综合测试三任务型写作(记叙文)概要PPT课件

(Narration),高考专项复习：,Task-basedwriting,Pattern,2.,4.,Contents,TextTwo,4.,Homework,该题总分值为25分，其中概要部分5分，正文部分20分。各部分分值如下:,Introduction,25分,叙事类文章的写作模板：,1.Summary(概要)2.Body(正文)1)Atransitionalsentence(过渡句引出例子)2)Anexampleandsoon(举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受或发表看法等)3.Ending(结尾点题),Text（见资料中的文章）,Skill:Combinetheelements要素.,theauthor/writer,athome,hislastbirthday,Hisparentscouldnthavecelebrationwithhim.Hefeltdisappointed.,Helearntunderstandhisparents,1.Howtosummarizeastory?,ThepassageismainlyaboutTheauthortellsusastorythat.Thestoryismainlyaboutandittellsusthat,Usefulstructuresforwritingasummary:,ThepassageismainlyaboutTheauthordescribes,Practice:Makeasummary,Possibleversions:,Thestoryismainlyaboutwhathappenedontheauthorslastbirthday.Hisparentscouldnthavecelebrationwithhimsohefeltangry.Butheleanttounderstandthemaftertalkingwithhisgrandmother.(34)Theauthordescribedwhathappenedonhislastbirthday.Hefeltdisappointedbecausehisparentscouldnthavethecelebrationwithhim.Buthecametounderstandthemaftertalkingtohisgrandmother.(32),IalsohaveasimilarexperiencethatReadingthisstorybroughtbackmymemoryaboutTheauthorsexperiencerecallssomethingthathappenedtomewhenIwasAfterreadingthestory,Iamdeeplyimpressedbytheauthorscourage,anditalsoremindsmeofanexperienceofmyown,2.1)Howtointroducetheexamplebyusingatransitionalsentence?,DidntbuyyouthenicemodelcarHiredthreeprivateteacherstohelpyouinstudieswithoutyouragreement.YourmotherpeepingatyourdiaryYourfathermisunderstoodyoutohavebrokenavase.,2)Groupdiscussion:Howtoselectanimpressiveexample?Anunhappystorywithyourparent?,3.Practice:Howtoendyourcompositioninaneffectiveway?,Text2:见材料的第二篇文章07高考真题/09样题,第二节读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）DearAri,Asyousleepinmyarms,Imamazedathowlightyoufeel.Istareatyourtinybody,sofragilethatasuddenwindcouldliftyouupintotheair.IlovethisfeelingofprotectingyouanddreamingofallIhaveinstoreforyou.Iintendtobringyouuptobebraveandsuccessfulinanoftendifficultsociety.ThatswhyyourmommyandIhavenamedyouAri,whichmeanslion.Itsourhopethatyouwillgrowstrongandeagerlygraspeveryopportunitytodowellforyourselfandothers.Beforeyoucameintotheworld,wehad,spentmonthsimaginingwhatyoudbelike.Wouldyoubeaboyoragirl?WouldyoulooklikeMommy,Daddyoryourelderbrothers?Anyway,wewouldfindoutsoon.Finallyyourmotherslaborcame.Andseveralhourslater,wemetthefirsttime.Iheldyouhighupintheair.Ithenwasabletocutyourumbilicalcord（脐带）andputyouinyourmothersarms.Shestillhadenoughenergytoradiatethelovewhileshepressedyoutoherface.Andherewearetonight.AsIholdyouclose,yousleepsopeacefully.Ipressmyeartoyourchestandhearyourstrength.Iamlisteningtothefirstbeatsofalionsheart.Welcometotheworld,Ari.Daddy,写作内容假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：1以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：（1）读信后的感受；（2）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；（3）表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。写作要求1作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。,EX1.Activity：Discusswithyourgroupmembersaboutthethreecompositionsanddecidewhichoneis“Excellent”,whichis“Average”,andwhichis“Poor”.,评分标准：概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。,考场作文1,23518Excellent,考场作文2,615poor,考场作文3,16313average,1.Ifindedthewaytosolveit.2.IknowthatImustwrong.3.WhenyoufoundoutwhatIhaddone,youdidntangrywithme.4.IveryloveyouandMommy.,EX2.Correctthemistakes.,应改为found,应改为mustbewrong,应改为werenot或didntgetangry,应改为IloveyouandMommyverymuch.,5.NowIwas18yearsago.6.Youwasstritedwithmethen.7.Ithanktoyouwhatyoudotome.8.Ididntcanearnthemoneynow.,应改为amol