湖南学业水平考试《双向翻译》技巧

主讲：黄曼琳,AmplificationandOmission,增译，减译,研究课题：双向翻译之英译中翻译技巧,湖南省长沙市一中卫星远程学校,TranslationTechniques,fromEnglishintoChinese,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,他拼命地工作。,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,他拼命地工作。,每个狗都有它的日子。,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,他拼命地工作。,每个狗都有它的日子。,人人都有得意之日。,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,他拼命地工作。,每个狗都有它的日子。,人人都有得意之日。,不要招惹睡觉的狗。,Heworkslikeadog.,Everydoghasitsday.,Letsleepingdogslie.,他像狗一样地工作。,他拼命地工作。,每个狗都有它的日子。,人人都有得意之日。,不要招惹睡觉的狗。,不要招惹麻烦。,Trytobetterthethreegiventranslationsin2minutes.,Task1,Exploringbettertranslation,1.Ihaventenoughtimetoread.我没有足够的时间读。2.Youwere,youare,andyouremaintobemybelovedteacher.你是，你是，你仍然是我敬爱的老师。3.Afterthemeeting,theconcertsandthetabletenniscompetition,hewenthometiredly.在会议、音乐会、乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。,Exploringbettertranslation,1.Ihaventenoughtimetoread.,Exploringbettertranslation,我没有足够的时间读。,1.Ihaventenoughtimetoread.,Exploringbettertranslation,我没有足够的时间读。,我没有足够的时间读书。,2.Youwere,youare,andyouremaintobemybelovedteacher.,Exploringbettertranslation,你是，你是，你仍然是我敬爱的老师。,2.Youwere,youare,andyouremaintobemybelovedteacher.,Exploringbettertranslation,你是，你是，你仍然是我敬爱的老师。,你过去是，现在是，将来仍然是我敬爱的老师。,Exploringbettertranslation,在会议、音乐会、乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。,3.Afterthemeeting,theconcertsandthetabletenniscompetition,hewenthometiredly.,Exploringbettertranslation,在会议、音乐会、乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。,在参加会议、出席音乐会、观看乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。(增加动词),3.Afterthemeeting,theconcertsandthetabletenniscompetition,hewenthometiredly.,1.Ihaventenoughtimetoread.我没有足够的时间读书。2.Youwere,youare,andyouremaintobemybelovedteacher.你过去是，你现在是，将来仍然是我敬爱的老师。3.Afterthemeeting,theconcertsandthetabletenniscompetition,hewenthometiredly.在参加会议、出席音乐会、观看乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。,增译(Amplification),Conclution,增译(Amplification),从意义、修辞和句法上考虑需要在译文中适当增添一些虽无其词而有其意的词。,Conclution,1.Ihaventenoughtimetoread.我没有足够的时间读书。2.Youwere,youare,andyouremaintobemybelovedteacher.你过去是，你现在是，将来仍然是我敬爱的老师。3.Afterthemeeting,theconcertsandthetabletenniscompetition,hewenthometiredly.在参加会议、出席音乐会、观看乒乓球比赛之后，他疲倦地回到了家里。,增译(Amplification),增加表示时态的词，动词，不及物动词后加宾语等。,Conclution,Rule：StudentAreadsasentencewhilestudentBtranslatesitimmediately.,Task2Consolidation,Interpretation(口译),1.Thehorseisinthefieldeating.,1.Thehorseisinthefieldeating.,马在牧场里吃草。,2.Theteacherisexplainingtheusageofthewordswiththestudentsstandingbesidehim.,2.Theteacherisexplainingtheusageofthewordswiththestudentsstandingbesidehim.,老师正在讲解单词的用法，学生们站在他旁边听。,3.AnEnglishmanthinksseated;aFreshman,standing;anAmerican,pacing(走动).,3.AnEnglishmanthinksseated;aFreshman,standing;anAmerican,pacing(走动).,英国人坐着思考，法国人站着思考，美国人走着思考。,4.Whenhelearnedthatitwastoborrowthathisfriendhadcome,histonechanged.,4.Whenhelearnedthatitwastoborrowthathisfriendhadcome,histonechanged.,当他知道朋友是来借钱，他的口气马上变了。,5.Morerecently,Americanshavebeenmovingfromthecitiestothesuburbs.,5.Morerecently,Americanshavebeenmovingfromthecitiestothesuburbs.,近年来，美国人一直不断地由城市迁往郊区。,6.Ineverycity,wegotintothestreets,shops,parks,theatresandrestaurants.,6.Ineverycity,wegotintothestreets,shops,parks,theatresandrestaurants.,我们每到一个城市就遛大街、逛商店、游公园、看演出、吃名菜。,1.Tryanddo.试着做。2.Itishumannaturetolovethetrue,thegood,andthebeautiful.喜爱真、善、美是人类的天性。3.Hebehavedpolitelywhileansweringtheinterviewersquestions.他在回答采访者的问题时，很有礼貌。,Task3Appreciatingthefollowingtranslations,Anythingmissing?,减译(Omission),Conclution,减译(Omission),为了使译文更加简练，更符合汉语的表达习惯，需要省略一些可有可无或翻译后反嫌累赘的词语。,Conclution,1.Tryanddo.试着做。2.Itishumannaturetolovethetrue,thegood,andthebeautiful.喜爱真、善、美是人类的天性。3.Hebehavedpolitelywhileansweringtheinterviewersquestions.他在回答采访者的问题时，很有礼貌。(behave不翻译),减译(Omission),Conclution,减译(Omission),省略连接词,it,动词等。,Conclution,1.Mr.Blackisyoungandstrong.2.Theyaresurethattheycanmakeitpossibleformodelcarstorunwithoutelectricity.,Task4Writtentranslation,1.Mr.Blackisyoungandstrong.,1.Mr.Blackisyoungandstrong.,Mr.Black年轻力壮。,2.Theyaresurethattheycanmakeitpossibleformodelcarstorunwithoutelectricity.,2.Theyaresurethattheycanmakeitpossibleformodelcarstorunwithoutelectricity.,他们确信能让自己的模型汽车不通电就跑起来。,GroupA,PK,GroupB,CompetitionChinesebridge,Part1Whoisthefastestinterpreter(口译者)?,1.Eachgrouprecommendsonestudenttointerpretthefollowingsentences.2.Whoeverraiseshis/herhandfirstwillgetthechancetointerpretitandalsoget10pointsifitisright.,Rules:,1.Mr.Blacklostthegameandhertemper.,1.Mr.Blacklostthegameandhertemper.,Mr.Black输了比赛，气急败坏。,2.Loveislikethemeasles.Weallhavetogothroughit.,2.Loveislikethemeasles.Weallhavetogothroughit.,爱情如出麻疹，人人都必须经历。,3.Thereisnodoubtthatwellcarryouttheexperimentsuccessfully.,3.Thereisnodoubtthatwellcarryouttheexperimentsuccessfully.,毫无疑问我们一定能把实验做成功。(thereis不翻译),4.Dayafterdayhecametohisworksweeping,scrubbing(擦),andcleaning.,4.Dayafterdayhecametohisworksweeping,scrubbing(擦),andcleaning.,他每天来干活扫地，擦地板，收拾房间。,5.TheyarrivedinthePacific,armedwithalcohol,trousersandtheBible.,5.TheyarrivedinthePacific,armedwithalcohol,trousersandtheBible.,他们肩挑烈酒，身着衣裤，手持圣经来到了太平洋。,Roleplay：AaChinesestudentBaforeignerwhoknowslittleChineseRules:1.Makeadialogue.2.BisrequiredtotranslatethethreeunderlinedsentencesofthepassageintoChinesewiththehelpofA.3.AshouldtellBthetranslationtechniqueshe/sheusetotranslatethem.,Part2Dialogueacting,1.Itisachallengingprofession.2.Hetoldmehehadhadabreakthrough.3.Ithinkitsgoodtodoajobthatyouareinterestedin.,1.Itisachallengingprofession.,1.Itisachallengingprofess