中考英语作文指导课ppt课件

.,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?,中考写作指导课,.,basicstructure(基本结构的安排),.,DearMr.Know，Impleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusarentinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenitssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.SolotsofusdonthaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.Whatsmore,therearesomanynewwordswehaventmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idontknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecantunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.,Letsgoforit!,Mary,(thebeginning),(theending),thebody（正文）,.,basicrules(写作考试规则),search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautifY(美：谚语/例子),.,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,.,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stayathome,work,visitfriendsorparents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,.,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列(list),.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）,加(add),加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连(connect),.,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用高级词汇,.,Whichisbetter?,他们很早就到了。,ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.,.,我们应该保护环境。,AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BItsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.,.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,.,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,ASheisveryyoung.Shecantcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecantcarrytheDSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe,.,方法三:妙用关联词,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,.,1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,bothand,whatsmorenotonlybutalso,neithernor2.表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,while,inthesameway,ontheonehandontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort,关联词(connectionwords),.,Letstry,_Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidntgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert_.Welikedoingkindsofsports_swimming,runningandhiking._,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._,hewentback._,hesmiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAtlast,.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连(connect),美(beautify),.,Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美(beautify),.,Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美(beautify),Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.,Proverb（谚语）/saying,.,集中注意力于学习,Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,.,加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,.,Enjoysomeproverbs,1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.,3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.,6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.,.,Enjoysomeproverbs,7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.,覆水难收。,一天一苹果，医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,活到老，学到老。,.,方法四:妙用谚语和例子（多用于“thebody”）,Writingskills（“写”的技巧）,.,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.,Forexample,wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.,加例子,.,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.,.,LetsDoitnow!/Dontdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.,Dontwait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Dontputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Icantwait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!,结尾：提出倡议或号召,.,First，someofusarentinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenitssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.SolotsofusdonthaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.Whatsmore,therearesomanynewwordswehaventmetbeforeinthepassage.Idontknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecantunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.,Letsgoforit!,.,DearMary,IheardyoudidntdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.,Yours,_,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”_,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.,Yourturntogoforit!（试填一填）,.,DearMary,IheardyoudidntdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.,Yours,_,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”_,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.,Tobeginwith,Ofcourse,Infact,Then,Yourturntogoforit!（check）,.,Letspractise.,.,Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuondtfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Checkandcorrectthisarticle.,alotofthingshappened.,helping,I,wereshopping,crying,happenedto,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,couldalso,so,.,满分作文标准：,第一档：（1720分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）,.,规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写,.,.,.,随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.提示的内容要全部用上。,Itsyourturn!(练练笔),.,LetsHelpOurFriends（满分作文赏析）Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimalshabitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Dontyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soitsourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Dontputitoff！Letstryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!,.,Thankyou!Goodbye!,Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end,.,HOMEWORK:书面表达（共20分）根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意：1字数60一80。2所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答题卡上）假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。,发言稿（介绍）,.,name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology,Dearfriends,Imverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.Thatsall.Thankyouforlistening.,.,Dearfriends,Imverygladtointroduce（介绍）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.Imfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.Iminterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野营）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物学家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.Thatsall.Thankyouforlistening.,.,Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.Whatsmore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.,Myfavoritesport,swimming,fishing,healthy,brings,stronger,tobe/Iwillbe,happiness,playing,grow,.,TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowIminGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowImasbusyasabee.Theresalotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!Theresanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idontwanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.Illspendtheresttimeefficiently.Astheresnoelevatortosuccess,Illtrymybesttodoeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!,Itsyourturn!（满分作文赏析）,.,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.,2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.,Spelling（拼写）,（others),Friday,4.Icantforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.,Icantforgetthatdaybecause,5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.,!,Capitalletter（大小写）,Punctuation（标点符号）,.,6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforev