《择业观图表作文》PPT课件

图表作文注意事项,1.图表小作文关键要有数据！1)数据除了%表示外，还可以用分数，倍数，少了或多了多少表示，如less/moreby20%2)如果数字很多，挑最明显的，如最大最小，最特别的2.谋篇必须总体考虑！5句必须总分总1)总:说明图表展示的主要内容2)分:以数字,比例大至小的顺序说明数据3)总:结论,总的概括其中分的顺序也要下笔前想好如：从大到小或男女分开，切记不要简单罗列柱状图graph饼图piechart长条图;条线图barchart,此次作文出现的问题：1.结构不对：第一句（内容）和最后一句（小结）2.数据表达方式单一，且数据表达没有重点且没有层次，比较杂乱。3.直接用“teacher”“lawyer”指代内容。用指代内容。4.名词的单复数。可数名词的使用.好的方面：1.用上了图表作文的专业用语和之前讲述过的高级句型：ThereisnodenyingfactthatItisnofartoseekthatAccordingtothebarchart,wecanobviouslyfindoutthatAscanbeseenfromthegraph,wecandrawaconclusionthat2.过渡词：whatisworthmentioning,nevertheless（不过，然而）3.开头句表达呈多元化：,Ascanbeseenfromthebarchart,obviousdifferencehasbeenshowntousabouttheoutlookofchoosingjobsbetweenboysandgirls.陈科文Whatcanbeseenfromthechartisthedifferentopinionsofchoosingjobsbetweenboysandgirls.杨思殷Ascanbeseenfromthechart,greatdifferentchoicesofthejobhavedistinguishedbetweenboysandgirls.蔡莹莹Nowadays,afreshandoriginalsurveywascarriedout,aimingatworkingoutthedifferencebetweenboysandgirlsintheirpassionforchoosingthejob.罗俊彬,Recently,asurveyonthefutureoccupationalchoicewasconductedamongallstudentsinourschool.Evidentinthegraph,thechoiceofteachertopsthegirlslistwith35%,whichisthebottomoptiononboyswithonly5%,whiletheonlycommonchoiceliesindoctorwith20%respectivelyinbothsexes.Asforboysmostfavoritejob,itfallsonscientistwith30%,followedbybusinessmanwhichcomesinaclosesecondby5%less.Intheabovetwofields,thesamequantitiesofgirlsaregoinginforthemwith15%eachandlawyerisanothercareershowingthedifference,with15%inboysand10%ingirls.Although5percentofstudentsarestillnotclearabouttheirfuturejobs,aconclusionissafelydrawnthatthemajorityofstudentsholdapositiveattitudetowardstheiroccupationalchoice.,goinfor,1.参加Iamgoinginforanentranceexaminationnextyear.我明年参加入学考试。2.喜欢Henrywentinforswimming.3.从事Theywantedmetogoinfor