受宠的应用文--高考英语作文ppt课件

,命题形式,写作形式,书信类型,多为文字提示；半开放性和提纲式,书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、海报、演讲稿、欢迎辞等,求职信、投诉信、慰问信、建议信、感谢信、道歉信、咨询信等,1,2011-2015全国1卷高考作文,2,记住以下用于各种场合的套语喔，它们可以帮你提分哒,3,一、表达“活动安排与目的”Thetalentshow,whosethemeis“InnovationsonCampus”(主题)，willtakeplaceinourschoolgym(地点)from8:30to11:30amonApril30th(时间).2.WearescheduledtoattendtheexamonJune7thand8th.3.Recently,inordertoimprovestudentswritingskills,ourschoolwebsitesetupanewcolumncalledEnglishWriting.4.LastFriday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines,whichwasaimedat/withthepurposeofadvocatingandpromotingtheChineseculture.或aimingto/hopingto/soasto/inordertodosth上周五，我们班邀请了一位年老的工艺师来教我们如何做面人，这旨在倡导和弘扬中国文化。,4,二、表达“情绪”1.Hearingthatsomeforeignstudentswillcometoourschoolforculturalexchange,wereoverjoyed/morethanhappy/extremelyexcited.2.YoucantimaginehowexcitedIwastohearthemusicaliscomingtotown.3.SoanxiousamIthatIcantfallasleepeverynight.4.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldntwaittoopenmygift.,5,三、表达“个人决心与愿望”1.Nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.2.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbehelpfultoyou.3.IfImluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IlltrytoapplyallIvelearnttomywork.4.Aslongaswetryourbest,theresnoneedtofeelregretforthesefailures.四、表达“自信”ImconfidentthatImsuitableforthiskindofjob.2.Imsure/convincedthatIcanperfectlyliveupto(不辜负,符合)yourexpectation.,6,五、联系方式：Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactmeat12345678910.六、最后期限：YouresupposedtopostyourarticletousbeforeMay1.七、报名方式：1)AnyonewhoisinterestedinthisactivityshouldsignupforitbeforeMay1.2)ThosewhowouldliketorollincancometoStudentsUnionorcontactusbeforeMay1.,7,其它写作形式,8,DearAmericanGuest,欢迎词写作,假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3.表达对客人的祝愿。写作要求：1.词数不少于100；2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称,9,DearAmericanGuests,Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckyenoughtohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekActivities.Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogramistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogramconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.TheshowwillbeginattwooclockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre,lastingthreehours.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.Isincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.Thatsall!Thankyou.,10,记叙文写作,注意事项：用过去时，以时间为线索展开。常用atfirst,afterwards,atthesametime或meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,soon,eventually等。2.避免啰嗦或写成流水账。对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方要详细叙述。3.描写故事的常用句型：Iwasdoing.when.Iwasabouttodo.when.TiredasIfelt,Istillkeptdoing.Amazedat.,I.Notuntil.didIleavethehospital.ThemomentIheardthenews,I.Onhearingthenews,I.7)Withouthesitation,Irusheduptohimand.8)Heleftwithoutsayingaword.9)Itoccurredtomethat.10)Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.11)Hearingthis,thewholeclassburstintolaughter.12)Twohourshadpassedbeforewerealizedit.13)Eventuallymyhardworkpaidoff.,11,4.用于故事升华的表达：1)TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.2)FromthisexperienceIhavelearntthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.3)Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.4)NotuntilthendidIrealizethatwordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative.5)OnlythendidIcometorealizethatitwashissuggestionsthathelpedmeovercomethesetbacksandachievemygoal.,12,2013浙江卷请以“OnethingImproudof”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情经过；2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。OnethingImproudof,Onepossibleversion：OnethingImproudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfilourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”,13,近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示向你的美国朋友David介绍介绍调查结果，内容包括：调查数据2.对校车的担忧3.你的看法Recently,asurveyonschoolbuseshasbeenconductedonawebsite.,图表题写作,14,Recently,asurveyonschoolbuses(主题)hasbeenconductedonawebsite(范围/对象).Now,Imwritingtotellyousomerelevantinformationaboutit.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,only36.13%oftheintervieweestrustschoolbuses,while40.34%ofthemshowtheirdistrust.Andstill,23.53%ofthemarenotclearaboutit.Therearesomegoodreasonsaccountingfortheirdisbelief.Firstly,theyareafraidofabandonedvehiclesbeingused.Theyalsoworrythatschoolbuseswillbeoverloaded,sayingthatitmayleadtoserioustrafficaccidents.Inaddition,intheireyes,someschoolbusesarenotequippedwithsafetyequipmentlikesafetybelts.Frommyperspective,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoensurethesafetyofstudents.Yours,LiHua,DearDavid,15,怎样使文章更精彩？,16,失分追因,要点缺失不全面语法使用不准确英语表述不得体词汇句式不丰富表达啰嗦不简洁行文逻辑不连贯卷面马虎不整洁,书写不规范,写作的基本要求（四个词）,切题、完整、准确、连贯,17,具体做法：1.高级词汇2.带情感的副词3.短语代替单词4.高级句式5.连词6.连贯词,18,1.使用高级词汇(高中词汇、短语代替单词)lookatmewatch2)agood/niceman3)cantfindanywaytosolvetheproblemfailtofindasolutiontotheproblem4)Ourschoollifewillbedifficult.-5)Ifwenevergiveup,wemaysucceedfinally.Aslongas.,wearemorelikelytoachievesuccessintheend.6)Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.isalsoofimportance.7)Moreandmorestudentstaketheirphonetoschool.Anincreasingnumberofstudents.8)AsthenumberofEnglishlearnersisincreasing，itsnotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts.ontherise,glanceat,kindhearted/generous/easygoing,challenging,19,常见高级写作词汇必备1第一firsttobegin/startwith2第二secondinaddition/whatsmore3第三，最后finallylastbutnotleast4总之inawordtosumup/inconclusion/insummary5但是buthowever6机会chanceopportunity7选择choicealternative8考虑considertakeintoaccount/consideration9充足enoughadequate10影响effectinfluence,11最终finallyeventually12勤奋hardworkingdiligent13帮助helpassist14后果resultconsequence15应该shouldbesupposedto16缺点shortcomingdrawback17理解understandmakesenseof/figureout18可用usefulavailable19使用useemploy/makeuseof20种类繁多allkindsofawiderangeof,21也；和aswellasinadditionto/apartfrom22反对beagainstobjectto23厌烦beboredwithbefedupwith24忙于bebusyin/withbeoccupiedin/with25发生happenoccur/comeabout26几乎不hardlybarely27提高improvepromote28重要importantvital29立即immediatelyinaflash30不可能impossibleoutofthequestion,31有趣interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing32参加joinparticipate33幸运luckyfortunate34巨大largeenormous35许多manyalargequantityof36明显obviousapparent37丰富richabundant38小心谨慎becarefulbecautious39与不同bedifferentfromdiffer/varyfrom40渴望做beeagertodobedyingtodo/longtodo,41因为becauseofonaccountof42闻名befamousforhaveareputationfor43正在建设beingbuiltunderconstruction44感到舒心feelcomfortablefeelatease45在我看来inmyopinionasfarasIamconcerned46美化学校makeourschoolbeautifulbeautifyourschool47故意onpurposedeliberately/bydesign48置若罔闻refusetolistentoturnadeafearto49成功做某事succeedindoingsth.makeit50无法描述的美丽toobeautifultodescribebeautybeyonddescription,51一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperwayawellbehavedchild52节能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergyanenergysavinghouse53一位受到良好教育的妇女awomanwhohasreceivedgoodeducationawelleducatedwoman54精心组织的活动anactivitythatisorganizedwellawellorganizedactivity55一个爱好和平的人apersonwholovespeaceapeacelovingperson,2.使用带情感的形容词、副词Youpatientlytaughtmehowtowritearticles.2)Here,Imwritingtothankyouforsendingmesuchawonderfulgiftandgiveyouaspecialgiftinreturn.3)Thankyouforyourgeneroushelp.4)Unfortunately,Ilostmywalletonmywayhome.,26,3.使用状语，with/by/despite/inspiteof/becauseof/asaresultof等介词短语,带高级词汇的目的状语,例：Igotothelibrary.,Afterschool/Duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks.,Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonandenrichingmyknowledge,afterschool/duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.,27,tobroadenoneshorizontoenrichoneknowledge/schoollifetomeetthedemandsoftogetclosetonaturetorelaxonebrainstobuildupconfidencetobeautifytheenvironmenttogetabetterunderstandingof,28,(1)合并句子(丰富结构)_canIimprovemyoralEnglish_Ilearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries._，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons._，theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.(2)改变语态(避免单调)Besides，Iamabookloverandthebooks_thattheyareasgoodasnew.(3)使用省略(达到言简意赅的效果)Ifso/possible，pleasekeepquietaboutitbecausewewanttogivehimasurprise.,Notonly,Foronething,butalso,Foranother,aresowellkept,4.高级句式,(4)使用强调句型(突出语意)_affectthechildrenshealthydevelopment.(5)使用倒装句(增强说服力)_adifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.(6)使用虚拟语气(提出建议，委婉表达，易于接受)Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher.(7)使用with结构(丰富句式)Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring，_,Itisoverprotectionandtoomuchcarethat,Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemake,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging,(8)使用状语从句(强调谓语或句子)_，theywerealwaysavailable.(9)使用定语从句(表意丰富)However，Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime，_(10)使用名词性从句(体现扎实的语言功底)_childrenarethefocusoffamilies，shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.,WheneverIhaddifficulties,whichwasofvitalimportanceforme,Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthat,(11)使用非谓语动词(不定式、现在分词、过去分词以及动名词的使用，可使句式多样化)Whatsworse，theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake，_Thesedays，_arenotuncommon，_lifeandtheenvironment.,totallyignoringthenoticeablesignNoLitteringnearby,breakingtrafficrulesandlittering,causingseriousharmto,多种表达明天在会上要讨论的问题很重要。(简单句)Theproblemisveryimportant.Itwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.（并列句）Theproblemisveryimportantand/soitwillbedis