非谓语动词在写作中的运用-公开课ppt课件.ppt

Welcometoourclass Non finiteVerbsinWriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用 1 1 Itisapopularrealityshow 真人秀 inChina 2 FiveStar dadstaketheiryoungchildrenonanovernighttripwithoutthecompanyofmoms 3 Ithaswonhighratings 收视 sinceitwasbroadcastonOct11 Sharing Guessing Doyouknowwhatitis 2 WatchingthisTVshow wehadalotoffun Howmanyactorsarethereintheshow Whoarethey 3 爸爸 郭涛儿子 郭子睿 石头 爸爸 田亮女儿 田雨橙 Cindy 爸爸 王岳伦女儿 王诗龄 Angela 爸爸 张亮儿子 张悦轩 天天 爸爸 林志颖儿子 小小志 Kimi 4 RECDoyouremembersomeunforgettablemoments 5 Task1 MakingsentencesaccordingtokeywordsUsenon finitetodescribethesepictures 连词成句 正确运用分词作状语 6 1 SeeingXiaoHuangtakenaway Kimifeltheart broken 1 Kimi seeXiaoHuangtakenaway feelheart broken 7 2 Givenmorechances childrencanperformbetter 2 Iftheyaregivenmorechanceschildrencanperformbetter 8 1 Beingsuchabravegirl Cindyismyfavoritekidamongthemfive 1 Cindy issuchabravegirl ismyfavoritekidamongthemfive 3 doing和done作原因状语 2 Cindy encourage byherfather decidetoslideonsandherself 2 Encouragedbyherfather Cindydecidedtoslideonsandherself 9 1 Standinginfrontofthebed Angelawashavinglunch 1 Angela standinfrontofthebed havelunch 4 doing和done作伴随状语 2 Angela comfort byherfather stopcrying 2 Comfortedbyherfather Angelastoppedcrying 10 1 TianTianshowedhisloveforhismother sendingheraflower 2 Guidedbyhisfather TianTianslidedonsand 1 TianTian showhisloveforhismom sendheraflower 2 TianTian guide byhisfather slideonsand 5 doing和done作方式状语 11 1 ShiToubrokehisarm causinghimtouseonlyonehand 2 ShiTouhurriedtothekitchen onlytofindthereisnowaterforcooking 1 ShiTou breakhisarm causehimtouseonlyonehand 2 ShiTou hurrytothekitchen findthereisnowaterforcooking 6 1 doing作结果状语 表自然而然的结果 2 todo作结果状语 表意料之外的结果 12 Tobuildupabetterrelationshipwiththeirkids fivestar daddiesdecidedtojointheTVshow fivestar daddies buildupabetterrelationshipwiththeirkids decidetojointheTVshow 7 todo作目的状语 13 Yishangmingtianshangkeyong 14 Task2 SentencePatternTransformation 句型转换 Usenon finitetodescribethesepictures OralPractice掌握使用非谓语动词简化句子的用法 15 WhentheyhadabirthdaypartforKimi kidsarehappyandexcited kidsarehappyandexcited HavingabirthdaypartforKimi 16 Aslongasshesawacamel Angelawouldtouchitimmediately Angelawouldtouchitimmediately Seeingacamel 17 TianTianwascriticizedbyhisfather Sohelookedunhappy TianTianlookedunhappy Criticizedbyhisfather 18 Kimiheldchopsticksandaplateinthehands Hewasrunning Kimiwasrunning Holdingchopsticksandaplateinthehands 19 Theygotsomefoodfordinnerbycatchingfishinthelake theygotsomefoodfordinner Catchingfishinthelake 20 LinZhiyingbroketheegg LinZhiyingbroketheeggandmadeCindycry makingCindycry 21 KimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep KimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep KimihopedtoplaywithCindy soKimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep HopingtoplaywithCindy ToplaywithCindy 22 GroupworkandSharing Sharewhatyouhavelearnedwithothers andtrytomakeasummary 1 Whencanweusenon finiteverbs 2 Whatkindofnon finiteverbscanweusetomakesentences Simple 写作时 需要表示时间关系 可以用v ing 主动 和done 被动 作时间状语 23 Task3 Theuseofnon finiteinwritingtask非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目 写句子 24 Writingtask 爸爸去哪儿 Dad WhereAreWeGoing 这个电视节目广受欢迎 这个节目走红有以下几个原因 1 因为五个孩子很可爱 所以招人喜爱 2 为了让孩子成长 发展 节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会 3 通过沟通 父亲和孩子们建立了亲密关系 值得大家学习 4 与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比 这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱 写作要求 非谓语doing done todo至少各一个 25 要点1 因为五个孩子很可爱 所以他们招人喜爱 thefivekidsareadmiredbymanypeople 要点2 为了让孩子成长 发展 节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会 theshowprovidedthemmanychancestoexplore Beinglovely Inordertoletthekidsgrowanddevelop 26 要点3 父亲和孩子们通过沟通 建立了亲密关系 值得大家学习 fathersandkidssetupacloserelationship 要点4 与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比 这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱 likesingingcompetitions thiskindofshowaboutfamilyismorepopular Communicatingwitheachother Comparedwithothershows 27 Task4 Theuseofnon finiteinwritingtask非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目 写文章 28 Writeacompositionandshareitwithothers 写作内容 高考临近 为了让自己放松 我们班决定今天去春游 一大早我们就出发了 由一个有经验的爬山者带领着 我们说着笑着爬上山 当我们到达时 我们就开始烧烤了 我们吃着大餐欣赏美景 虽然累但是我们很开心 写作要求 根据以上内容 用5个句子写一篇日记 题目 开头和结尾已经给出 要根据实际情况多使用非谓语动词 29 OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming Torelaxourselves ourclassdecidedtohaveaspringouting Wesetoffearlyinthemorning guidedbyanexperiencedclimber Weclimbedthemountain talkingandlaughing Whenwearrived webegantobarbecue Havingabigdinner weenjoyedthebeautifulview Weweretiredbuthappy Onepossibleversion 30 Homework Writeacompositionafterclassandshareitwithothersnexttime 2008年广东省高考基础写作题 请根据以下中文提纲 编写射击项目的英语介绍 背景 射击最初只是生存工具 19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动 1896 第一次成为奥运项目1904 中断1928 中断1932 重回奥运会1968 第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状 稳步发展 1896奥运会只有三项射击项目 现今有17项 写作要求 1 使用5个句子 含至少一个非谓语动词 2 结构准确 内容完整 结构连贯 31 Practicemakesperfect 32 写作中复合句常见的错误 1 只有从句 没有主句 Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm 33 Part2 写作中定语从句的主要作用 1 增加词数 LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert Theconcertwaswonderful LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcertwhichwaswonderful Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival 2 可连接两个包含同一事物的句子 避免单词重复和句式单一 3 补充细节 以丰富文章内容 Thisismyuncle adoctor Thisismyuncle whoisadoctor 34 Fillintheblanks 去年暑假 我去乡村做志愿者 在那我看到了辛勤工作的农民和他们快乐的生活 给我留下了深刻的印象 Lastsummervacation Ididvoluntaryworkinthecountryside Isawhard workingpeasantsandtheirhappylife madeadeepimpressiononme 正如上面所提到的 定语从句用处很大 theAttributiveClauseisofgreatuse where that Asismentionedabove Asisknowntoall Asweallknow众所周知 Asisoftenthecase就跟经常的情况一样 Asisreported正如所报道的那样 As引导非限制性定语从句 可放在主句前中后 正如 35 Part3 如何写出定语从句 1 题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句 Solution 1 找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物2 将其中一个简单句改成从句 去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物 注意关系词的选用 Forexample 在204班 我有45个朋友 其中有31个女孩和14个男孩 InClass4 Grade2 Ihave45friends Thereare30girlsand15boys InClass4 Grade2 Ihave45friends ofwhomthereare30girlsand15boys 36 Practice 我最好的朋友是Mr Cai 他出生于1996年12月1日 MybestfriendisMr Cai HewasbornonDecember1st 1996 MybestfriendisMr CaiwhowasbornonDecember1st 1996 37 他也在黄岐高级中学上学 黄岐高级中学是一个美丽的地方 HealsostudiesinHuangqiSeniorHighSchool HuangqiSeniorHighSchoolisabeautifulplace HealsostudiesinHuangqiSeniorHighSchoolwhichisabeautifulplace 38 我们常常一起跑步 我不会忘记这段日子 Wealwaysruntogether Iwillneverforgetthedays Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenwealwaysruntogether 39 InClass4 Grade2 Ihave45friends ofwhomthereare30girlsand15boys MybestfriendisMr CaiwhowasbornonDecember1st 1996 HealsostudiesinHuangqiSeniorHighSchoolwhichisabeautifulplace Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenwealwaysruntogether TwoAttributiveClausesareenoughinonecomposition Part4 思辨 40 41 Part1 高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏 1 2013年全国高考新课标I I veaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou veaskedforbefore 你知道 我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议 Youknow myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulivetoattendaninternationalmeeting 我让叔叔带去你想要的那幅中国画 42 2 2013年广东高考 那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展 Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety 正如我们都知道的那样 扫大街是最为困难的工作之一 Asweallknow cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork 43 当今 父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情 这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母 Nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren whichmakesthechildrenrelyontheirparentsbadly Asailorwhohasexperiencednostormwillneverbecomeanexcellentsailor 3 2013年福建高考 没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手 44 45 2 以逗号代替句号 把两个简单句当成一个句子 Theoldmanthoughtofhisson tearscamedownfromhisface Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings itismadeofglass 46 漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 影响给分的因素之一 作文的卷面 47 影响给分的因素之三 行文的流畅 上下贯通 一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词 48 and then also besides morever what smorefurthermore inaddition morethanthat 1 表递进 表转折 表因果 表目的 表归纳 but however although though inspiteof despiteafterall onthecontrary ontheotherhand because since therefore so hence thus consequentlyasaresult consequence onaccountof inorderthat sothat forthepurposeof ingeneral inbrief inshort inconclusion inaword onthewhole 49 如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来 显得更有文采 得到高分呢 Manyhousesandschoolsweredestroyed Morethanfivemillionpeoplearelivingahardlifenow Thestudentsthereneedhelpandschoolsshouldbebuilt Studentscanreturntoclassessoon 50 Ex 按要求改写下列句子 1 Englishiswidelyusedintheworld MostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 合并为并列句 EnglishiswidelyusedintheworldandmostbusinesslettersarewritteninEnglish 2 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblem Thesesolutionsdidn twork 合并为并列句 Peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblembutthesesolutionsdidn twork 51 四 如何使文章连贯 过渡词的使用 1 时间 soon then suddenly meanwhile before after earlier inthemorning afterwards later immediately next theotherday nowadays gradually 2 空间 above below up down under near farfrom infrontof behind beside beyond ontheright left around inside outside oppositeto nextto ontopof across 52 3 列举 forexample suchas first ly second ly finally besides apartform foronething foranotherthing 4 比较 like unlike onthecontrary incontrastto ontheonehand ontheotherhand than notso as as as while similarly theformer thelatter some others one theother comparedwith 53 5 逻辑关系 a 并列 and aswellas also b 转折 but however yet c 递进 besides apartfrom inaddition what smore furthermore moreover tomakethingsworse d 原因 because becauseof as since forthatreason e 结果 so therefore thus asaresult f 让步 though although inspiteof 54 为了增强短文的连贯性 使表达流畅自然 要巧用关联词 请熟记和用好以下的关联词语 A 表并列 besides inaddition what smore moreover or and also too aswellas B 表转折 however nevertheless yet C 表原因 becauseof thanksto owingto dueto D 表结果 thus therefore asaresult E 表列举 namely forexample forinstance thatistosay F 表结论 toconclude inaword inbrief G 表时间顺序 first second then soon finally atlast H 表空间顺序 here there infrontof atthebackof nextto ononeside ontheothersideI 表对称关系 foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand 55 四 如何使文章连贯 过渡词的使用 1 时间 soon then suddenly meanwhile before after earlier inthemorning afterwards later immediately next theotherday nowadays gradually 2 空间 above below up down under near farfrom infrontof behind beside beyond ontheright left around inside outside oppositeto nextto ontopof across 56 3 列举 forexample suchas first ly second ly finally besides apartform foronething foranotherthing 4 比较 like unlike onthecontrary incontrastto ontheonehand ontheotherhand than notso as as as while similarly theformer thelatter some others one theother comparedwith 57 5 逻辑关系 a 并列 and aswellas also b 转折 but however yet c 递进 besides apartfrom inaddition what smore furthermore moreover tomakethingsworse d 原因 because becauseof as since forthatreason e 结果 so therefore thus asaresult f 让步 though although inspiteof 58 5 运用关连词语篇章结构连贯是三大评分标准之一 因此 我们在写作时 除按逻辑组合信息点外 还必须学会灵活运用连接性词语 除上述提到的并列连词和从属连词之外 特别推荐使用以下连接性词语 1 表起始 firstofall tobeginwith inmyopinion accordingto asfaras I mconcerned asyouknow等 最常用 2 表递进 besides what smore moreover furthermore what sworse tomakethingsworse worsestill inadditionto still even等 最常用 59 3 表并列 also aswell as or either or neither nor notonly butalso and andthen both and等 4 表因果 therefore asaresult of thanksto dueto owingto等 5 表强调 aboveall indeed surely certainly ofcourse atleast obviously等 6 表解释 thatistosay 即 就是 换句话说 就是说 更确切地说 inotherwords believeitornot totellyouthetruth等 7 表比较 justas justlike inthesameway moreorless 差不多 几乎 similarly instead等 60 8 表空间 ontheleft right totheleft rightof ononesideof ontheothersideof atthefoot top endof inthemiddle centreof等 9 表时间 atfirst inthebeginning next then later now abouttwomonthslater afterawhile soon afterwards sincethen meanwhile intheend atlast finally forthefirsttime afterthat thenextmoment uptonow beforelong fromthenon soonerorlater等 10 表总结 inshort inaword inconclusion ingeneral inbrief generallyspeaking onthewhole tosumup inall等 最常用 61 11 表转折或对比 yet however otherwise ontheotherhand onthecontrary inspiteof afterall infact asamateroffact 事实上 等 最常用 12 表列举或举例 foronething andforanother thing first ly second ly third ly finally lastbutnotleast 最后但同等重要的 forexample instance take forexample suchas thatis asfollows andsoon等 最常用 13 常用的放在句首 修饰整个句子的连接性副词 un luckily un fortunately hopefully naturally strangely apparently inthisway等 最常用 62 before after when while as first later andthen next finally immediately assoonasand or also too notonly butalso aswellas both and neither norbut yet however or otherwisebecause becauseof since nowthat as thanksto dueto so sothat therefore thus asaresult as so longas if unlessthough although inspiteof besides what smore moreover even inaddition 时间 并列 原因 条件 转折 递进 结果 让步 63 64 基础写作7大聚焦 4 巧用同位语及分词短语 让表达简洁生动 顺畅合并信息 65 合并以下信息 时间 上周lastweek事件 采访王教授 关注中国在校儿童近视问题haveaninterviewwith concern theissueofshort sightedness schoolchildren背景 王教授是眼科医生eye doctor Lastweek wehadaninterviewwithProfessorWang aneye doctor concerningtheissueofshort sightednessofschoolchildreninchina 66 同位成分 往往是中心强调的信息 Hefinallygavemehispresent abeautifuldress 当同位成分之间存在某种语义关系是 会见到表示该语义的词语 如 同等关系 thatis inotherwords namely列举关系 forexample forinstance suchas including included 突出或强调关系 especially particularly mainly mostly inparticular 同位语的应用 67 Hereare3waystomakesentences I 巧妙运用短语 写出规范的简单句 1 借助名词短语做同位语 如 李立 男 19岁 1986年生 籍贯 广东 LiLi aboyof19 wasborninGuangdongin1986 68 69 1 五年的基础写作范文中都使用了非谓语形式 1 BornonMarch7 1915 AllanStewart 2012 2 AbookentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMother 2011 3 Around540millionpeopleareaffected causing100 000deaths 2010 4 halfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshortsighted rankingthefirstintheworld 2009 5 Shooting originatedasameansofsurvival 2008 范文解读 70 2 五年的基础写作范文中都使用了定语从句 1 AmyChua aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale whotellsstoriesinherbookabout 2011年 2 Thereare350millionpeoplesmokingrecently inwhichthemalehold75percent 2010年 3 Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50 students whichranksthefirstintheworld areshort sighted 2009年 4 Inhiseighties hedecidedtostudylaw afterwhichheobtained in2006 2012 71 3 五年的基础写作范文中常使用了同位语 1 AmyChua aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYale 2011年 2 IhadaninterviewwithProfessorWang aneye doctor concerning 2009年 3 AllanStewart anAustralian becomes 2012年 72 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 第一步 拆分成几个简单句 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语 这会影响汉语学习 第二步 分别翻译这几个简单句 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 73 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 第三步 合并句子 ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish 74 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish Childre