2011及2012广东中考作文题目、范文.doc

【2011广东】书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗？今年的Earth Hour你中如何度过的？请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2011”的短文。内容包括：1. 你今年参加Earth Hour这个活动了吗？请表达你参加或者不有参加的心情。2. 请描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事。3. 请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事。4. 号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活动中来。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。范文： My Earth Hour 2011The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. I was sorry that I didnt pay enough attention to the day. That day, I was hanging out with my best friend Li Ping at the street when we heard something about it. As a teenager, I usually do something to protect our environment. I never throw about some litter. And I usually turn off the lightswhen I dont use them. And I often use both sides of paper. I hope everyone will take part in Earth Hour2012. I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.范文点评： 作者用sorry 表达了自己没有参加今年的“地球一小时”活动的遗憾心情。完成了第一个点的内容。这里pay attention to 运用得很好。 用过去进行时态的when引导的时间状语从句描述了当时自己与好友在街上溜达。完成了第二点内容。这里 hang out 的运用很好。 本句作为过渡句，引出下文自己保护环境的一些行为。 never throw about some litter是自己做的有利于环保的一件事情。throw about 的使用很好。 turn off the lights是自己做的有利于环保的另一件事情。turn off的使用很好。 use both sides of paper 是自己做的有利于环保的又一件事情。以上三句完成了第三点内容。Both sides 运用得很好。 用 I hope 号召人们参加“2012年地球一小时”活动。 take part in 使用得当。【2011广东广州】书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。 下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。组员理想职业原因Mary时装设计师(fashion designer)喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画Kate园艺工(gardener)喜爱植物，想让城市更美Mike作家愿意与别人分享精彩故事Tom厨师为别人煮健康美味的食物你？注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数); 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。范文：Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students ideal jobs. Heres a report about my group members ideals.Mary is going to be a fashion designer when she grows up. She loves beautiful clothes, and she does well in drawing. Kate loves plants, so she is going to be a gardener. Her aim is to make our city more beautiful. Mike would love sharing wonderful stories with others, so he is going to be a writer. Tom wants to be a cook. He is good at cooking healthy and delicious food. I want to be a teacher in the future because I love children very much. Hopefully everyone can realize dreams in the future.范文点评： 此处作者写Mary 的理想职业及原因。此处when 引导的时间转语从句运用准确。短语grow up, do well in运用得体。 此处作者写Kate 的理想职业及原因。此处不定式作表语运用准确，make+比较级用得好。 此处存在错误：would love 的后面应该接不定式。Sharing应该改为to share。 此处作者写自己的理想职业和原因。此处because 引导的原因状语从句运用准确，增强了问掌柜的写读性。【2010广东广州】书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。你校准备举行“节约用水，从现在做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿。请根据根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文。必要性没有水人类就无法生存不良现象不关水龙头（tap）；洗澡时间很长；没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉建议（你的23个建议）注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数); 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Act now to save waterWater is very important to us. All including humans, animals and plants cant live without water. But we still see some people wasting water everywhere. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time; others throw away the bottle with lots of water in it.Well, how do we save water? First, we should start with ourselves not to waste every drop of water. Second, its very necessary to stop people from polluting water. We dont hope to see “The last drop of water in the world is humans tear.” So act now to save water!范文点评： 两个介词including, without的使用恰到好处地说明了本文的论点：水对我们很重要。 用but一转折，提出了人们仍然在浪费水。 用for example 列举了三个事例说明了水资源浪费的现象，从反面论证了水的重要性。词组turn off, take towers, throw away也说明作者的语言基本功扎实。 水既然那么重要，那我们如何节约用水呢？