初中英语看图作文.ppt

看图作文,LookAndwrite,中考作文的评分标准,四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分,看图作文难度稍大，在写作时它要根据图画呈现的内容与所给的中英文提示相结合来表达其内在涵义，描述图画内容，使短文达意、正确、连贯。,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤：1、理解图意，确立情景2、注意所给的中英文提示3、明确时态，理顺思路4、连词成句，然后再连句成文5、反复审核，修改错误,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,英文日记的格式,英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。,文章的内容描述完整表达充分,今天下午我去看电影.,gotoamoviegotothecinemaseeafilm,Itsafinedaytoday.,thisafternoon,Iwenttoamoviehappilythisafternoon.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offamansbike.,onthewayfalldownfrom/falloffsee/find+复合宾语,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.,pickupshouttorideaway,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman.,stopataxicatchupwith,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.,Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.,giveback/returnrefuse,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.,句子的种类灵活多样避免单一,Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.,Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedtothemanloudly.,把两个或多个句子合并为简单句,1、把其中一句改为介词短语,Igavethecasebacktotheman.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.,Gettingthecasebackfromme,themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.,2、把其中一句改为分词短语,Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Onethewaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.,IwasonmywaytothecinemathisafternoonwhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffamansbike.,把两个或多个句子合并成复合句,Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.,Butherodetoofasttohearme.,IstoppedataxiasquicklyasIcouldinordertocatchupwiththeman.,适当选择固定句型,Iwantedtocatchupwithhim,soIstoppedataxiquickly.,文章结构首尾照应构思精巧,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,IsawThemanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.,ItwassuchaninterestingmoviethatIcouldntwaittoenjoyit.,AlthoughImissedthemovie,Iwasveryhappytohelpothers.,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.ItwassuchaninterestingmoviethatIcouldntwaittoenjoyit.IwasonmywaytothecinemawhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffamansbike.Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedtothemanloudly.Butherodetoofasttohearme.IstoppedataxiasquicklyasIcouldinorderto