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实用英语写作网络教程 继续教育学院制作 主讲 戚元方 第二讲阐述性议论文 第三讲对比性议论文 第五讲应用文写作 第四讲图表写作 第一讲解释性议论文 英语写作讲座目录 第六讲论文写作概述 写作 3 第四讲 图表写作 主讲 戚元方 图表写作写作图表写作是要求写作者根据图表所给出的信息描述图表的变化及此变化的原因和发展趋势等 通常图表写作有三种形式 1 看图说话题 考研图表写作 2 客观描述题 雅思第一部分写作 3 主观描述题 四六级等国内图表写作 今天 我们主要讲的是第三种图表写作的形式 图表写作 拔苗助长 图表写作 看图说话题 图表写作 客观描述题 Directions ThechartshowstypicalspendingpatternsforforeignstudentstakingEnglishlanguagecoursesinschoolsinLondon Writeanessayonthebasisofthefollowingchartwithnolessthan150words ThepiechartrevealstypicalspendingpatternsforforeignstudentstakingEnglishlanguagecoursesinschoolsinLondon Theaverageexpensecanbedividedveryroughlyintothirds thefirstthirdbeingspentonrentandfood thesecondonschoolfeesandthelastdividedbetweenentertainment travel clothesandstudymaterials Thetotalexpenditureforinternationalstudentsisshowntobe300poundsperweek 图表写作 Fromtheinformationshown itcanbeseenthatrentandfoodaccountsforexactlyathirdofthetotalamountspentbystudents amountingto100poundsperweek ThisisthebiggestsingleexpenseforstudentsinLondon Thesecondgreatestexpenseisschoolfees theaveragebeing90poundsperweek EntertainmentstandsforafifthofthetotalspendingforstudentsinLondon andtheremainingmoney 50pounds isusedtotravelontheundergroundandbuyclothesandstudymaterials 153words 图表写作 Directions Writeanessay CollegeEnglishTest basedonthefollowingchartwithnolessthan150words 简单描述图表的变化说明变化的原因预测未来的发展 图表写作01 主观描述题 Theperiod1990 2010witnessedarapidincreaseinthenumberofcandidatesandpassersinCollegeEnglishTest CET Ascanbeseenfromthegraph in1990only300 000studentssatforthetestwhilein2010thisnumberroseto 3600 000 Meanwhilethepassersalsoincreasedfrom31 to65 overthesameperiod 图表写作 现象 Topicsentence Supportingsentence1 Supportingsentence2 图表写作表示现象的句型 Theperiod1995 2009witnessed saw eyed asteadyincrease decrease inthenumberof inpercentageof intermsof Ascanbeseenfromthegraph in1995 whilein2009 Thechartgivessomeinformationaboutthesteadyincreaseinthepercentageof inabigcityofChinaovertheperiodbetween1995and2009 Obviously in1995 whilein2009 Thegraphshows reveals unveils illustrates thesteadyincreaseintermsof inabigcityofChinabetween1995and2009 Intheyearsbetween1995and2009 Meanwhile overthesameperiod TheboomofCETcanbeaccountedforbyacoupleoffactors Foronething thetestisgettingincreasinglypopularwithcollegestudentssinceitcangenerallyevaluatetheirEnglishcompetency Foranother learningandteachinghavebeengreatlyimproved Aboveall thecertificateofCETisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantforajobprospect Manycompaniesconsideritasthepre requirementforrecruitment 图表写作 原因 Topicsentence Reason1 Reason2 Reason3 Supportingsentence ThereforethepopularityofCET theimprovementoflearningandteachingandtheimportanceofitscertificatewillattractmorecandidates Thereisnodoubtmorestudentswilltakeandpassthistest 160words Conclusion 图表写作 趋势 ThetableThebarchartThepiechartThelinechartTheflowchartThegraph freshwater usedwater sewageplant solidwaste fertilizer 图表写作 increase rise growslowly缓慢地gradually逐步地decrease fall dropsteadily稳步地considerably比较大地rapidly快速地dramatically惊人地sharply飞快地remarkably较大地drastically惊人地greatly很大地soar 快速上升 inthenumberof 数量 surge 迅速上升 inthepercentageof 百分比 rock 飞快上升 intermsof 就什么来说 图表写作 1 increase rise grow jump to上升到 risefrom20 in2000to45 in2005 rosefrom20 to45 overthesameperiod riseby25 上升了 fromonetotwothirds从三分之一到三分之二 twiceasmany much as二倍2 decrease drop fall decline to by 下降 到 了 fluctuate riseandfall upsanddowns 波动 图表写作 approximatelyabout大约aroundroughlyonly仅仅upto高达nearly几乎over morethan 超过under lessthan 不到 accountfor standfor occupy makeup 占while incontrast ontheotherhand而then onwards afterwards然后comparedwith比reachthepeak达到最高点hitthebottom降到最低点 图表写作 图表写作02 根据图表描述该市住房产权的变化2 分析产生这些变化的原因3 说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响 Direction Writeacompositionentitled ChangesoftheOwnershipofHouses basedonthefollowingchartandoutlinesgiveninChinesewithnolessthan150words year 199020002010 Theperiod1990 2010sawtheriseandfallintheownershipofhousesinabigcity Ascanbeseenfromthegraph thepercentageofstate ownedhousesinthiscitydroppedconsiderablyfrom75 in1990to20 in2010whilethecorrespondingfiguresforprivatehousesrosedramatically from25 to80 overthesameperiod 59words 图表写作 现象 Thefluctuationintheownershipofhousescanbeaccountedforbyacoupleoffactors First theboomoftheurbaneconomyhasresultedintheincreaseoffamilyincomeandtheimprovementoffamilyeconomicconditionshasledtothechangesofpeople sminds Today theconceptof buynowandpaylate hasbeenwidelyaccepted whichhasremarkablypromotedthepurchaseofprivatehouses Besides governmenthasimplementedaseriesofnewpolicieswhichprovideresidentswithsubsidiesandloanstoencouragetheirrealestateinvestment Thesepoliciesmakeiteasierforresidentstobuytheirownhouses 图表写作 原因 Thechangeintheownershipofhouseshasasignificantimpactonbothsocietyandindividuals Foronething theygetthecountrytobuyandinreturngiveimpetustothefurtherdevelopmentofoureconomy Foranother residentswillimprovetheirlivingconditionsandenjoyabetterlife Inaword theyaretheevidenceofbothrisinglivingstandardandbettereconomy 图表写作 影响 图表写作框架 Directions Writeanessay TheChangesinEnergyDemandandEnergyAvailable basedonthefollowingchartwithnolessthan150words 简单描述图表趋势说明变化的原因对节约能源提出建议 Theperiod1985 2005witnessed saw eyed theriseandfallintermsofenergydemandandenergyavailable Ascanbeseenfromthechart theenergydemandincreaseddrasticallyfrom5units 5billion in1985toover7unitsin2005whileenergyavailabledroppedconsiderablyfrom3 5unitstoalittleover2unitsoverthesameperiod Thechangesinenergydemandandenergyavailablecanbeaccountedforbyacoupleoffactors Foronething Foranother Aboveall Toreversethistrendandtosaveenergyisontheagendatoanygovernment Onewayweshouldtakeintoaccountis self denial Anotherwaytobeconsideredis efficiency Thebestwaytosaveenergyrelieson market 120words 图表写作框架 Direction Writeacompositionentitled BoomofAdultEducation basedonthefollowingchartandoutlinesgiveninChinesewithnolessthan150words 请描述图表中成人教育的变化2 分析导致该变化的原因3 谈谈你对成人教育的看法 图表写作03 Thebarchartunveilsthatthenumberofcontinuingeducationparticipantshaskeptincreasingfrom1992to2007inXcity In1992therewereonly200 000peopletakingpartinthecontinuingeducationwhilein2007this 图表写作 现象 figuresurgedto2 100 000 Itcanbeseeneasilythatcontinuingeducationisgainingmoreandmorepopularity Theboominadulteducationcanbeexplainedbyanumberoffactors Firstly duringtheworkmanypeoplebegintorealizewhattheyhavelearnedinschoolsisfarfromenough Sotheyturntofurthereducationtogainmoreknowledgeandskills Besides asscienceandtechnologyisdevelopingverysofast adultsaftergraduationhavetorefreshthemselves Moreover someseekahigherdegreebecauseinmodernsocietythosewithoutbachelor sdegreesorabovearelesscompetitive 图表写作 原因 Personally itisquitepositiveforpeopletopursuefurtherstudyinadulteducation Itprovideson the jobpeoplewithchancestogetadvanceddegreesandgainmoreknowledge Thereisnodoubt asoursocietydevelops moreandmorepeoplewillcontinuetheirstudyinthefuture 图表写作 观点 54 27 15 4 Employment postgraduate OverseasStudy Others Directions WriteacompositiononthetopicChoicesafterGraduation Youshouldwriteatleast150words andbaseyourcompositiononthechartandtheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow 1 根据下图描述某高校近两年 2009 2010 毕业生去向分布情况2 分析这样分布的原因3 你的看法 图表写作04 Thechartrevealsthechoicesongraduationinauniversityintheyears2009and2010 Thestudentswhofoundjobsaccountedforoverhalf Incontrast studentswhopursuedtheirfurtherstudyeitherathomeandabroadtookup27 and15 respectively Only4 ofthemremainedundecided Indeed thisphenomenonisnotuncommoninotheruniversities 图表写作 Thefollowingfactorscanaccountforthechoicesofgraduates First withtheextensionofuniversityadmission collegegraduatesarefacingaheavyemploymentpressure whichforcesthemtofindanotherwayout Besides somestudentsarekeenlyinterestedintheirmajorsanduniversityisagoodplacetodomoreresearchandstudy Iftheystayhereforanothercoupleofyears theywillsurelygetfurtherinsightsintothefieldwheretheystudy Moreover withseveralmoreyearsinschool theywillbebetter educatedpeopleandofcourseitwillbeeasierforthemtofindmoresatisfactoryjobs 图表写作 原因 Frommypointofview one schoiceongraduationshouldbebasedonhisindividualcondition Thoughtakingthepostgraduateentranceexamorgoingabroadforfurtherstudyisagoodchoice itisnotnecessarilytrueofeveryone becauseitmightinvolvemanyfactors suchasyourfuturecareerdirectionandyoureconomiccondition Therefore weshouldtakeafullaccountbeforewemakeourdecisions 图表写作 观点 ReasonsforjobaccordingtoageofpeopleinXcityin2008 ForsurvivalForinterest Directions Writeanessayonthebasisofthefollowingchartwithnolessthan150words 简单描述图表的变化说明变化的原因3 谈谈你对此变化的看法 图表写作05 Thechartshows reveals unveils demonstrates illustrates thereasonsforworkbasedontheageofpeopleinXcityin2008 Obviously thenumberofpeoplewhoworkforsurvivalwasdecliningastheyweregettingoldwhilethosewhoworkforinterestwasincreasingremarkablywhentheygetmatured 图表写作 现象 Thechangeinworkattitudescanbeaccountedforbyacoupleoffactors Whenpeoplearefreshoutofschoolandentersociety findingacareertobefinanciallyindependentisthefirsttasktothemsincesurvivalalwayshasitspriority Later astheygetmatured peoplecometorealizethereissomethingmoreimportantthansurvival Itisnottheyearsinyourlife butthelifeinyouryearsthatcounts Therefore peopleingrowingnumberhaverecognizedthattofindinterestinajobismoreimportantthansurvival 图表写作 原因 Ofcourseitisnaturalforsomepeopletoworkforsurvivalbecausetheneedtosurvivealwayscomesfirstbutthisisthelowerlevelneed Whatpeopleshouldseekisthehigherlevelneedandinterestinwhatyouaredoingcanmeetthisneed Inordertomakeourlifemoreenjoyable itisadvisableforpeopletoworkforinterest 图表写作 观点 简要描写表格并得出结论 2 分析老龄化社会的原因 3 如何帮助老年人 NumberofSeniorCitizensinOurCountry Directions writeanessayonthebasisofthefollowingchartwithnolessthan150words 图表写作06 Thetablegivessomeinformationaboutthenumberofseniorcitizensinourcountry Ascanbeseenfromthetable thenumberofelderlypeoplewillincreasefrom132millionin2003to200millionin2015 andthento400millionin2050 Obviouslyourcountryissteppingintotheeraoftheso called agingsociety 图表写作 现象 Acoupleoffactorsaccountforthisagingsociety Onereasonforthisisthattherisinglivingstandardandtheimprovementofhealthcaremakepeoplelivelongerthaneverbefore Physicalexerciseorcolorfullifecanbeanotherreasonfortheirlonglifespan Themajorreasonisthattheeducationinhygienehelpspeopleknowhowtoprotectthemselvesandbecomehealthy 图表写作 原因 Tohelptheoldpeople thechieftaskliesintakingcareofthemandhelpingthemtakecareofthemselves Aseveryonewillbeoldsomedayinthefuture allthemembersinthesocietyshouldjointheirhandsincreatingafavorableenvironmentfortheoldpeople Theoldpeoplethemselvesshouldneverstoppursuingwhatevertheyviewasimportantinlifesince Itisnottheyearsinyourlife butthelifeinyouryearsthatcounts 图表写作 建议 10 连接词是否用得合适 例1a Becausesomecollegegraduatescouldnotfindabetterjob sotheydecidedtocontinuetheirstudyforaseconddegree b Assomecollegegraduatescouldnotfindabetterjob theydecidedtocontinuetheirstudyforaseconddegree 汉语可以说 因为 所以 但英语不能连用 because so 例2a Althoughanopportunityisrare butwemustbereadytoseizeit b Althoughanopportunityisrare wemustbereadytoseiz