高考英语二轮专题复习与测试 第三篇 第三章 第二节 专题四 说明文型读写任务课件.ppt

第三篇写作第三章读写任务第二节读写任务写作专题四说明文型读写任务,说明文型读写任务的写作，要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序，要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适当的连接词，将句子连珠成串，使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。说明文的大体结构有两种：总体叙述细节或过程说明概括评述；现象或变化细节或原因阐述引发的后果和相关启示。,readingorwatching?reading,whichmakesourmindwork,isfunandvaluabletous.however,itsapitythatmanypeople,havinglostinterestinit,preferwatchingtvtoreading.isharethesamefeelingwiththeauthor.ithinkreadingisawonderfulthingandilikereadingverymuch.firstly,readingisthechiefmeansofacquiringknowledge.booksareatreasurehouseofhumanwisdom.almostallgreatpeoplearegreatreaders.reading,一、观摩领悟,makesapersonwise,noble,politeanduseful.whatsmore,readingcanbeagoodmeansofrecreation.ifthebookisinterestingorsuitsyou,youcanfindpleasureinreadingit.lastbutnottheleast,readingdevelopsonesimagination.inshort,readingisanactiveandusefulactivityforeverybody.buttodaythereistoomuchforustowatchontv.thereisnodoubtthatprogramsarelivelyandinteresting,someofwhichbringusfunandmakeus,relaxed.however,mosttvprogramsarerecreationalandimaginary.theyarenotbasedonthereallife.whatsworse,someviolencedoesexistinsomeprogrammes.withharmfuleffects,suchprogrammescannothelptoenrichourknowledge.inmyopinion,readingbenefitsusgreatly.ihopepeople,especiallychildren,willreadmoreandwatchlesstv.,【结构分析与解读】本文为说明文，第一段概括，第二段提出主题(阅读的好处)并说明原因，第三段发表看法(个人对看电视的看法)，第四段点题(回应第二段提出的主题)并提出建议。整篇文章布局合理，各部分分配均衡。,1说明文型读写任务应注意的问题。(1)说明文通常会有中心句，写概要时要注意找出中心句。中心句通常在文章第一段和各段的第一句，然后用自己的话重组文章的信息。(2)对现象分析型说明文，可采用“现象造成这种现象的原因解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议”的结构安排。,二、写作指导,2语篇模板。(1)现象说明型。recently(点明现象),whatamazesusmostis(现象表现形式),itistruethat(现象表现形式)therearemanyreasonsexplaining(现象)themainreasonis(原因一)whatismore，(原因二)thirdly，(原因三)consideringallthese，(建议/措施)foronething，(建议或措施的原因一),foranotherthing，(建议或措施的原因二),栏目链接,inconclusion，(结论)(2)说明原因型。nowadays，therearemoreandmore(现象)insomebigcities.itisestimatedthat(用具体数据说明现象)whyhavetherebeensomany(现象)?maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.thefirstoneisthat(原因一)besides，(原因二)thethirdreasonis(原因三)tosumup,themaincauseof(现象)isdueto(主要原因),栏目链接,itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.foronething，(措施建议一)ontheotherhand，(措施建议二)allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof(现象),阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。someyouthswhofledfrombigcitiestosmallandmediumsizedcitiesduetostressarenowcomingbacktothebigcities，aftertheyfoundthingsarenotwhattheyimagined，peoplesdailyreported.zengjing，26，leftguangzhouattheendoflastyearandmovedtochangpingtownindongguancity，duetohighlivingpressuressuchashousingandtransportation.butwhenshearrivedandlivedinthetown，shebecamedisappointed.,即学即练,“thereareveryfewentertainmentplacesinthetown.icouldnotfindanyfunaftersupper，”shesaid.whatsmore，shefoundithardtofindaboyfriendthere.menavailabletodatewerefarfromherrequirementsintermsofeducationalbackgroundandvision.zengreturnedtoguangzhouinoctoberandcontinuesstruggling.butshefeelsdifferent，“despitehardwork，idonotfeeldepressedasbefore.instead，icherisheverydayherenow.”zhaowencouldnotadjusttolifeinsmallcitiesduetoadifferentreason.zhaoleftbeijingandwenttotaian，shandongprovince，wherehedidsportsmarketingwithhisuncle.,heappliedforapprovalfromthelocalgovernmentforanewproject，butafterhalfamonth，hegotnoreply.finallyhisunclemanageditintwodaysbytreating，flatteringandsendinggiftstotheofficialincharge.,写作内容1以约30词概括短文的要点。2然后以约120词就“城市生活”发表看法，要点包括：(1)读完此报道后，你对年轻人重回大城市的看法。(2)你大学毕业后会选择生活在大城市还是中小城市。(3)为了让年轻人乐意待在中小城市，政府该做些什么？,写作要求1在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。,_,参考范文thereport，takingtheexamplesofzengjingandzhaowen，tellsusthatsomeyouths，afterfleeingfrombigcitiestosmallandmediumsizedcities，arenowreturningforvariousreasons，likelackingentertainmentandfairness.readingthereport，ithinkitquitewiseforyouthstochoosetoreturntobigcities.asweknow，inchinatoday，developmentinsmallormediumsizedcities,_,isfarbehindthatinbigones，sostayinginbigcities，youthshavemoreopportunitiestobesuccessful.besides，theycanenjoyamorecolorfullife，asoperas，concerts，museumsandsoonareeasilyaccessible.aftergraduatingfromcollege，iwouldliketoliveinbigcities.afterall，bigcitiesoffermorefunandmorejobopportunitiesandaremoreopenandfair，comparedtosmallcities.moreover，icankeeppacewiththeoutsideworld，gettoknowthelatestfashionandseenewthingsalmo