英语人物传记的写作ppt课件

.,人物传记的写作,.,文章分三部，写作四步走,文章结构：总分总,写作步骤第一步:审题目第二步：审要点第三步：写作文第四步：查遗漏,（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分）,写作原则,.,议论文,总：提出问题，表明观点分：分析问题，论证观点总：总结全文，提出希望,记叙文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：记叙事情的经过（时间）总：谈自己的感悟，体会,各种体裁的文章结构：,.,说明文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：按一定顺序说明事物或事理总：总结全文，表祝愿或提建议,应用文,总：引入话题，点明主题分：正文部分（要点）总：总结全文，表祝愿或希望,各种体裁的文章结构：,.,写作步骤,步骤一审题目,步骤二审要点,步骤三写作文,步骤四查遗漏,列要点，写提纲（列动词短语）,用巧关联词，突出主题句,默读文章，查时态，主谓一致，单复数，大小写和格式,读材料，定体裁格式，人称和时态,.,人物传记的写作模式：总：总体介绍人物（姓名，身份，地位，主要成就）成长经历，教育情况，兴趣爱好，性格品质，工作经历，感人事迹，突出成绩，功过是非总：总结评价人物：影响，启示,具体介绍人物：,分：,.,第一段：DianFosseyisnowregardedasoneoftheheroesofthe20thcentury.HeloveforthemountaingorillasinAfricataughtpeopleaboutdangerstheseanimalsarefacing.Dianwasanoutgoingandkindperson,andabletogainvaluabledataabouttheirlivesbybecomingacomaniontothem,教材P57（写作范文）,.,第二段：DianFosseywasborninCaliforniain1932.Hegraduatedfromuniversityin1954andworked.第三段：DianFosseyisstillaliveinourheartstothisday.Thankstoherresearch,wenowknowmoreaboutmountaingorillas.Withoutherwork,therewouldbeveryfewmountaingorillaslefttoday.,.,第一段：通过概括性的语言来提示人物的特征。,常用定语从句来写：1.Einstein,whodiscoveredthe“RelativityTheory”,iswellknownintheworld.2.HowardCarterisoneofthemostfamousexplorers(that)theworldhaseverknown.3.ShakesPeare,whowasasonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,writeplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld.4.TomasEdison,borninAmerica,wasagreatscientistandinventor.,.,第二段：具体介绍人物（主题句）按时间顺序介绍人物一生用议论性的语言刻画人物,.,第三段：总体评价：sb.Stillliveinonesheartsb.SetagoodexampleforsbberegardedbyeveryonePeoplesinghighpraiseforsbPeoplethinkhighlyofsbsb.Beregardedasremembersbforeverletusrealizethat.haveagreateffectonsbsb.teachusthat.,.,按时间顺序介绍人物一生的范文：（见学海导航上的写作范文：姚明）,.,YaoMing,whois2.26meterstalland134kginweight,isagreatbasketballplayerinChinaorevenintheworld.BorninShanghaionthe12thofSeptember,1980.HejoinedtheShanghaiBasketballClubin1997andbecameamemberofChinanationalteamin1998.TwoyearslaterhewasselectedasmemberofAsianAll-Starbasketballteam.In2002,ShanghaiwontheCampionofCBAandhewasamongthetopplayersintheteam.InthesameyearhewanttotheUSandbecameNumberOneOverallintheNBAdraft,whichhelpedhimjoinHoustonRockets.Now,asoneofthestarsintheNBA,YaoMingisworkinghardtolivehisdreamandshowtotheworldthatChinesebasketballplayerslovethisgametoo!.Fansareproudofhim.,.,第二节写作(满分25分)（2008湖南）请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：1、对该人物的简单介绍;2、喜欢该人物的理由;3、从该人物身上得到的启示。,用议论性的语言刻画人物的范文：,.,.,（2008年湖南高考满分作文）HelenKellerisconsideredasthemostfamousdisabledwomanintheworldduetoherstrengthandperseverance.Shewasbornabeautifulandintelligentgirlbutwhenshewas19monthsold,aterribledisasterhappenedtoherandledtoherdeafnessandblindnessforever.Butshetriedherbesttolearnspeakingandfinallysherealizedherdreamtobeanexcellentspeaker.FromwhereIstand,lifeisveryunfairtoherbutshenevergivesuptothedifficultiesshemeets.Sheneverbendsherheadbutalwaysholdithigh.ThatiswhyIadmirehersomuch.Helenteachesmethatweshouldnevergiveupandnevercomplain.Soweshouldlearnnottocrynomatterwhathurtandsorrowwefaceinourlife.,.,写作训练：,写一篇关爱因斯坦的人物传记,.,.,ThomasEdison,asweallknowthekingofinventing,hadmorethantenthousandsinventionsofhislife,manyofwhichhaveenormousinfluenceonourdailylife,suchaslightsandsoon.Tome,hesthemostintelligentandcreativemanintheworld.Heisfamousforhisworkinghard.Anincidentwhichweallknowisthatwhenbusyinhisexperimentonatrain,hecausedaterribleaccidentandthecaptainknockedhim,causinghimtobecomedeaf.Hewasdevotedtosciencetoomuch.Healwayssaidthat“Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration.”Fromhim,Ihaveknownthatifwewanttosucceed,weshouldntalwaysdependonourintelligenceortalent.Workinghardisalsoverynecessaryandthisiswhatwemostneednow.,.,ThomasEdison,borninAmerica,wasagreatscientistandinventor.Hewasonceconsideredtobeaboywhowasnotwortheducating.Infact,hewasamanfullofimagination.IadmireEdisonalotowingtohisgreatcontributionstotheworld.Hehadmorethan1000inventions.Inhiswholelife,hewasalwayseagertoknowhowthingsworked,whichhelpedhimtorealizehisdream.Hewasalsosodiligentthatheworkeddayandnight.Andthisexplainedwhyhehadsomanygreatinventions.Asweallknow,hisfamoussayingis“Geniusisoneperce