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中考英语作文范文赏析：梦想与未来【九、梦想和未来】这是一个老话题，中考常考，难度较小。1.我的梦想是当一名医生（my dream is doctor）I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: to be a doctor. Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.2.以后十年内我的生活（MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS）In ten years,I think I ll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I dont like living alone. And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on business.In ten years,i will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I thin2010年江苏苏州中考英语作文范文 假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影太空大灌篮的主题曲I Believe I Can Fly。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛。内容要点：1.这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性;2.自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功;3.梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难;4.没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功;5.你的感悟(考生自拟，至少一点)。注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;2.参考词汇：自信confidence(n.)3.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息I Believe I Can FlyI Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly. 中考英语作文范文 I Believe I Can FlyI Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly. This song tells us that confidence is very important. When a person has confidence,he believes in himself. He believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try new things. Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties. No one can achieve success without them. If you believe you can fly,then you can really fly someday.I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties. Ill remember confidence is the promise for achieving success.中考英语作文范文赏析：新生事物评价【八、新生事物评价（热点）】这是中考热点，这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考试时心中不乱。典型例句：1.Computer is becoming more and more important2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of（妨碍） our study.4.We can do lots of things with（有多种方法来应对/处理） it。5. It makes our life more easy6.Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.例文1、网上购物Doing Shopping OnlineWith the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You neednt step out of the room.It seems easy and quick. But theres always a trap（陷阱） online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, youd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.2、关于中学生使用手机赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。注意：1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：100左右；Dear Editor,Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, Yours truly,Wang Lin参考作文：Dear Editor,Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to（应该） make the best use of it. Suppose（试设想） theres a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. Therere also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when were tired of our studies. In my opinion, its not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.Yours truly,Wang Lin3、书面表达。（计10分）假如你叫李平。最近，你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见（见下表）。现在，请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。注意：1.信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容；2.书信格式正确；3.书写整洁；4.词数在80个左右。生词提示：electronic adj.电子的 explanation（S）n.解释，说明发表意见者 对使用电子词典的不同意见同学 有用，方便，节省查阅时间家长 便于携带，多数家庭买得起英语教师 对单词的解释太简单，不该使用本人 会使我们变懒惰，不该使用Dear Editor，Recently（最近） I made a survey（做调查） about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful，convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words.The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesnt think we should use it，because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldnt use it.Yours，Li Ping4.看图作文同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。要求： 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 词数 80 100。参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n. 气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.THE POLLUTIONS One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air. People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises. Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。范文：观点一The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.范文：观点二The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.中考英语作文范文赏析：旅游与介绍地方【七、旅游和介绍地方篇（热点）】中考高频率话题，出题形式灵活。典型例句：1. Last Sunday（Saturday,） ,it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy,）2. I got up very early （late）。 After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus，3. We enjoyed ourselves。4. We forgot the time. We didnt come back until 5 oclock。5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy。6. I thought I would never forget this trip。7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。8. We visited a lot of places of interest。9. We had a good time there。10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap。例文：1、（四川自贡）北京将迎来2008年的奥运会，请以主人的身份向外国朋友介绍一下北京和北京几个著名的景点。根据以下提示写一篇短文。1.北京是一个历史悠久的城市；2.北京有许多名胜古迹；3.紫禁城是最受来宾欢迎的景点之一；4.故宫非常漂亮和著名；5.长城也是非常美丽可去一看的地方6.天安门广场是一个好去处，可去漫步。注： 字数80左右。 请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯、意思完整、符合逻辑。 参考词汇：紫禁城 The Forbidden City 故宫 The Summer Palace 天安门广场 Tiananmen Square参考作文：Beijing is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them.The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors. It is very big and you can learn much about the history of China from it. The Summer Palace is beautiful and famous, too. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk.I hope you will enjoy your staying in Beijing.2、（ 山东威海） 请你根据下面提供的信息用英语为刘公岛写一篇题为Welcome to Liu Gong Island 的旅游宣传材料。要点：刘公岛概况 威海东部，岛长4.08km，宽1.5km, 面积3.15km2, 距陆地船程20 分钟，花草树木覆盖，历史博物馆、动物园等景点，水、陆环岛游等活动交通方式 （来威海）汽车、火车、飞机等，交通便利浏览时间 一天要求：1. 包括以上要点，但不拘泥于其顺序，适当使用描绘性语言，展示刘公岛魅力。2. 词数100 词左右（已给出的开头、结尾不计入词数）。Welcome to Liu Gong IslandThe summer vacation is coming. Where would you like to visit? Havent you decided?Come to Liu GongIsland! _ _Wish you a good trip!参考答案Welcome to Liu Gong IslandThe summer vacation is coming. Where would you like to visit? Havent you decided? Come to Liu Gong Island!Liu Gong Island is in the east of Weihai, which has an area of 3.15km2. It is 4.08 km long, 1.5km wide. It will take you 20 minutes to get to the island from the travel port by ship. The history museum on the island is educational. The zoo is interesting to visit. And it is more interesting to travel around the island either on land or by boat. There are all kinds of trees and grass everywhere.Its very easy to travel to Weihai. You can come by bus, by train, or by plane. You can spend a day happily on the island.It is a good place to visit. Visitors from all over the world come to visit it every year.Wish you a good trip.中考英语作文范文赏析：写人记事【六、写人记事篇】这是中考出项频率最高的话题，其特点是难度相对较小，学生都有话可写，但掌握一些基本句子和模仿范文对夺取高分非常必要。典型例句：1. His name is Jack。2. He was born in London in 1982。3. He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。4. He is 20 years old。5. He comes from England。6. He is a good ping-pong player。7. He is medium build（中等身材）。8. He has short hair。9. He is outgoing（外向的）。 Every one likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us。10. He teaches English very well。11. He works very hard. He works in No.5 Middle School。12. He loves watching football games after work。13. He often helps me with my English。14. At the age of six, he began to play table tennis。例文：1、假如你在2008奥运会期间碰到外国朋友，请你介绍进入NBA美国球队的中国球员易建联的情况。温馨提示：主题鲜明、语句通顺、意思连贯、适当发挥、拼写正确、书写工整。字数80左右。易建联 生日 1987.10.27 出生地 广东 身高 2.12米经历 2003年他成为大学生（college）2000年1月入选中国国家篮球队（National Basketball Team）2007年7月进入美国NBA，继姚明后的第二个中国球员爱好 他喜欢听流行音乐、玩电脑。其他 现在还在努力学习英语。Yi Jianlian , a famous basketball player, is from Guangdong, China. He was born on October 27th.1987. He is 2.12 meters tall. This handsome boy became a college student in 2003. He was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in January, 2004. This young man is the second Chinese player in NBA after Yao Ming. In his spare time, he likes listening to pop music and playing computer games. Now he is trying his best to learn English well.2、（福建莆田）假如你是李华，你从报纸上看到2008北京奥运会志愿者的招聘广告。请你用英文写封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况（见下表）表示愿意为奥运会做一些工作，请组委会给予考虑，并能尽早予以答复，词数：80左右。姓名 李华 年龄 16简历 我市某中学学生爱好 绘画、体育、唱歌、演讲、英语口语获奖情况 2007年12月获我市中学生英语演讲比赛一等奖身体状况 健康联系电话示词汇：1.志愿者voluteer 2.作为work as 3.答复reply to 4.比赛contestSir/Madam,I read your ad.（广告） in the newspaper yesterday. Im writing to tell you that Id like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics.My name is Li Hua. Im sixteen. I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English. I am proud that I won the first prize in our citys English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact Im healthy and strong.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I w