概要写作点拨PPT课件

概要写作,提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性(3)上下文的连贯性(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况,1,-,Tipsonsummarywriting,WhilereadingWhilewriting,2,-,Tipsonsummarywriting,Whilereading1.Isthepassageanarration,exposition,argumentationoradescription?2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso,underlinethem.3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidencetocheckwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufindisappropriate.,outline,(以议论文为例),topicsentencesupportingdetails(conclusion),3,-,Whilewriting1.Structure1)Topicsentence*2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence3)About60words2.Language1)Touseyourownwords*2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducetheexamples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateallrepetitions.)3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyourowncomments4)Tense,4,-,Childraising,Findouttopicsentencesorwordswhichcanbestservethemainidea.,Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.Sincebabiesdonotcomewithchildraisingmanuals(指南),couples,especiallyfuturemothers,havetolearnfromtheirmothers,aunts,mothers-in-law,oranyotherrelativewhoisclosetothem.,difficult,Para1：Topic：Characteristics：,Reasons,找对主旨句,Step1reading,5,-,Para2：,Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.Sometimeschildrenundertenmaybehaveinappropriately.Forexample,theylearntosayoffensivewordsandtheyshownorespectfortheirrelatives.Ithinkparentsinthesecasesshouldpunishtheirchildreninareasonableway.Childrenmustknowthosekindsofattitudesarenotgoodatall.,Adetailedexample,忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过,6,-,Para3：,Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob,forexample,thecultureinwhichtheylive,theeconomicsituationintheirsociety,andthereligiousenvironment.Para4:Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.Para5:Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.,例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括,Evidence,7,-,Step2writing,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?,Para1Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.,Tip1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息,Childraisingisadifficultjob.,8,-,Bringingupachild,Childraisingisadifficultjob.,Tip2：转换同义词或者词性,ishard/toughwork.,Tip3：转换句型,Itisrathertoughtoraiseachildforpeople.,Step2writing,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?,9,-,Para2Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.,Tip4：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举的并列词汇,educatetheirchildren,Parentsshould_toeducatetheirchildren.,adoptreasonablemethods,Step2writing,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?,10,-,Para3Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob.,Tip5：代词转换成具体信息,Therearemanyfactorsthatinfluencetheparentsin_.,bringinguptheirchildren,twoexamplesaregiven,inordertomakeitclear,Step2writing,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?,11,-,Para4:Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.Para5:Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.,Tip6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性,Inordertomakeitclear,twoexamplesaregiven,whichshowthat_,childrenraisedinfamilieswithdifferenteconomicalandeducationalbackgroundmayhavedifferentfutures.,Step2writing,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?,12,-,outline,Para.1：1stsentencereasonPara.2:1stsentenceanexamplePara.3:1stsentencePara.4Para.5evidence,13,-,Itisrathertoughtoraisechildrenforcouples,especiallyfuturemothers.Parentsshouldadoptreasonablemethodstoeducatetheirchildren.Therearemanyfactorsthatinfluencethepare