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走进2016高考读后续写 Continuationwritingin2016CollegeEntranceExamination 对第五档 21 25 作文的描述 与所给短文融洽度高 与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理 内容丰富 应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富 准确 可能有些许错误 但完全不影响意义表达 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使所续写短文结构紧凑 Tipsforwriting 1 Thoroughreading2 Creativeplotting 构思 3 Swiftdrafting4 Carefulpolishing5 Neatcopying Step1 ThoroughReading 1 Readthearticlecarefullyandanalyzethe5elements when where who what how When Who Where What how oneweekend JaneandherhusbandTom intheforest Step1 ThoroughReading Jane withTomand awayto abetterspot Unfortunately shewas ontheway She forhelpandkept untilshewassotired Afteranight srest Jane atthebreakofthedayand thesoundtoastream gettingsomethingtoeat What how quarrelled walked find lost cried moving rose followed 1 Readthearticlecarefullyandanalyzethe5elements when where who what how Step1 ThoroughReading 1 Readthearticlecarefullyandanalyzethe5elements when where who what how What how Asshepickedherwayalongthestream Jane ahelicopterandanother soshe heryellowblouse thatsheshouldgoand themifthehelicopterscomeback heard tookoff thinking flag Step1 ThoroughReading Theplotoforiginalarticle quarrelled walkedaway gotlost savedherself missedherhusband savedherselfagain helicopterappearedandflewaway Step1 ThoroughReading 2 Readandpayattentiontothefeelingofthecharacterindifferentparagraphs Para1 Para2 4 Para5 Para6 angry fearful regretful tired helpless happy stronger hopeful Step2 Creativeplotting Attention Beingcreativedoesn tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated logic creativity Step2 Creativeplotting Paragraph1 Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain Paragraph2 ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup Step2 Creativeplotting Useover5ofthefollowingwords JaneTomlakewalkedclimbedatadistancestreamtohergreatjoyhelicopteryellowblouse people action feeling object place Step3 Swiftdrafting 1 Whennomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain what sJane sfeelingandwhat sheraction 2 WhathappenedwhenJanewakeupatdaybreak helicopter yellowblouse Tom atadistance lake Jane tohergreatjoy walked climbed stream Step4 Carefulpolishing Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain AllofJane shopesankintodarknessduetoonlytheemptyvalleyrepliedtoheryellowblousewithbirds soundsatadistance Whentheprettybeautifulmemoryflashedbackinhermind Janefeltreallyregrettowalkawayandhereyeswerefilledwithtearsshininglikeastream Shetakesomeoftheberries whichwastheonlyonecansupportherforawhile thenshefellasleepwithupset ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup Sheheardafamiliarsoundcallinghername whenshefoundshewassurroundedbytrees Sheyelledloudlyandrushedintothedirectionwherethesoundcame assoonasshefiguredoutthatTomwasfindingher TomheardJane svoice asshewasappearedinhersight hedashedtoherandhuggedhertightlywithouthesitation Bothofthemweresurvivedbyahelicopterthatfoundthemintime Paragraph1 Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight Althoughshefeltalittlesad shedidn tgetfearful ShethoughtaboutTom Hemusthavecalledforthosehelicopters Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom SampleOne Paragraph2 ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter Fortunately shesawahugeflatrockinanopenareaatadistance Sherushedtotherock climbedontoitandwaited Tohergreatjoy thehelicopterappearedagain Theneareritgot themoresheflaggedtheyellowblouse Luckily thehelicopterdidn tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane Shebrokedownandburstintotears Paragraph1 Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain Janetriedtofindshelterfromthenightcold Butunfortunately sheslippedoverandbrokeherleg Withtheextremepain Janemanagedtomakeherwaytoarockforshelter Undertherock Janestayedwideawake knowingshemightnotbeabletogettothelakewithabrokenleg Don tbeafraid Tommustbesearchingforme Andthehelicopterwillcomebacktomorrow shethoughttoherself Afterquiteawhile Janefellasleep SampleTwo Paragraph2 ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup Shestruggledtoherfeetandheadedforthestream Afterhavingsomeberriesandstreamwater Janewalkedslowlytoanopenareatowaitforherrescue Tohergreatjoy shesoonheardthehelicopter Janemadlywavedheryellowblousewhenitcameintosight Sadly thehelicopterfliedawayagain However sooncametherescueteam togetherwithTom whohadfoundJane slocationfromthehelicopter Janewassaved SampleTwo Step5 Neatcopying Task Assessyourpartner scomposition 1 Readandanalyzetheoriginalarticlecarefully 2 Makefulluseofthefirstsentenceinthet