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议论文议论文的写作要领 议论文是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张。作者为了使读者同意他的看法,提出若干道理来说服他人。 议论文的写作方法: 1.引言,确立一个准确、鲜明的中心论点。 写议论文的目的不是让读者知道或认识某件事物,而是要让读者同情或者接受自己的观点和看法。因此,一个鲜明的论点是全文的主旨、灵魂、统帅。为了达到这一目的,写作者要利用各种可能的手段(或描写,或对比,或分类)将问题说明清楚。 2.主体段,也就是论证的过程。 要写好议论文,就要讲究好的论证方法。欠缺的论证方法,会使论据显得苍白无力,论点站不住脚,因而不能使人同意你的观点。一般说来,有两种方法可以采用,一是逻辑说理,即 晓之以理,一是从感情上打动他人,即动之以情。这两种方法并不是孤立地出现,往往是你中有我,我中有你。除此之外,我们还可以运用引证法(即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语等作为论据)、例证法(即举一些例子来进行论证)、喻证法(用比喻的方法来论证事理,把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂,使文章既生动又形象)、对比论证(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证,使文章的表达效果更强烈,给人留下深刻的印象)。 3.结论,用一、二句话来结束文章,尽量能做到首尾呼应。常用词语及范文furthermore而且,再者moreover而且,此外besides并且second其次finally最后above all尤其是,最重要的是in fact事实上most importantly最重要的是for example例如for instance例如similarly相似地but但是 whereas然而,但是on the other hand 在另一方面in contrast with与.成对比consequently因此,所以hence因此,基于此all in all 总的来说in a word总而言之in conclusion最后,总之in summary总之 to sum up总而言之for the purpose of为达到目的as a result结果in addition加之,且又not onlybut also不但而且 first(of all)首先 third再者 as well as既又 first and foremost首先,第一 in particular特别是 surely想必(强调推断) specially特别地 that is to say也就是说 in the same way以同样的方法 however然而,但是 on one hand在一方面 on the contrary相反地 instead代替 therefore因此,所以 (and)thus因此,于是 as has been said如上所说 in brief简单地说in short简单地说,总之 on the whole总的来说 nevertheless虽然,依然 in order that为了 No pains,no gains. (不劳则无获)No pains,no gainsis a proverb that has been passed on from generation to generation. It means that we cannot gain happiness without any efforts and hard work.(文章以谚语开始,提出论点。) It is known to all that if a sportsman wants to win the first place, he must train hard. Why does the Chinese Women Football Team do so well? It is just because they all train hard. This also explains why Wilma Rudolph,who hadnt been able to walk for one third of her life,became the first American woman to win three Olympic gold medals in track.(第二段开始论证论点,主要是通过取得成功的运动员的事例来证明。) No pains,no gainsis certainly true of study. We all know the lost time will never return. If we want to study well,we should,first of all,devote all our time and energy to our studies. A year ago,my English was very poor. Encouraged by my teacher,I started working hard at it. When I have any difficulty,I always ask others for help. I practice reading every morning and never leave todays work till tomorrow. I have made great and rapid progress and my English is ahead of others now in my class.(第三和第四段主要是联系自己学习上的情况,进一步说明论点。) No pains, no gains.(最后的结论段,重申论点,使之更加明确。)模拟考题与写作指导( Guided Writing)1.我的理想家庭(My Ideal Family)Directions:Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the situation given. 要求:1.以理想中的家庭为中心,注意时态和语气。2.用第一人称写。 My Ideal Family When I was a little kid,I had a lot of dreams,among which there was one about the ideal family in my mind. In my opinion,my family should be the warmest one in the world. My parents should be the kindest ones the world over. If I wanted something,they should give it to me in any way. Thus I could have the most toys and story-books among my friends. They would be jealous of me. As for my lessons,I wish my parents not to take much too serious of it. They should know not every good student would have bright future.Sometimes a naughty boy would also become the president of a country. I have read many stories about that. A lot of famous scientists and politicians were troublesome and were headaches to their parents. I think the most important thing is to make us have a happy childhood and a colorful youth. I dont want to be their substitute to realize their dreams which they could not make come true when they were young. I also wish to have a family with kind and most understanding parents. They might as well treat me like their dear friend and also treat my friends very well. They would not ask me to stay at home all the time and prevent me bringing friends home. I want my friends to know that I have the most friendly and thoughtful parents on earth. I know it is very hard to bring a child up. Parents should be responsible for their children. But I really hope they can be more open-minded and trust their children more. 2.居住条件 (Living Conditions) 近几年来,上海人的居住条件有了很大的改善;住新工房(the new apartment)与住旧石库门房子(the old shi ku men house)迥然不同,有利有弊;请谈谈你的看法。 Living Conditions With the rapid development of socialist market economy,the living standard of the people in Shanghai has been greatly improved in the past ten years. Once the old shi ku men house was regarded as the symbol of Shanghai,but now,many skyscrapers and new apartments have sprung up. Thousands of new buildings have replaced the old ones. As we all know,quite a lot of people have already moved into their own new apartments. Many people are enjoying their life in the new flats. Compared with the old shi ku men houses,the new flats are much brighter and cleaner. People will never share the kitchen and toilet with others any longer. All the household(electrical) appliances make the life more convenient and comfortable. The environment around is often quiet and satisfactory,free from the crowds and noises. Green trees and beautiful flowers make people enjoy complete relaxation and happiness. (心旷神怡) But every coin has two sides. The old shi ku men houses have their own advantages. People there are just like the members of a big family. They help each other whenever they meet with difficulties. Old people there usually play chess,go in for some sports together and chat with each other,thus they will not feel lonely. As the old saying goes,close neighbors are better than faraway relatives.Children will not be lonely either because they can easily find their playmates in the lane. On the other hand,though the living conditions have been improved in the new apartments,the distance between neighbors seems to become farther and farther. As a result,it lacks the most important things-friendship and human feelings. The old shi ku men house symbolizes the past of Shanghai while the new apartment symbolizes the new life of today. From the old house to the new apartment,it shows the great achievements we have made in our life. However,the old shi ku men house shouldnt disappear completely. It should be kept as a commemoration to tell our new generation what Shanghai was like before. 3.哪里住更好(Where to Live) 有的人喜欢往城市里挤,有的人喜欢往乡下搬。各有所好,孰是孰非,你以为如何? Where to Live With the development of economy in our country,great changes have taken place not only in the city but also in the suburbs,especially the suburbs,which used to be very poor,have taken on a new look. On the one hand,a great many people intend to move into the city,while on the other hand,quite a lot of people like to settle down in the countryside. People have different points of view on whether to live in the city or in the countryside. Most of people are for living in the city. Advantages are obvious as follows. Firstly,since there are so many supermarkets and all kinds of stores in the city that it is very convenient to do shopping and people can get what they need very easily. Secondly,because of the advanced traffic system in the city,it is also very convenient for them to go to work in the morning and come back from work in the evening. Thirdly,everybody knows that there are many cinemas,theatres,skyscrapers,and other offices in the city,people can enjoy the flourish and prosperity of the modem city. Every coin has two sides. More and more people are bored with the life in the city. They desire to move to the countryside because what they think is also reasonable. Firstly,the air in the countryside is fresh,which does good to their health,they will never breathe dirty and polluted air any more. Secondly,living in the countryside will help them be away from crowds and noises in the city and they can enjoy a peaceful and quiet life there. Last but not the least,they can be closer to nature. Green trees and vast fields will greatly attract them. It is hard to say which one is better,to live in the city or in the countryside. It is up to you to make the decision. It all depends on the individual. Either has its own benefits. In a word,we should live where we feel comfortable. 4.城市与乡村生活的差异 (Difference between City and Country)1.从环境、交通、文化娱乐等方面比较城市生活与乡村生活的差异。2.展望这两种生活的前景。 Difference between City and Country Life in the countryside is different from the life in the city. Cities are usually crowded with people,buses,cars and bicycles. The city areas are often polluted and the air there is not so fresh as that in the countryside. Neighbours usually work in different units,so they are not closely related. But it is more convenient to live in the city because there are many buses and shops. The recreational life is wonderful. Life in the countryside is quiet. The scenery there is beautiful. Neighbours often have a closer and more friendly relation. But there are fewer buses,shops and cinemas. Its not so easy for people to see a film. With the development of society,the difference is being shortened and both of the two lives will become more and more colourful. 5.在家里也要小心(Be Careful at Home) 家用电器、新房装修、电子游戏等处置不当均会成为事故的诱发因素。 Be Careful at Home We all know that home is the safest place to us. But do you know it can also be a most dangerous place if you are not careful enough? First of all,there are a lot of electrical appliances in our home. With the development of modern industry and science,more and more inventions make our life more convenient. But all the equipment at home can be accident trap to us. For example,if there is something wrong with the socket of our washing machine but we dont know that and continue using it,it is very dangerous for us to get an electric shock. It is deadly danger and is easy to cause death. So we should examine all the electrical equipment at home as often as possible. Secondly,nowadays people like to decorate their sweet home as beautifully as they can. But they dont know all these decoration materials contain dangerous chemical substances. Magnificent as their home is,there are hidden dangers behind it. People living in the house are easy to be affected by deadly diseases,such as leukaemia. That is why more and more people who are suffering from that deadly disease now. Thirdly,now people spend a lot of time and money on how to make their home bright and different from othersThey polish their floors,which can be accident traps for both old people and little kids. They also equip their home with air-conditioning, which weakens their resistance to disease and makes them easy to catch cold. So in my opinion,if we dont pay much attention to our own safety,sweet homes can be dangerous places to us. 6.金窝,银窝,不如家里草窝(East or West,Home Is the Best) 本题表达一种明确的观点,可以从个人理解和想象的角度来写。要注意思维和表达的连贯性。 East or West,Home Is the BestWhen we stay abroad,we will be homesick and always miss our homeland. When we stay at others home,we will always feel uncomfortable and find it hard to get used to the life there. And we hope to go back as soon as possible. However magnificent it is,we would rather leave there for home soon. The surroundings around our home are familiar to us. It can give us a sense of security. Home is full of love and warmth. When we feel upset,parents will comfort us and give us some encouragement. When we are ill,they will take good care of us until we recover from the illness. When we are disappointed because of our dissatisfactory work or study,they will encourage us so that we will have confidence in ourselves and try all we can to do well in our work and study again. We feel free and comfortable at home and enjoy the happiness of a family. We are free to do nearly everything we like in our home. Home is more than a place for living. As the English saying says, East or West, Home is the best.Wherever we go,we will find that home is the best place that we hope to stay in. 7.从搬家看变化(To See the Changes from the House-moving) 本题的议论应注意力避空泛。写作时可以考虑从一些具体细节来展开,达到小中见大的效果。要注意语言的准确性。 To See the Changes from the House-moving A porter from a House-Moving Transportation Company tells us excitedly that great changes have taken place in peoples life in Shanghai in the past ten years,which can be seen clearly in the course of their house-moving. Ten years ago,when people in Shanghai moved their houses,eight out of ten families used to take with them the old furniture,some even took the coal stoves to the new house. Five-ton truck were filled with shabby furniture,coal stoves and few low class electrical appliances. They were not willing to part with those worn out and worthless odds and ends. But nowadays,80of the families leave their old furniture behind in the old house since the new houses have already been beautifully decorated,furnished with a set of newly-bought modern furniture. The majority of families own 29 or 34 inch big screen color TV sets and big capacity imported refrigerators. Computers have entered 36of the families. And 14of the families own pianos and what is more important,nearly all the families have a lot of books,which shows the cultural atmosphere of the families. The company is busy with their house-moving work from the very beginning of the year to the end. The business has an average increase of 40more than that of before. The life standard of the Shanghai people has been greatly improved and a well off life is not far away from them. 8.学校、家庭、孩子(School, Family and Child) 1.有些人认为家长对孩子的影响大,有些人认为学校教育对孩子的影响大,我的观点是学校与家庭对孩子来说是一样重要。 2.家长的影响和作用:家长是孩子的第一教师,家长的一言一行会对孩子产生很大影响。 3.学校对孩子的影响和作用:教师应为人师表,教师的榜样会对学生一生产生重大影响。 4.词汇提示: Example is better than precept身教重于言教 make an impression on对产生影响 stay in harmony with与.和睦相处 A teacher is a paragon of vitue and learning为人师表 School,Family and Child Some people believe that parents have great effects on children while others think that school education is more important. From my point of view,family education is as important as school education. As we all know,parents are the first teachers of their children. Children receive education from their parents from the very beginning of their life. At home,they are taught how to walk,to learn to speak,to respect the elder and to be a good child. There is an English saying,Example is better than precept. What parents have said and done will make a strong impression on their children. On the other hand,school education also has a great effect on children. When children are old enough to go to school,they are taught how to read and write,respect the teachers and love the schools,stay in harmony with their classmates,observe the discipline and obey the laws,care for and help others, and study diligently and make progress every day. There is a Chinese saying, A teacher is a paragon of virtue and learning. A good teacher will impress his children with his shining examples. In short,both family education and school education are very important in the growth of children. So parents and teachers should take on great responsibilities for childrens education and help them to develop mentally and physically.【点评】 对孩子的成长来说,家庭教育和学校教育缺一不可,教师和家长一样重要。Exampleis better than precept. A teacher is a paragon of vitue and tearning.文章中的时态基本上都是一般现在时态,因为教育的重要性过去是这样,现在也是这样,将来更是如此。 9.谁对孩子影响大(Who Has Greater Effect on Children) 1.有人认为家庭(父母)对孩子的影响大。 2.有人认为学校对孩子的影响大。 3.我认为(观点,理由) Who Has Greater Effect on Children Which has greater influence on children,family or school? Some people think that parents have greater effect on children,while some others hold the view that school education is more important. In my opinion,school education is as important as family education. As we know parents are the first teachers of their children. Children receive education from their parents from the very beginning of their life. On the other hand,school education also has great effect on children. When they are old enough,children go to school,where they spend most of daytime and receive education from teachers,whom they show respect to. In a word,both school education and family education are very important in the growth of children. 10.我的校园生活观(My View of School Life) 1.有些学生热衷于校园活动(school activities)。 2.有些学生愿意将时间用于读书上。 3.你倾向于哪一种?为什么? My View of School Life There are mainly two types of students you are very likely to meet with in any school. One type likes to be engaged in all kinds of social activities while the other is reluctant to do so because they want to spend more time on their studies. As to the first type of students,they believe that by getting involved in social activities,they can gain insights into some things a textbook can never teach them. And the skills and experience they obtain during the work will be of great benefit to them in their future careers. However,for students who are absorbed in their studies,academic work is of great importance. They believe that the chief and the only task for a student is to study. Therefore,they treasure years of school life and try to make full use of it. Im in favour of taking an active part in school activities. I dont think it will waste my time,on the contrary,I can develop my personalities. I hold the opinion that students
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