Test 1--15解析及参考作文.doc

Test OnePart Writing 【写作解析】 该题是要求写一封求职跟踪函。求职跟踪函是应聘者在简历寄出后，主要指面试以后，进一步和招聘方联系和沟通，加深招聘方对自己的了解，或者在被拒绝以后，向招聘方表明自己的立场，谋求重新考虑录用的机会等。【参考作文】Dear Mr. Smith,Thank you for the time you spent this morning telling me about the interesting position a junior secretary in your sales department.I am more interested than ever in this job. I believe that the position to be held would give me the background I would be needing to do the work required.I have completed the application form that you gave me, and it is enclosed here. I hope that you will give me an opportunity to show what I am capable of doing, and also hope that I may soon become a member of your staff. Yours Sincerely, (signature)Test TwoPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题是要求拟写一封传真。传真是通过传真机给商务客户发的信函，它能在短时间内将文件、图画直接传送到业务对方。一般公司都有固定的传真格式，发送传真方需要清楚地填妥传真头、拟写传真内容，并准确、快捷地将有关内容传到对方。传真的内容通常包括：1）传真抬头，包括收件方单位名称、收件人名、发件人名、日期、寄件人传真号码、档号和页数等。2）主题，扼要说明这份传真的内容。3）内容，即传真的主体部分。传真的文字形式可以是信函格式，也可以是备忘录、便条等。【参考作文】To: Angel Clothes Store For the attention of Attn: Mr. Wang Qiang Fax No.: 88667711From: Peter Robinson , London Woolen Products, Co. Fax No.: 87654904Date: February 10, 2004No. of Pages: 1Subject/Re: Delivery DateDear Sir or Madam,We refer to your order for woolens.Due to the bad weather, we will not be able to deliver your goods on the agreed date of February 20th. We apologize for the inconvenience, but the delay is owing to the circumstances beyond our control and we promise that we are going to try our best to ship your order before February 25th.Yours sincerely, Peter RobinsonSales Manager Test ThreePart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求写一篇书面通知。通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、召开会议或传达事情等使用的一种实用文体。书面通知通常用Notice表示，常写在正文上方的正中位置，通知需要有发出单位的落款或者时间，一般放在正文的右下角。书面通知用词要贴切，语句需简洁，注重书面化，要准确传达出信息。【参考作文】NoticeIn order to stimulate /encourage the students enthusiasm for English study, the Foreign Language Department decides to hold an Oral English Contest throughout the college.Arrangements of the contest: There are two groups: English major and non-English major. Each group will follow three steps: preliminary contest, semi-final contest and final contest. It will be held on May 9.Content of the contest: First, make a 5-minute speech on a given topic.Second, answer the judges questions based on the speech.Last, a 3-minute debate with another contestant.Registration: From April 20 to April 30.Room 505, Office Building The Foreign Language DepartmentTest FourPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求的是完成一份聘用合同。合同是受法律制约的文件。它授予甲乙双方以权力和义务，对双方都具有约束力，双方都必须严格履行规定的各项条款。如有一方违约，不履行规定的有关条款，另一方就有权要求对方承担由此引起的法律后果。聘用合同包括以下内容：1）合同名称；2）前文，主要包括定约日期和地点；3）本文，主要包括具体工作职责、工作时间、工资支付方式以及可享受的福利待遇； 4）结尾条款；5）签名；6）盖印。【参考作文】Chongqing Neptunus Pharmaceutical Co. Ltd 1. 12 Jianxin Road, Jiangbei District, Chongqing Contract of Employment 2. The period of service is fixed to be three years, commencing on May 1, 1998 and ending on April 30, 2001. Overtime is not paid, but time off will be given in lieu. 3. Five days a week, eight hours a day. One months notice is required by either party after three months trial period.One weeks notice is required during the trial period. 4. For the three months trial period, the salary will be 2 500 RMB per month, and after this period, the salary will be 5 000 RMB. J. Brown (Signature) 6. John Smith (Signature)5. Chongqing Neptunus Pharmaceutical Co. Ltd EmployeeMay 2， 1998 May 2， 1998Test FivePart Writing 【写作解析】 该题是要求写一篇关于招聘广告的文章。广告的设计撰写是要引起人们的注意（Attention），唤起人们的兴趣（Interest），增加人们的欲望（Desire），强化人们的记忆（Memory），最后使人们按其所倡导或宣传的采取行动。招聘广告的目的是要为企业招到合适的人选以使自身发展壮大，其语言简洁，多用省略句和独立结构。但是广告中的聘用条件、职位描述、联系方式一定要表达清楚，否则会给招聘经理增加许多无谓劳动，或是错失一些人才。【参考作文】WantedWhirlpool Corporation / Company is a famous manufacturer and marketer of electrical home appliances, with its headquarters in Tianjin. It has more than 20 branches all over the country.Qualifications: Chinese citizen，aged 35 40 With college diploma in Marketing, Economics or related fields At least 5 years experience in sales management Proficient in English speaking and writing Willing to travel on business frequently Good at using a computerThose who are interested please contact Mr. John Smith at 66692487.Test SixPart Writing 【写作解析】 推荐信是一种比较正式的信件，通常是因工作和求学等需要，由相关人士书写，供单位或学校了解求职者或申请人的品行、个性和业务能力等信息的信件。因此其内容具有正式信件的基本要素，即信头，信内的地址，称呼语，信件的正文，问候语及签名。推荐信的正文应包含的内容有：推荐人与被推荐人的关系，被推荐人的工作情况，学习成绩，被推荐人的优势以及推荐人对被推荐人的评价和态度。推荐信内容必须以事实为依据，一般都用褒扬的语气。好的推荐信应当由具备相当知名度、公信力、且与被推荐人熟识的人撰写。重点应该放在收信单位认为最重要的信息，避免过于笼统和陈词滥调。【参考作文】The Letter of Recommendation June 8, 2004To Whom It May Concern,It is my great pleasure to recommend Miss Li Xia, one of my former students, for graduate study in the field of linguistics at your university. I have taught her in a course in English Literature and in another in Introduction to Linguistics. In both she did excellent work. In dealing with her classmates, she was always willing to help others and earned their friendship and respect. I believe that she is undoubtedly qualified for graduate study in her chosen field. So I recommended her without reservation, and will appreciate your assistance to her application with your admission. Sincerely yours, Professor Li DongDean of the English Department Dalian Foreign Language CollegeTest SevenPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求写一封祝贺信。祝贺是得到亲友、同事、同学等通过考试、荣获晋升、获得学位、结婚、喜得贵子等好消息时写的信。这种信要写得及时、真诚、自然、亲切动人，一般不宜写得过长。祝贺信的内容通常包括：1）如何获得消息；2）什么消息；3）获消息后的激动心情；4）表达祝贺。【参考作文】 Dept. of Social SciencesPeking University100871, Beijing, China August 10, 2006Mr. Victor Allen,Princeton UniversityDear Victor,It was delightful news for me to learn of your reception of a doctors degree from Princeton University. Take my congratulations, Victor. I am sure you are proud and happy. To have reached this milestone in your scholarship at a young age is simply great. I really envy you for the opportunities that lie ahead. I have watched your progress with great admiration. You are not only good in studies, but also very active in many social activities. In every respect, you are steadily and quickly maturing into a well-rounded scholar. Judging by your excellent records at both university and graduate school, I am confident that you will be equally successful in whatever career you might pursue. What are your plans, Victor? Do you intend to work in some fields of scientific research and apply your knowledge of science to bring benefit to the country and the people, or do you intend to teach? Whatever your intentions are, I should enjoy hearing about them. Sincerely yours, John BrownTest EightPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求写一篇欢送词。欢送词通常用于同事调离岗位或退休、同学转学或毕业等场合举行欢送的一种表达方式。通常包括以下内容：1）称呼；2）介绍被欢送人；3）回顾被欢送人的工作或学习情况；5）讲述被欢送人优点和长处；6）展望被欢送人未来；7）表达谢意。【参考作文】Ladies and gentlemen, it gives me great pleasure to be here to say a few words about Mr. Smith, who is retiring soon.First of all, let me remind you how valuable Mr. Smith has been to the company. He came to work here after he graduated from university. Since then he has had a number of positions in the company. So far he has worked and made his contribution for 40 years. Five years ago, he was promoted as the assistant manager.I know that all of us who have worked with him have been impressed not only by his politeness and kindness but also his great achievement in increasing the sales of the company. Thus he has been greatly respected. Well feel very sad to see him leave.On the other hand, on his retirement, Mr. Smith can enjoy family life and have a good rest.Finally, Im sure that you will all join me in wishing him the very best for the future and in thanking him for everything he has done here for us. Mr. Smith, I have the honor to present you with a gift. I hope it will remind you of your days with us.Test NinePart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求写一篇会议纪要。会议纪要（Minutes）是一种实用文体。它一般是对会议、会谈过程中完成的记录进行一定整理后形成的摘要文字，或称会议纪要。会议纪要格式简单，条理性强。如会议、会谈内容较多，往往分项目或条目列出。会议纪要有时起到备忘录的作用，需要会谈各方相互约束执行，所以会议纪要一般由三部分构成：标题、正文和签名。标题用来表明会议、会谈的名称。正文部分大致包括两项内容：一是会议、会谈的时间、地点、参加人员以及与会人员所代表的团体；二是主体部分，即会议或会谈摘要。为清楚起见，摘要部分往往分条表述。最后是会谈各方或与会人员签名。【参考作文】The Minutes of the Management Committee Meeting Held in Room 1160 Peace Hotel, ShanghaiDate: 2:00 p.m. on Tuesday , 4th March , 2003Subject: Proposal to Print a Special CatalogueAttendance: Yao Jie (General Manager) Zhang Tao (Sales Manager) Wang Lei (Accountant)Discussion: 1. Proposal to print a separate catalogue for multimedia products. Present main catalogue has too many items. So it is difficult to notice the special products. 2. Costs have to be worked out before decision is made.Decision: 1. Wang Lei to prepare costs by Friday, March 7. 2. Next meeting on Monday, March 10 to discuss costs and make a decision.Yao Jie (Signature) Zhang Tao (Signature) Wang Lei (Signature)General Manager Sales Manager AccountantTest TenPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求写一篇产品使用说明书。产品使用说明书是由生产单位编写、向用户介绍产品的特点、用途、主要技术数据、操作使用说明、维修注意事项等的一种说明文，经常随产品一起赠送给用户，能起到宣传产品、扩大销售、便利用户使用的作用。产品说明书中要写上产品商标、规格型号、产品名称、生产厂名、使用方法、保养和维修。封底上要注明厂址、电话号码。撰写产品说明书，一定要实事求是，恪守信誉，对用户高度负责，说明的内容必须符合产品的实际情况，这样才能取得用户的信赖。产品说明书的文字，要通俗简明。【参考作文】Red Wine MaskSpecification: 13 bagsNet Contents: 10g 3 bagsMain effects: The red wine contains 17 vitamins and many other minerals, which enable to revivify the oxygenated layer of skin and activate aging skin so as to whiten and brighten your skin.Directions:First cleanse your face with facial cleanser and then spread a bag of the mask on your whole face evenly, after 1520 minutes, wipe it with cosmetic cotton pad and cleanse with clean water, at the same time massage for about one minute so as to make your skin smoother and more delicate. Two or three times a week.Test ElevenPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题是要求完成一篇关于产品广告的文章。广告的设计撰写是要引起人们的注意（Attention），唤起人们的兴趣（Interest），增加人们的欲望（Desire），强化人们的记忆（Memory），最后使人们按其所倡导/宣传的采取行动。广告应简洁明了，通俗易懂；引导读者进一步关注正文；努力表现商品的特性；慎用否定句。【参考作文】Special offer!Buy now only $2, 330! 1-year warranty (1年保修) 1-day free training (1天免费培训) Free 24-hour delivery (24小时免费送货) Technical support on our hot line-call anytime during business hours (热线技术支持，营业时间均可拨打) 14-day money-back guarantee (14天内保证退货还款) On-site maintenance contract only $50 ! (现场维修合同仅收50美元！) $650 software package-free ! (免费赠送650美元的软件礼包！) Micro Tech 514 Monroe Street Chicago IL 60661-3618Tel：(312) 837 9090 E-mail:Test TwelvePart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求的是写一封邀请函。邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或客户、知名人士等参加宴会、聚会、文艺演出、展览等活动时所发的请约性书信。邀请信的内容通常包括：1）说明邀请对方参加什么活动、邀请的原因是什么。2）将活动安排的细节及注意事项告诉对方。诸如地点、参加人员、人数、日期、具体时间，做些什么样的准备及所穿的服饰等。3）为了方便安排活动，如有必要，可注明对方需予以回复，以及一些其他的要求事项等。【参考作文】 A Letter of Invitation September 1，2004Dear DrJohnson,All the teaching staff of our Hope Foreign Languages School have long admired your excellent research activities and would enjoy learning more about your work.We would like to invite you to give a lecture about English Teaching to the teaching staff in the meeting hall of the Hilton on September 10 at 2:00 p.m. And a ninety-minute lecture followed by a twenty-minute question and answer period would be ideal.About one hundred persons are expected to attend the lecture, most of them being the English teachers and others being some students with great interest in English.We would appreciate having your early reply by September 8th and hope that you could accept our kind invitation. Yours faithfully, Wang MingTest ThirteenPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求的是写一封证明信。证明信是通常因工作和求学等需要，由相关人士书写，供单位或学校了解求职者或申请人的品行、个性和业务能力等信息的信件。证明信主要是针对单位的查证信而发出，由证明人直接寄给收信单位。证明信包括三个部分。第一部分说明来函收悉。首先说明对方的查证信已收悉，接着一般都要介绍与被证明人相识的时间、以及被证明人申请的职位和专业。第二部分证明被证明人符合对方的要求，对其进行评价。内容应包括优点和缺点两方面的内容，但通常侧重前者，可以从不同的角度介绍其情况，如目前的工作职责、个人品质、工作态度和工作习惯等。最后写出结论，进行总结。证明信内容必须以事实为依据，一般都用褒扬的语气。好的证明信应当由具备相当知名度、公信力、且与被证明人熟识的人撰写。【参考作文】 February 26, 2001 To Whom It May Concern,This is to certify that Mr. Li Wei, one of my former students, had studied Mathematics in the Math Department of Jilin University for 4 years. His academic record was constantly maintained at the top level. He got excellent scores in all the subjects. In addition, he was on good terms with his classmates. After graduation, he has been engaged in our university as a teaching assistant for 3 year. Being physically and mentally healthy, Mr. Li has faithfully attended to his duties and has proved himself to be industrious and thoroughly reliable. Yours faithfully, Lu Changchun Professor of Math Department Jilin UniversityTest FourteenPart Writing 【写作解析】 该题要求的是写一封预约信。在西方的商业文化中，进行预约在商业活动中是常见的。绝大多数商务人员都有一个排得紧紧的时间表。事先计划和预约有助于节省你和他人的时间。预约信应清楚、简洁、礼貌。