2014-10-14写作连接词

Writing 1 词汇 句型 高级 和语法多样化 较复杂 1 覆盖了所有的要点2 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑4 语言得体 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章 语言地道 规范 TVandwebsitearepopularmedia Theyhavesomethingincommon Bothofthemmakemoneyfromads Websitesalsohavedifferentsections Youmaychoosetheoneyouaremostinterestedin Theyaredifferentinmanyways MovingpicturesareshownonTVwithsoundandinterpretation Itmakesyoufeelthatyouarejustonthespot Theprogramschangeeveryday ProfessionalTVreportersdothereportforTV Someinformationonwebsiteschangeallthetime Notallofitissoupdated Everybodycanwritearticlesforwebsitesratherthanprofessionalreporters Everymediumhasitsownfeatures Itishardtosaywhichisbetter TVandwebsite TVandwebsite BothTVandwebsitearepopularmedia Theyhavesomethingincommon Bothofthemmakemoneyfromads SimilartoTV websitesalsohavedifferentsections sothatyoumaychoosetheoneyouaremostinterestedin However theyaredifferentinmanyways Aboveall movingpicturesareshownonTVwithsoundandinterpretation whichmakesyoufeelasifyouarejustonthespot Then 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