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2008年12月六级作文题 How to improve students mental health 1、大学生的心理健康十分重要 2、因此，学校可以. 3、我们自己应当.Nowadays,college students mental health has aroused a public concern,because students mental health is as significant as their academic capacity. Without healthy psychology college student will never lead a happy life, let alone finish their study and create their splendid future.Obviously, proper measures can be taken to prevent the problems in our university. To begin with,more opportunities should be offered for students to relax themselves, after all there are many pressures such as the study ,love or family burden for our college students . Whats more, more mental health classes can be opened to carry the healthy and optimistic life value.Of course, our college students also can adopt some effective measures to relieve ourselves. For example, whenever you encounter some problems,talking to your friends or your parents is a wise choice to release your pressure or pain. If you really get into trouble, another way is to consult the psychological expert, because they can come up with a solution to help you.总评：六级作文其实不需要太多的高级词汇，因为高级词汇你真正在考试的时候是想不出来的。还不如在文章的层次方面，句式方面稍下功夫，再加上几个固定搭配（最地道，最强大）就完全搞定了思路分析：第一段：第一句现状+原因，大学生健康已经引起了广泛关注，因为心理健康和学术能力一样重要。第二句：拟无论证，如果没有健康的心理，学生无法快乐生活，更不用说完成学术学习更不用说迎接美好未来第二段：第一句：总写 大学可以采取措施来防止心理问题 第二句：第一种措施 提供更多的放松的机会，毕竟大学生确实有比如 学习，爱情，家庭负担方面的压力。第三句 学校可以开设心理健康课程来传播正确的人生观和乐观的生活态度第三段：第一句：总写 大学生也可以采取措施自我保护，第二句，第一种方式：倾诉 第三句 如果真的已经有心里健康问题的，可以咨询心理专家来解决。2009.06 On the Importance of a Name1.有人认为名字很重要，2.也有人认为无关紧要，3.我认为Some people place much emphasis on the importance on a name. And to them, a good name means success or fortune. For example, when they choose the day in which their shop is open, 8 is a fortunate number because they equate 8 to wealth. Furthermore, they even deem that a good name will bring their children the splendid future, so they spare no effort to contemplate their children name.Other people, however, argue that name is just a symbol of a person or an item, so it is unnecessary to attach too much superstitious meaning. Obviously, success depends on intelligence and diligence instead of a name. And without extensive and intensive knowledge and persistent hard work, you will never succeed even if you own a good name.From my perspective, name is indeed just a mark for individual or for anything else. Therefore, only through study and effort can we reach our destination rather than through a good name.分析：第一段 共4句 第一句 一些人很重视名字（现状） + 第二句 原因 第三四句 具体例子 第二段共3句 第一句 另一些人的观点 +原因 第二句 真正的成功需要的因素 第三句 让步论证 成功的因素 第三段 共两句 （简洁明了） 概况总结 第一句 名字只是什么 第二句 要想成功必须怎样2009年12月6级写作满分范文胡平原创ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtClasses?Kids play an indispensable role in our Chinese household; Parents desire their children to be a talent, so they send their children to various training center, such as English training, Piano training , painting etc. As a result, we are faced with the question that “should parents send their kids to art classes”. 3句 Art classes ,some people conceive that,can develop the childrens art cultivation and versatile quality, as well as their different interest. Obviously, art classes benefit the future of children. However, others argue that due to the overburden of students,it is unnecessary to send children to art classes. Because physical health and psychological health is of great importance for children, proper exercise and play are prior to taking art classes.Sending children to art classes, from my perspective, is expected to be determined by the interest of children instead of parents purpose. Provided that children are really obsessed by art classes, our parents should support them; or children should not be forced to take art classes.2010.6六级满分范文（胡平原创）2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of ChineseWith the prevalence of computer, work and study can be finished on the computer. Consequently most of literal work can be processed by Pin Yin. Meanwhile learning English becomes increasingly popular. Obviously, Chinese standard of young people is declining.4句Considering the phenomenon and the fact, due/proper/suitable attention should be given to the Study of Chinese. On the one hand, As a Chinese young student, the culture of Chinese is expensive and intensive; and every young individual should be adept in his native culture. On the other hand, as the whole country, if the study of Chinese is being ignored, it will lose its identity and its future, for the reason that culture determines the confidence of a nation and its future. 5句It is imperative to pay more attention to the Study of Chinese; or our young people will lose the essence of the nation and even lose their nation confidence if they are in other country. 2-3句2010年6级写作胡平原创满分范文MyViewsonUniversityRankingMy Views on University RankingUniversity Ranking becomes a prevalent tendency especially when the senior high school students apply for their ideal university. In order to attract the superior students,every university spares no effort to rank it to the top one.第一段：现状+原因Undoubtedly, university ranking will do harm not only to individual but also to our society profoundly. On the one hand, university ranking can influence high school students judgement. Perhaps some students just intend to enter the top ranking university ignoring their own interest. On the other hand, intending to become the top ranking university, some universities invest large amount of fund on the superficial facilities instead of supporting the