高考读后续写技能点拨ppt课件.ppt

ContinuationWriting 读后续写 1 读后续写 提供一篇350词以内的材料 要求考生依据材料内容 所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文 满分25分 新高考考试说明 2 评分原则 本题总分为25分 分5个档次给分 3 高融洽度 tone 情节基调 languagecharacteristics 语言特征 content 内容 plotdevelopment W H 4 Step1 Readforbasicinformation 1 tone 情节基调 AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday funny ahappyending 5 Step1 Readforbasicinformation 2 Languagecharacteristics 语言特征 AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday Itlookslikeyou vegotaproblem Arthursaid I mafraidso I minabighurryandIcan tstartmycar Storynarration 故事旁白 Conversation directspeech 直接引语 simple 简单 6 Step1 Readforbasicinformation 2 Languagecharacteristics vivid 生动 Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections Arthur stillcarryingthesuitcase turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim 7 Step1 Readforbasicinformation oneday alongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank Arthur ayoungman Arthurhelpedayoungmancarryasuitcasebutmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery 3 content 内容 plotdevelopment W H Howwillthestorydevelop When Where Who What How PassageAmainlytells Oneday ArthurhelpedayoungmancarryasuitcaseonParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank butmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery 8 Step2 Readforplotdevelopmentclues 情节发展线索 Findoutthekeyclues 线索 basedonthebeginnings Para1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Para2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur isinsidethesuitcase What 9 Step3 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Inagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop tone funny ahappyending money otherthings 10 Languagecharacteristics Tipsfordraftingacontinuation 起草续篇 simple 简单 vivid 生动 Polishandcohere 润色衔接 discoursemarks 衔接语 Content includetheunderlinedwords 5 11 Para 1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Para 2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur Step4 Draftacontinuation 起草续篇 12 融洽度高 tone 情节基调 languagecharacteristics 语言特征 content 内容 plotdevelopment W H 13 Sharingyourversion Step5 Checkandcopyyourversion 检查誊写 14 Possibleversion1 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Arthurinstantlyrealizedthattheyoungmanmightbethebankthief Soheranfaster Themomenthestoppedataxi hejumpedinwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriver PleasehurrytothePoliceStation Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief Thedriverfollowedhimandracedaway 15 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurdirectlywentinandtoldthepolicewhathehappenedtohim Obviously thepolicehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery AsArthurexpected theyfoundalargesumofmoneyinsideafteropeningthesuitcase ThentheyaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungman Later withthehelpofArthur thepolicesuccessfullycaughttherobber BoththebankandthepolicethankedArthuralot 151words Possibleversion1 16 Possibleversion2 Ashewasrunning Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind Stop stop Suddenly realizinghehimselfmightbemisunderstoodasthebankrobber Arthurranfasteruntilhestoppedataxi Hegotintoitwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriverinonebreath Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief PleasehurrytothePoliceStation FollowingArthur thetaxiracedaway 17 Possibleversion2 ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurrushedintotheoffice JustashewasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankonParkAvenue Arthurheardavoiceoutside Help Help Tohissurprise itwastheyoungman HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi Itturnedoutthatinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothesandtheyoungmanwasinnocent Embarrassed Arthurapologizedtohim butthepolicementhankedhimanyway 153words 18 Howtowriteacontinuation 1 Readforbasicinformation 2 Readforplotdevelopmentclues 3 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment 4 Draftacontinuation 5 Checkandcopyyourversion tone languagecharacteristics content W H thebeginning theclues theunderlinedwords 19 Givecommentsonyourdeskmate scontinuationacco