高考英语基础写作---新闻报道ppt课件

.,认真审题。新闻/活动报道也是记叙文的一种,但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来,还要注意个人情感的表达。而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道,因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。巧用形容词，副词使文章生动形象（vivid）,.,新闻报道的第一部分往往为全文的中心句(topicsentence),因此这个句子中常包含四大元素what(事件),when(时间),where(地点)和who(人物)，有时也会补充说明另一个因素why（事情发生的原因或目的）。而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节,例如how(具体过程)等。,.,假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌,上个周末你校举办了一场面向全绍兴的诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社的通讯员,为这个活动写一篇报道。,.,.,1.欣赏诗歌2.背诵作品3.交流想法4.积极参加5.从没参加过更的活动6.高度评价7.与交流8.释放压力9.快乐地成长10.对敏感,.,Inordertohelpteenagerslearnmoreandappreciatepoetry,apoetrycontestwasheldintheJishanHighSchoollastSunday,onMay24th,2015.Morethan200seniorstudentsfromdifferenthighschoolsalloverShaoxing,gatheredtogether,recitingtheirworksandexchangingthoughts.Thiscontestachievedagreatsuccess,duringwhicheveryonetookanactivepartinit,expressingthatneverbeforehadtheyexperiencedamoreamazingcompetition.,.,Manycompetitorsthoughthighlyofthisactivity,addingthattheyhadamuchclosercommunicationwithpoemsthroughthiscompetition.Itiswellknownthatpoetrycouldhelpusreleasepressureandgrowupmorehappily.Therefore,wedbetterthinkasapoetdoes,thatis,besensitiveandsinceretowardstheworld.,.,活动报道的第一段第一句是开门见山地介绍活动的情况：活动的时间、地点、目的和内容都包含在里面。第二句包含了参与人数与活动详情,范文用了伴随状语（高级结构）recitingtheirworksandexchangingthoughts连接了这两个内容。第二段中用了一个非限制性定语从句（takeanactivepartin）和现在分词伴随状语(expressingthatamazing)以及倒装结构描述了比赛细节（高级结构）。另外，还从参赛者角度出发高度评价了（thinkhighlyof）此次活动。第三段针对“poetry”阐述个人感受和评价，“点题”并呼应前文。,.,巩固练习1,假设你是林华,本月是你们学校的英语月,全校开展了丰富多彩的活动.上周五你们有幸邀请浙江大学外籍教师Hudson教授给你们班开了一个题为HowtoImproveEnglish”的英语讲座,请你根据提示和下面表格的内容,用英语为校报写一篇120词左右的报道.词汇：evaluation评价.注意：1.报道的开头已经给出,不计入总词数；2.可根据内容要点适当发挥,使行文连贯；3.行文中不得提及考生所在学校；,.,.,做了一个讲座methodsofhowtoimproveEnglish对留下了深刻的印象难忘的吸引了的注意力积极参加高度评价从来没有体验过更好的全身心投入只有才能,.,ThismonthisourschoolsEnglishmonth.WeheldallkindsofcolorfulEnglishactivities.LastFridaywehadthehonorofinvitingProfessorHudson,aforeignteacherfromZhejiangUniversity,togiveanEnglishlecturetothestudents.AllthestudentsattendedandweredeeplyimpressedbythisunforgettableEnglishlecture.,.,Mr.HudsonbeganthelecturewithaninterestingEnglishstory,whichdrewtheattentionofallthestudentsatonce.Anddelivereditinaneasy-understandingway.Deeplyabsorbed,everyonetookanactivepartintheactivitiesinthislecture.Afterthelecture,manystudentsinterviewedthoughthighlyofit.sayingthatneverbeforehadtheyexperiencedsointerestingalecture.Fromhislecture,IrealizedthatonlyifweputourheartsintoitcanweimproveourEnglish.,.,(2008年佛山一模)上周,一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员,请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。写作内容,.,1.learnabout了解2.betosetfor将前往3.placesofinterest名胜古迹4.anexchangevisit回访5.gathertogether集中6.getcloseto靠近7.thebest-knowntouristspot最著名的旅游景7.attheinvitationof在的邀请下8.beimpressedby被给予深刻印象,.,句2：(1)感受校园生活：_句3：(2)参观著名景点：_(3)体验当地文化：_,词汇整理翻译或完成下列短语。,learn/knowaboutthelocalculture,.,句4：(4)洁净的市容,友善的学生,美味的食品：_句5：(5)回访：_,thecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood/thecleannessofthecity,kindnessofthestudentsandnicenessoffood(注意并列词组的词性一致),anexchangevisit,.,难句翻译请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。句4：洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。,TheBritishstudentsweredeeplyimpressedbythecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood./WhatexpressedtheBritishstudentsdeeplywasthecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfood./Thecleancity,friendlystudentsanddeliciousfoodleftadeepimpressionontheBritishstudents.,.,句5：华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。,Inreturn,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolareinvitedtovisitBritainnextMarch./AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.,.,1.Duringtheirone-weekstayinFoshan,thestudentsexperiencedthecampuslifeofChinesestudents.在佛山为期一周的逗留中,这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。2.TheBritishstudentswereimpressedbythekindnessofChinesestudents.英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。,相关句式,.,3.AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.在一个英国学校的邀请下,华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。,.,4.Itwasalsosaidthatpoetrycouldhelpthemreleasepressure.据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。5.Itslikelythatthatfamoussportsstarwillalsorunwiththetorch.很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。,.,连句成篇,参考范文HuawenMiddleSchoolinFoshanCityreceivedagroupofstudentsfromBritainlastweek.Duringtheirone-weekstayinFoshan,thestudentsexperiencedthecampuslifeofChinesestudents.,.,TheyalsovisitedsomeplacesofinterestinFoshanandlearnedaboutthelocalculture.TheBritishstudentswereimpressedbythekindnessofChinesestudents,cleannessofthecityandnicenessoffood.AttheinvitationofaBritishschool,38studentsinHuawenMiddleSchoolaretosetforBritainforanexchangevisitnextMarch.,.,假设你是英文早报的兼职小记者,伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线,你将为这一事件进行报道,以下是报道的内容。,.,写作内容,.,参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员theLondonOrganizingCommitteeoftheOlympicGames火炬传递TorchRelay温德米尔LakeWindermere,Asisreported,theLondonOrganizingCommitteeoftheOlympicGamesreleasedtherouteoftheLondon2010OlympicTorchRelayonNovember7.TheOlympicTorchwillvisitsomeofBritainsbest-knowntouristspots,covering1,000villages,townsandcitiesacrossthecountryandreachingmorethan95%ofBritains62millionpopulation.,.,The70-daytorchrelaywillbecarriedinasteamboatacrossLakeWindermere,onarowboatontheThames,andonhorsebackelsewhere.AccordingtotheCommittee,mostofthe8,000torchbearerswillbeordinarymembersofthepublic,butitslikelythatfamoussportsstarslikeDavidBeckhamwillalsorunwiththetorch.,.,精华点评,新闻报道的关键在于客观，通俗易懂。考生写作的时候不用考虑花哨的词汇,但是要注意新闻文体的常用语，如本文用到的Asisreported.,Accordingto.等。本文的另一个写作难点就是写作内容较多,考生要运用各种技巧进行信息点合并融合,如范文通过现在分词作伴随状语把具体详情中的第一、二、三点进行了合并。,.,而第四点，范文用了一个短语the70-daytorchrelay表达出来,简洁明了。至于最后一点关于火炬传递者,很多考生喜欢用thereare8,000torchbearers这样的therebe句型,这个句型不仅容易显得累赘,而且容易出现语法错误,因此范文直接用mostofthe8,000torchbearerswil