 Ifyoustudyhard youwillmakerapidprogress 祈使句 and bymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab and theywentbacktoschool Iwon tbelieve Studyhard you llmakerapidprogress Line2 1张珂 Followed Singing laughing Nomatterwhathesays and 9 HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad 使用倒装句 10 Weallthinkheisagreatman thinkhighlyof 11 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure turnout 12 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited themore themore Nosooner backfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad Weall him Theplan afailure hespoke hefelt Line8 1王鑫 Comment Line6 2刘琦 hadhe come thinkhighlyof 变式训练 He byus isof highlythought turnedout tobe Themore themoreexcited vi Summary 自主学习总结 Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns 自主学习评价 Goodafternoon everyone Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife 1 2 theyhopetolooksmartandspecial 3 theywanttowinothers admirationandrespect Inaddition itmakesthemfeelcool 4 westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife 5 itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool 6 itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable Thankyouforlistening ThereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB FirstlyC LastbutnotleastD What smoreE AsfarasIamconcernedF Secondly A B C D E F 进一步总结 写作训练的思路 写一完整的句子 句子的完整句子的连贯句子的简洁句子的多样化 主题句 扩展句 结论句 设计一个段落 CooperationPractice 合作探究练习 合作探究一 Exercise一1 判断正误 Paper3 2 翻译简单句 3 翻译并列句 4 判断从句 5 改正句子 高效展示一 Comment1 L3 1秦 Comment2 L2 3臧 写一个完整的句子 1 这几句是正确的句子吗 如果你认为有误 该怎么改 1 Themeetingwilluntil3 00 2 Workhard youwillsucceed 3 Ihaveabrother whoisadoctor last and 4 Thereareonly4studentsattendclass who attending Line6 1倪雪 重点特别强调 3 翻译下面的并列句 4 HanHuisingwell shedanceswell 5 Imeantto youyesterday butyouwerenotinyouroffice 或I totellyouyesterday butyouwerenotinyouroffice Notonlydoes butalso havetold hadmeant 1 Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion 2 ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday 3 That swhattheyshoulddo 4 WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain 5 ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor 6 Astimewenton Einstein stheoryprovedtobecorrect 主语从句 宾语从句 表语从句 同位语从句 定语从句 状语从句 4 判断下面句子含有那种从句 L5 2任云洋 1 Thereareforty fivestudentsinourclass one thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries 1 Thereareforty fivestudentsinourclass one thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries 2 Thereareforty fivestudentsinourclass one thirdof arefromnearbycountries 5 改正下面句子 使之成为正确的一句话 and whom L7 3禚焕发 2 Itwasraininghard theycouldnotworkinthefield 1 Itwasraininghard theycouldnotworkinthefield 2 Itwasraining hard theycouldnotworkinthefield 3 Theycouldnotworkinthefield itwasraininghard 4 itwasraininghard theycouldnotworkinthefield so so that because As 3 Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom hecarriedabagofbookswithhim 1 Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom hecarriedabagofbookswithhim 2 Theprofessor carriedabagofbooks walkedintotheclassroom 3 Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom abagofbookswithhim ing 5 Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom abagofbooks prep and who carrying with 合作探究二 小组快速讨论 做出决定 Exercise二 句子连贯 Exercise三 句子简洁 Exercise四 设计段落 高效展示二 二 句子的连贯 Faulty Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds 1 Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes 2 Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds 前后的一致 对等 平衡 Group1 Attention 连贯性的要求是 句子前后之间要有照应 有衔接 思想的表达应该有序 清楚 句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑 不能造成歧义或矛盾 三 句子的简洁 1 Doyouknowthegirlwhoisdressedinred 2 Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroomandhecarriedabagofbookswithhim 3 Themanwhoisstandingbythewindowisourteacher 4 Wedidn tknowhertelephonenumber sowecouldn tgetintouchwithher 5 JohnsonlookedlikeamanwhowaswantedinLosAngelesforrobbery 6 Wefinallyreachedhomeat10pm andweweretiredandhungry carrying Notknowing Group2 四 段落设计 1 根据全段内容拟定一个主题句