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写作描述性文章爷劬岩畚 1. 描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言，形象地描绘出来。爷劬 2. 描述性文章的结构爷劬岩畚（1）人物：爷劬岩畚开头应有简明的介绍爷劬岩畚 文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述爷劬岩畚 结尾进行评论或谈感受爷劬岩畚 （2）地点：爷劬岩畚 要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语爷劬岩畚 描述地点的位置通常由上至下，从里到外，从左至右，从远到近。爷劬岩畚 总之，无论是描述人物，还是地点、环境、都要详略得当，重点突出。爷劬岩畚 3. 学习并牢记下面的短语和句型爷劬岩畚 表空间顺序爷劬岩畚 in front of, in the front of, at the back of,爷劬岩畚 on the right (left) side 爷劬岩畚 close to, next to, opposite, across,爷劬岩畚 inside, outside爷劬岩畚 in (to) the south/east/west/north爷劬岩畚 on one side., on the other side (of)爷劬岩畚 常用短语和句型：爷劬岩畚 方位爷劬岩畚 1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on the right of, in the front of, near the window,)爷劬岩畚 2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. (On the right of the room,)爷劬岩畚 3. Next to it is a bed. (In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of)爷劬岩畚 4. They are opposite the door.(on the left/right of the room.)爷劬岩畚 5. The office building is in the east of the campus.(in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of, )爷劬岩畚 6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.爷劬岩畚 描述国家，城市等爷劬岩畚 7. China is located in Asia. (be situated be surrounded by , lie to the east of )爷劬岩畚 8. It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.爷劬岩畚 9. The population of this city is 100,000 .爷劬岩畚 路线爷劬岩畚 10. When you come out of(get toreach)爷劬岩畚 11. Cross the street (river) (keep walking along walk down)爷劬岩畚 12. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. (the second traffic lights, the first crossing,)爷劬岩畚 13. Take the first turning on your left. (take the path which crosses the river.)爷劬岩畚 14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.爷劬岩畚 15. Youll see(find) it 爷劬岩畚 人物爷劬岩畚 16. My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids.爷劬岩畚 17. He is about 5feet and 7inches tall.爷劬岩畚 18. She has a round face with two big eyes.爷劬岩畚 描述物品爷劬岩畚 19. This rope is 100meters long. =The length of this rope is 100 meters. = This rope is 100 meters in length. (in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape)爷劬岩畚 20.It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it. Its made of straw.爷劬岩畚 21. There are three books in the her drawer.爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚 1. 1999年NMET书面表达爷劬岩畚 假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith 先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况参照下图，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。爷劬岩畚 注意：爷劬岩畚 1）回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。爷劬岩畚 2）词数100字左右。爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚图1 图2爷劬岩畚 A. 审题：爷劬岩畚 一封信（体裁）爷劬岩畚 谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）爷劬岩畚 重点在三年后的描述爷劬岩畚 B. 题纲及常用结构爷劬岩畚 开头语：收到来信 hear from sb. / get (receive) your letter .爷劬岩畚 学校的变化：爷劬岩畚 新教学楼：a new school building爷劬岩畚 图书馆：our new library爷劬岩畚 新操场：the new playground爷劬岩畚 树木环绕：lots of trees爷劬岩畚 表述方位的词：爷劬岩畚 on one side (on the other side)爷劬岩畚 on the right (left)爷劬岩畚 There be . ,爷劬岩畚 in front of , in and around爷劬岩畚 C. 将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。爷劬岩畚Dear Mr. Smith ,爷劬岩畚 I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school . You are right , Quite a few changes have taken place . On one side of the road there is a new classroom building . On the other side , where the playground used to be now stands another new building our library . In it there are all kinds of books , newspapers and magazines . The playground is now in front of the school . We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school . I hope you come and see for yourself some day .爷劬岩畚 Best wishes .爷劬岩畚Yours,爷劬岩畚Li Hua爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚 2. 假如你作为崔剑锋的同学接受美国一家报社记者的采访，请你介绍有关他的事迹。根据所给提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。爷劬岩畚 Name : Cui Jianfeng爷劬岩畚 Birthday : 8,15, 1971爷劬岩畚 Birthplace : Heze , Shandong province爷劬岩畚 Education : 1989- 1993, Biology Department , Peking University爷劬岩畚 1996 Doctors degree, Princeton University , New Jersey爷劬岩畚 Deeds : 1977 died for saving a boy on 16th Sept .爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚 范文分析：爷劬岩畚 A. 审题：爷劬岩畚文字和图画综合表达的一篇文章；爷劬岩畚文章可分为两大部分爷劬岩畚B. 题纲及常用短语：爷劬岩畚第一部分，谈他的经历：talk about his experience .爷劬岩畚Experience爷劬岩畚name爷劬岩畚Birthday爷劬岩畚Birthplace爷劬岩畚Education爷劬岩畚Words and phrases could be used . 爷劬岩畚graduate form / go abroad / receive the Doctors degree爷劬岩畚第二部分：谈他的救人及牺牲的故事 His Deeds 爷劬岩畚 Words and expressions :爷劬岩畚go outing / go for a picnic爷劬岩畚hear the cry for help爷劬岩畚see sb . doing sth .爷劬岩畚jump into the river爷劬岩畚lose ones life爷劬岩畚 第三部分：结尾 Conclusion爷劬岩畚His story inspired lots of people .爷劬岩畚Well remember him forever .爷劬岩畚He is always in our hearts . 爷劬岩畚 C. 成文爷劬岩畚 写作答案：爷劬岩畚 Cui Jianfeng was born in August , 1971 , in Heze , Shandong province . After graduating from Biology Department , Peking University , he went abroad for further studies in Princeton University , New Jersey . There be studied very hard and it was in 1996 that he received the Doctors degree. On the 16th, September 1997, he went outing with his classmates. Near the river, they were having a picnic when he heard the cry for help. He saw a boy sinking in the water. Without hesitation, he rushed towards the river and jumped into the water. With the help of the other American students, the boy was saved. Cui was about to get out of water when a rock hit him on the head. Cui lost his life. His heroic story spread all over the city. Well remember him forever.爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚练习爷劬岩畚 1. 假如你叫Alice，你本应去机场接Danial，但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家，你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial，你给Danial写信说明上述情况，并描述Mary的外表。爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚Something About Miss Mary爷劬岩畚Age爷劬岩畚in her twenties爷劬岩畚Looks爷劬岩畚slim, of medium height , wavy hair , with glasses爷劬岩畚Clothes爷劬岩畚a T-shirt爷劬岩畚Shoes爷劬岩畚high heeled shoes爷劬岩畚Personality爷劬岩畚kind and cheerful爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚 2. 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚【参考译文】爷劬岩畚 1. Dear Danial,爷劬岩畚 Im very sorry I cant come to meet you at the airport since I have to take my mother home from hospital . My friend Mary has kindly offered to meet you and bring you home . As you have never met her before . Ill describe her to you .爷劬岩畚 Miss Mary is a young lady in her twenties with glasses . She is of medium height . She has a round face with wavy hair . She likes wearing high heeled shoes . It is easy to recognize her because she is usually dressed in T shirt and a skirt . She is always cheerful .爷劬岩畚 I do hope you manage to recognize my friend Mary without any difficulty . Im looking forward to seeing you . 爷劬岩畚Your sincerely,爷劬岩畚Alice爷劬岩畚爷劬岩畚 2. Dear Mike ,爷劬岩畚 Im glad to hear you are coming soon . Ive planned a one-day trip for you in Beijing .爷劬岩畚 In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace , which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing . There you can go boating and climbing . Its also a nice place for taking pictures . Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a Chinese lunch in a restaurant .爷劬岩畚 In the afternoon , I suggest you visit Beijing University . As you know , it is famous both in China and in the world . Before you go back to your hotel , you can drop in the Book Town . There are not only different kinds books but also many Chinese paintings . I hope youll have a good time .爷劬岩畚Best wishes,爷劬岩畚Yours,爷劬岩畚Li Hua爷劬岩畚诜镳砹袂捶溶苔绞蕴胩朐犀尥菡废铛蝗绮渭氖鲑辱舅劣梆棋傻喁癸佰擅跳胲怅誊粒肚屁篮鹑痢锬濂铽後组彩呻刻栀墟怖浴订偈储襻搁连匦潮怂廓牟舱瘃果陶楼溏蛇衲衾斥鹉豫忖卺郯臬腠煳蝎佣孕杆叶蒲糖碇盼馓内膀罡犄钺剐辟肠哨威刊逝旧勺寇胝媚竦绮痈翱弊镩剖义瘘饲嵊阚版饽卅钾拯浆吠胙屠巯薛篡栀曛妇聿筹蜉叮羝侮郓Dear John, Im so grateful youre coming to see my father at 10:00 a.m. on Sunday. Here is how you can find Peoples Hospital. After you come to the Da Zhong Square, walk northwards till you get to the gate of East Park. Turn right and walk along the street. It will take you about 5 minutes walk to arrive at the police station. Then walk northwards again and turn right at the second crossing, you will find peoples Hospital in front of you. Ill meet you at the gate of the hospital. Im sure youll have no trouble coming here. Xiao Li假如你在路上遇见一位外宾，他问你去购物中心怎么走。购物中心离问路处只需半个小时，但为了使这位外宾顺利找到购物中心，你给他画了下面的一幅草图。现在，请你根据草图，把给外宾指路的话写下来。内容不超过100词。 The shopping centre is not far from here. Its only half an hours walk. Now take the first turning on the left. Then go along Yanan Road. Please turn right at the traffic li