2013高考英语二轮书面表达(图文为主)训练(03)及参考范文.doc

2013高考英语二轮书面表达（图文为主）训练（03）及参考范文书面表达 (满分30分)假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点：1活动的策划； 2教室的布置； 3活动的内容； 4你的感想。注意：1短文词数不少于100；2开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；4不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.第一节 基础写作写作内容你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的方法和心得。请根据下表提供的中文提纲，选择相关的信息写一篇发言稿。 学习方法 学习效果背诵范文运用英语思维，进行模仿性写作多阅读英文文章吸取语言材料多听英文广播提高听力水平学习语法正确表达多写日记在做中学多练习口语提高口头技能参考他人的习作取长补短写作要求 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 开头与结尾已经给出。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Ladies and gentlemen,Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.-Thats all. Thank you. (基础写作参考范文one possible version)Ladies and gentlemen,Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.Firstly, I often recite good and beautiful English articles, which helps me think in English when I imitate English writing. Secondly, I also read English articles widely so that I can take in as many language materials as possible. Thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, I think that they are important to for all of us learn about some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot. Fourthly, I keep a diary every day so that I can learn by writing. Besides / In addition /Whats more, I often refer to others articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others.Thats all. Thank you. 第二节 读写任务 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The generation gap between students and teachers is becoming more significant with only 3.3 percent out of a survey group of 1,000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts.In todays educational environment, teachers are positioned to be the authority figure for learning instead of also becoming good friends in the life of students.As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “ apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial (偏心).“ I feel sad to hear such remarks”, said Yu Yi , a well-known special-class teacher.She recalled that in the past, teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on the novels while sitting on the grass during a break. But today, study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers.“Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted (传授) but also where students are taught how to be an upright person,” Yu said. “The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state. ”Yang Xiong, director of the Juvenile Research Institute, said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially responsible.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因;2. 以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法,包括如下要点:( 1 ) 你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法,为什么?( 2 ) 你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的,如何才能建立这种关系?写作要求1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 标题自定；3. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。- (读写任务参考范文one possible version)Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship Students are becoming unwilling to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students. While some students might have doubts, I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot. In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become frie