中考英语话题写作PPT.ppt

七年级(上)Units1-4(含Starter),第三部分高频话题写作指南,家庭写作导图近六年未涉及此话题，从近四年家庭类相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写家庭成员之间的深厚感情，如2011玉溪“我爱我的家人”。,thefamily,familymembers,thestorybetweenyourfamilies,showyourlovetoyourfamily,who,look,job,hobby,personality,when,how,who,where,yourfeeling,sendagift,writeacard/letter,dohouseworkorotherthingstohelpthem,亮点句型速成常用句型:YoudoasImentionedabove.Youcangetonwellwithyourparents.推荐句型：IfyoudoasImentionedabove,youcangetonwellwithyourparents.常用句型：Thepersonismymother.,推荐句型：ThepersonIlovemostismymother.Thepersonwhooftenencouragesmeismymother.开头句：ThepersonIlovemostis./Iwanttointroduce.toyou.中间句：1.Sheisawomanofmediumbuildwithlonghair.,2.Mymothergetsuptheearliestinourfamily.3.Myfatherisoneofmybestfriends,andIoftentalkwithhimifIhaveanyproblems.4.TheyoftenencouragemewhenImintrouble.5.HowcanIgetonwellwithmybrother?,6.Mylovinggrandfatherspendsmostofhisfreetimewithme.结尾句：1.Ilovemyparentsmorethananyoneelse.2.Thankyouforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.,典例剖析（11玉溪）提示：家是一个能让人感到温暖的港湾。在你的成长过程中，家给予了你很多，那么你是否曾用适当的方式对你的家人表达过关爱和回报呢？请以“ILoveMyFamily”为题，写一篇英语短文，通过记叙一件你为家庭做过的事情来体现你对家人的爱。,要求：1.词数不少于60；语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.不得以单纯介绍家庭成员的方式来撰写。,【审题指导】1.本篇作文的题材以记叙文为主，记叙自己为家人做过的一件事来体现自己对家人的爱；2.主要是写事件来表达自己对家人的关爱，不仅仅是介绍家庭成员；3.叙述家庭基本情况用一般现在时，描写自己做的事情用一般过去时；4.词数不少于60，语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】ILoveMyFamilyIhaveahappyfamily.Althoughmyparentsareverybusy,theytrytheirbesttotakegoodcareofme.IthinkIshoulddosomethingforthem.YesterdaywasSunday.Igotupearlierthanusual.Afterwashing,Isweptthefloor,wateredtheplantsandthenIwenttothekitchentopreparebreakfast.Ataround9oclockbreakfastwasready.Mumanddadgotup.Whentheysawit,theywereveryhappy.“Dear,thankyouforyourdeliciousbreakfast.”Hearingthat,Iwassohappyandfeltas,ifIhadgrownup.Mumanddadhavedonealotforme.IshoulddowhatIcandoformyfamilythoughIamverybusylearning.ThemoreIdoforit,thehappiermyfamilywillbe.,【检测菜单】1._厨房2._早餐3._尽某人最大努力4._拖地5._为感谢6._照顾,kitchen,breakfast,tryonesbest,sweepthefloor,thanksfor,takecareof,七年级（上）Units5-9,第三部分高频话题写作指南,与朋友共度时光写作导图从近六年与朋友共度时光相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：描述快乐时光，,亮点句型速成常用句型:Thanksforstayingwithme.推荐句型:Thanksforstayingwithmeverymuch.Thanksforstayingwithmeverymuchduringthesedays.ThankyouverymuchforstayingwithmeduringthesedaysandIdofeelhappy.,常用句型：Iblewoutthecandles.推荐句型：Iblewoutthecandlesinabreath.Tobeginwith,Iblewoutthecandlesinabreath.IblewoutthecandlesinabreathwhileCindywascomingin.,开头句：Imgladtoreceiveyourletter.中间句：1.Icanget/receivemany/lotsofpresents/gifts.2.IstillrememberedthatwewenttothemoviestogetheronSunday.,3.IwasveryhappytogotothecinemawithMikelastweekend.结尾句：1.Ireallyenjoythatwegottogetherduringthesedays.2.Ihope/wishthatIcanhaveawonderfulpartywithyou.,典例剖析（14昆明）A.AhappytimeB.Letmetellyou_,要求：1.请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Letmetellyoumydream”,“LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglish”,“LetmetellyouIloveyou,Mom”等。,2.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。3.不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一用GuangmingMiddleSchool。4.词数不少于60。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：本题给出的是命题作文，要求写出快乐的时光，应是记叙文；着重写出快乐的事情的经过和为什么快乐；文章是叙述过去的事情，用一般过去时；词数不少于60，不得使用真实姓名和校名，紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。,【高分范文】AhappytimeAfterschoolthisafternoon,Ihadahappytimewithtwoforeignfriendswholosttheirway.ForIknewtheroad,Idecidedtotakethemtotheirhotel.Ontheroad,wetalkedalot.Itoldthemaboutthegreatchangesinthe,city,suchasthewiderroad,themoreconvenienttransportation,thefresherairandsoon.IalsointroducedthatnowChinesestudentslikedlearningEnglish.Intheirsparetime,theycouldwatchEnglishmovies,singEnglishsongsandtakepartinEnglishactivities.Theforeignerstoldmealotaswell.,ItwaslatewhenIgothome,butIwasveryhappy.BecauseInotonlyhadagoodtime,butalsorealizedtheimportanceoflearningaforeignlanguagewell.,【检测菜单】1._外国的2._方便的3._活动4._意识到5._迷路6._空闲时间7._参加,foreign,convenient,activity,realize,loseonesway,sparetime,takepartin,八年级（上）Units8-10,第三部分高频话题写作指南,制定计划写作导图近年涉很少及此话题，近四年制定计划相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度为学习计划、人生计划、奋斗目标或理想等长远的计划以及表达某种愿望或期待。,亮点句型速成常用句型：Hewantstorelaxandlearnsomethinginthecountryside.推荐句型：Hewantstonotonlyrelaxbutalsolearnsomethinginthecountryside.Hepreferstostayinthecountrysidesothathecanrelaxandlearnsomethingthere.,Hewishestogotothecountrysideinorderthat/sothathecanrelaxandlearnsomethingthere.常用句型：Ihavetodosomeresearchtomakeaplan.推荐句型：Toworkoutaplan,Ihavetostartwithsomeresearch.,Inordertoworkoutaplan,Ihavetostartwithsomeresearch.IhavetostartwithsomeresearchifIwanttoworkoutaplan.开头句：ThesummervacationiscomingandIpreparetovisitmygrandparentsinthecountryside.,中间句：1.Myclassmatesdecided/madeadecisiontohelpthepeopleintheoldhome.2.Ihope/wish/wanttogoabroadforfurtherstudy.3.Heplannedtogosightseeing.4.Toworkoutaplan,onehastostartwithsomeresearch.,5.Ihavearrangedaone-daytriptoChongqingforyou.6.Wewillclimbthemountainiftheweatherisfine.结尾句：1.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyouthissummervacation.2.Letsmakeaplanforthecomingvacationtogether.,典例剖析（14云南）MyPlanfortheComingSchoolYear提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以“MyPlanfortheComingSchoolYear”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.仔细研读所给书面表达的标题及提示内容，可知要求写出初中毕业后一学年内的计划。描述将来的计划要用一般将来时，人称用第一人称。2.所写计划内容尽量丰富、全面，可以涉及学习、生活、交友等方面内容，不要局限于某一点。3.根据内容使用“总分总”式构思，开头点明主题，中间分点谈论计划，最后表决心，呼应主题。力求做到语言流畅、结构完整、层次分明。,【高分范文】MyPlanfortheComingSchoolYearHowtimeflies!Ihavefinishedmystudyinthejuniorhighschoolandwillstartmynewlifeinanewschool.NowIdliketosharemyplanwithyou.First,itisimportanttodowellinallsubjects,especiallysomenewsubjects.Ill,workharderatthemtoimprovemygrades.Second,Illtrytotakepartinsomeafter-classactivitiesandmakemorefriends.Third,tohaveastrongbody,IlldoasmuchexerciseasIcan.ImsureIcandobetterinthecomingschoolyear.,【检测菜单】1._v.完成2._adj.重要的3._v.提高4._擅长5._参加6._交朋友,finish,important,improve,dowellin,takepartin,makefriends,八年级（下）Units1-2,第三部分高频话题写作指南,健康与急救写作导图近年未涉及健康话题，健康与急救相关话题书面表达的命题来看，命题角度以如何保持健康的建议类话题为主。,Dontstayup,Howtokeephealthy,Diet,Exercise,Sleep,Donteattoomuchrichfood,likemeat,Eatfruitsandvegetables,Drinkmilk,Nojunkfood,Run,Playbasketball,Doyoga,Gotobedandgetupearly,亮点句型速成常用句型：Anursegavemeaninjection.Itwasalittlepainful.推荐句型：Anursegavemeaninjectionwhichwasalittlepainful.常用句型：Youmustntsmoke.Itsbadforyourhealth.推荐句型：Youmustntsmokebecauseitsbadforyourhealth.,开头句:1.Itseasytohaveahealthylifestyle,anditsimportanttoeatabalanceddiet.2.Itisveryimportantforeveryonetokeephealthy,especiallyforusstudents.,中间句:1.Weshouldeatthehealthyfood.2.Inthedoctorsoffice,thedoctorlooksmeovercarefully.3.Thedoctorasksmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday.,结尾句：1.Itisgoodforustodrinkmilkbeforebedtime.2.Alotofvegetableshelpyoutokeepingoodhealth.3.Weshoulddomoreexercisetostayhealthy.4.Dontgetstressedout.Itsnothealthy.,典例剖析（12昭通）Howcanwekeephealthy要求：1.词数不少于60个；2.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。如需使用姓名，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用GuangmingMiddleSchool；4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。,【审题指导】1.从饮食、运动和睡眠三大角度写出如何保持健康的建议；发表自己的观点；2.词数不少于60个；文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。如需使用姓名，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用GuangmingMiddleSchool。,【高分范文】HowcanwekeephealthyItisveryimportantforeveryonetokeephealthy,especiallyforusstudents.Howcanwekeephealthy?Hereissomeadvice.Wecanteattoomuchrichfood,likemeat.Weshouldtrytoeatmorefruitsand,vegetables.Itisgoodforustodrinkmilkbeforebedtime.Asforjunkfood,donteatittoomuch.Itisbadforus.Besides,itisimportantforustodomoreexercise.Itcangiveusenoughenergytostudy.Itcanalsohelpustosleepwell,andenoughsleepisverynecessary,too.Wecantstayuptoolateatnight.,Itsimportanttohaveahealthylifestyle,andletskeephealthy.,【检测菜单】1._保持健康2._特别；尤其3._尝试4._对有好处,keephealthy,especially,trytodosth.,begoodfor,八年级（下）Units5-6,第三部分高频话题写作指南,难忘的事写作导图近年书面表达的命题与难忘的事相关的话题属于高频话题，此类话题主要是描写一件难忘的事。如：2012昆明。,Anunforgettablething,Thethingsthatareunforgettable,Whattheunforgettablethingis,Thedescriptionofthething,When,where,who,how,why,Yourfeelings,Excited,moved,happy,sad,angry,亮点句型速成常用句型：Iwillneverforgettheclass.Itgavemeanimportantlesson.推荐句型：Iwillneverforgettheclassbecauseitgavemeanimportantlesson.Iwillneverforgettheclasswhichgavemeanimportantlesson.,Theclasswhichgavemeanimportantlessonisunforgettable.常用句型：IamdeeplymovedbywhatMikedid.推荐句型：IamdeeplymovedbythethingsthatMikedid.WhatMikedidmovedmedeeply/alot.,开头句：IstillrememberthedaylastsummerwhenIwentforapicnicwithmyfather.中间句：ThereisnodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.,结尾句：1.ThesemagicwordstouchedmyheartandIwillneverforgethim.2.Inmyopinion,friendsarethepersonswhocansharehappinessandsorrowwithus.,典例剖析（12昆明）A.AtruestoryB.Asastudent,Ishould_,要求:1.请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答。2.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。3.不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一用GuangmingMiddleSchool。4.词数不少于60。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.本题是命题作文。题目是“Atruestory”。着重写出自己经历的某件真实的事情以及对于这件事情的感受。2.本篇作文的体裁以记叙为主，主要是记叙过去的真实事件，时态用一般过去时，侧重描述给你留下深刻印象的那一瞬间。3.紧扣主题，词数不少于60个，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名。,【高分范文】AtruestoryIdliketotellyouatruestorywhichmademefeelmoved.LastFriday,Iwenthomebybus.AfterIsatdownonthebus,Isawanoldwomansittingbesideme.Herhairwasalreadywhiteandshelookedsmallandthin.Tomy,surprise,therewasabigbagwhichwasfullofeggsonherlap.Atthatmoment,theconductoraskedhertobuytheticket.Forthewomandidnthaveenoughmoney,theconductorwasangrywithher.Thenayoungmangavehismoneytotheconductorintheend.Ithoughtitsourdutytohelpothers,whereverweare.Ifwehelptheoneintroublemoreoften,theworldcanbecomemorebeautiful.,【检测菜单】1._感动的2._使某人惊讶的是3._在那时4._最后；最终5._做某事的责任,moved,toonessurprise,atthatmoment,intheend,Itsonesdutytodosth.,九年级（全）Units1-2,第三部分高频话题写作指南,学着如何学习写作导图近六年学着如何学习相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写学习的方法，如2014昆明。,LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglish,Reasons,ThewaystolearnEnglish,moreimportant;tocommunicatewithothers,listencarefully,takenotes,learnfromothers,discussinagroup,goover,review,bepatient,beactive,developagoodhabit,workhard,askclassmatesorteachersforhelp,makeaplan,makefulluseoftime,亮点句型速成常用句型：Youcansolvetheproblemscarefully.推荐句型：Youmustbecarefulwhenyousolvetheproblems.Youcantbemorecarefulwhilesolvingtheproblems.,Whenyousolvetheproblems,youshouldbeascareful/aspossible/youcan.,开头句：TherearethreegoodwaysthatcanhelpyoutolearnEnglishwell.,中间句：1.Ithinkyoushouldreadalot,practicemoreandaskothersforhelp.2.Itisalsoagoodideatotakenotesbecauseitcanhelpyoureviewthelessons.,3.YoucouldtrytoimproveyourEnglishbydiscussinginagroup,developinggoodhabitsandmakingfulluseoftime.4.Youshouldstudyhardandnevergiveup.,5.Youcanstudyitbyaskingmoreandlearningmorefromothers.6.Dontbeshyandneverbeafraidoflosingface.7.Themethodissocreative!,结尾句：1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Helpingothersmeanshelpingyourself.3.Knowledgecomesfromcommunicatingandquestioning.4.Thinktwicebeforeyoudoit.,典例剖析（14昆明）A.AhappytimeB.Letmetellyou_要求：1.请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Letmetellyoumydream”,“LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglish”,“LetmetellyouIloveyou,Mom”等。,2.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。3.不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一用GuangmingMiddleSchool。4.词数不少于60。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1.把题目补充完整，LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglish；2.可以为说明文，也可以用具体事例来写成记叙文；3.注意写作时的前后顺序，使文章连贯；4.词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglishInourlife,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.Butmanypeopledontknowhowtolearnit.Nowletmetellyousomeideastolearnit.IfyouwanttouseEnglishwell,firstyoushouldrememberEnglishwords.Thenyou,canlistentoEnglishsongstoimproveyourlisteningskills,andyoucanalsotalkwithyourclassmatesinEnglishinordertoimproveyourspokenEnglish.Ifyoudolikethis,maybeyoullfindyourEnglishisgettingbetter.IfyouhavegoodideastolearnEnglishwell,pleasetellme.,【检测菜单】1._越来越重要2._想要做某事3._英语单词4._听5._和交谈6._记得,moreandmoreimportant,wanttodosth.,Englishwords,listento,talkwith,remember,九年级（全）Units3-4,第三部分高频话题写作指南,我们的变化写作导图近六年未涉及相关话题，近四年“我们的变化”相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：1.实现梦想的目标，心态的变化，如2012曲靖“珍惜眼下”；2.成长的经历，如2011大理“成长”。,亮点句型速成常用句型：MyteachersandclassmateshelpmewithmyEnglish.MyEnglishisgoodnow.推荐句型：Thankstomydearteachersandclassmates,myEnglishbecomesmuchbetternowthanbefore.,Withthehelpof(Underthehelpof)myteachersandclassmates,myEnglishhasimprovedalotnow.IhavemademuchgreatprogressonmyEnglishwiththehelpof(underthehelpof)myteachersandclassmates.,常用句型：Ilikedplayingcomputergamesbefore.AndIplayeditalot.推荐句型：Iwasinterestedinplayingcomputergamesbefore,soIplayeditalot.Iusedtobeinterestedinplayingcomputergames,soIalwaysspentplentytimeonthem.,中间句：1.Iusedtobeabitshy,butnowIbecomeoutgoing.2.Daybyday,Igetonverywellwithmyclassmates.3.Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastthreeyears.,4.IwasfatandshortbeforeIcametothemiddleschool.5.Now,IlikesportsandIoftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.6.SoIbecometallerandstrongerthanbefore.7.Iamwillingtocareaboutothers.,结尾句：1.Goodhabitshelpmetostudybetterandkeephealthier.2.Myparentsandmyteachersusedtoworryaboutme,butnowtheyarebothpleasedwithme.,典例剖析（11大理）IAmNotaChildAnyMore提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以“IAmNotaChildAnyMore”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩了。,要求:1.请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文。词数不少于60；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。,【审题指导】1.对自己的现在和过去做比较，以此说明自己已经长大；2.写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情，通过事例来证明自己的观点；3.作总结，再次突出主题；4.词数不少于60；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。,【高分范文】IAmNotaChildAnyMoreIama16-year-oldgirlnow.Ihavechangedalot.Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,Iamstrongerandastallasmymother.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.,ItwasaWednesdayevening.WhenIwentbackhome,noonewasin.SoIcookedthemeal.Ididntknowmymotherwasilluntilmyparentscamebackfromthehospital.Theybothsaidthemealwasverydelicious,thoughittastedsalty.Aftersupper,Ifoundtheyweretootired.Igothotwaterforthem.Whenmymotherputher,feetintothewater,withtearsinhereyesshesaid,“Dear,youhavegrownup.”ItwasthefirsttimethatIcaredaboutmyparents.IrealizedIwasnotachildanymore.,【检测菜单】1._过去常常2._和一样3._直到才4._从回来5._长大,usedtodo,as.as.,not.until,comebackfrom,growup,九年级（全）Units13-14,第三部分高频话题写作指南,保护环境写作导图从全国近五年环境保护相关话题书面表达的命题来看，写作角度如下：1.记叙一次环保活动。如：2014邵阳志愿者活动，2013襄阳介绍环保活动；2.保护环境的措施。如：2014龙东保护水资源，2014贺州节约。,亮点句型速成常用句型：Everyoneshouldprotecttheenvironment.Andtheworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.推荐句型：Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.,常用句型：Weshouldplantmanytrees,andwecanlivebetterandhealthier.推荐句型：Wearesupposedtoplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.Ifweplantmoreandmoretrees,wewilllivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.,开头句：1.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground.2.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.3.Wearesupposedtoplantmoreflowersandtrees.4.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.,中间句：5.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.6.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.7.Itsnecessarytosavewater.8.Recyclingtrashisalsoimportant.,结尾句：9.Itseveryonesdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.10.Itsourdutytoprotectourenvironment.11.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment.,写作模板Imwritingtotellyouabouta志愿活动lastweek.Wegotthe火车站at8oclockonSaturdaymorning.MyclassmatesandI决定todosomethingtomakeit更干净整洁.First,wecleanedthebenches,andthenwe捡垃圾andadvisedothersnottothrowrubbishhereandthere.Atnoon,wesweptthe,groundtogetherandthenweleft.Wewerealittletiredafterlonghoursof努力工作,butwewerestillveryhappy.Ihopeeveryonewill做贡献improvingthe环境ofourcity.Hopetowritesoon.Bestwishes!Yours,WangLei,典例剖析（14邵阳）假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。,Place:trainstation;Time:from8:00to12:00onSaturdaymorning;People:youandsomeclassmates;Activities:cleanthebenches,pickuptherubbish,sweeptheground;Feelings:alittletiredbuthappy.,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、活动、感受）。2.本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。3.回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】Bob,Imwritingtotellyouaboutavoluntaryactivitylastweek.Wegotthetrainstationat8oclockonSaturdaymorning.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomethingtomakeitcleanerandtidier.First,wecleanedthebenches,and,thenwepickeduptherubbishandadvisedothersnottothrowrubbishhereandthere.Atnoon,wesweptthegroundtogetherandthenweleft.Wewerealittletiredafterlonghoursofhardwork,butwewerestillveryhappy.I,hopeeveryonewillmakeacontributiontoimprovingtheenvironmentofourcity.Hopetowritesoon.Bestwishes!Yours,WangLei,【检测菜单】1._告诉某人什么2._捡起3._决定做某事4._有点累5._为做出贡献,tellsb.sth.,pickup,decidetodosth.,alittletired,makeacontributionto,学校生活写作导图近六年学校生活相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度主要集中在初中学习和生活以及校园中的人物事件等的描述,如2014昆明。,亮点句型速成常用句型:Thehomeworkistoomuch.Ihavenooutdooractivities.推荐句型：Icantjoininmanyoutdooractivitiesbecauseoftoomuchhomework.ThereissomuchhomeworkthatIdonthaveenoughtimetotakepartinoutdooractivities.,常用句型：Ihaveahappyschoollife.推荐句型：Withthesespecialmemories,Ihaveahappyandcolorfulschoollife.IhaveahappyschoollifewhichIwillneverforget.常用句型：Ilikeplayingfootball.,推荐句型：Ilikeplayingfootballontheplayground.Ilikeplayingfootballontheplaygroundwithgreatinterest.常用句型：Ifeelverysadtoday,becauseIdidntpassthemathexamagain.,推荐句型:IfeelterribletodayforIfailedagaininthemathe