CommunicationWorkshop

CommunicationWorkshop,Writing:ABrochure,Pre-writing,I.ReadthebrochureofCampXtremeonP31roughly.Task1:Matchtheparagraphs(1-3)withtheheadings.,Para1Para2Para3,B:Introduction,A:Themainfeatures,C:Whatsspecial,Task2:Exercise2onP31.Findexamplesofthesebrochurewritingstylesinthetext.Example:a:Usingopinionwordstomaketheproduct/servicesoundmoreexciting.Thebestadventureholidayyoulleverhave!=“thebest”istheopinionwordsthewriterusestomaketheservicesoundmoreinviting.,Answers,a)Usingopinionwordstomaketheproduct/servicesoundmoreexciting.Thebestadventureholiday.thebiggestadventurecamptheUKsmostbeautifulwildlifethebestplacetheonlycamp,b)Writingdirectlytothereader,i.e.“Wecanhelpyou.”,youlleverhave!Weofferyou,welltakeyouWellteachyouandyoulllearn,YoucanjoinIfyoulike,letourstaffteachyoutohaveyouradventure,Youllhavesomuchfun,c)Usingfactstomaketheproductsmorereal.,andhas15welltrainedstaff.The700squaremileislandThereare10bigtentssleeps6people.Thereisoneshowerroom,d)Keepingthewritingassimpleaspossiblebydividingthetextintosections.,Thetextisdividedinto3sections.Thereare4“”(bulletinpoints)infrontofeachfeaturetomakethebrochureeasiertoread.,4stagestofollow!,While-writing,Writeabrochureforyourcamp.,请为一个名为WelcometoHainan的夏令营设计一份宣传册，以吸引人们参加该夏令营到海南旅游。宣传的内容主要包括：1.万泉河（WanquanRiver）是海南岛第三大河，发源于五指山（TheFive-fingerMountain）,全长163公里，流入南海2.它是海南著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前来旅游观光。3.乘汽车去大约要花半个小时；也可以走路或骑自行车去。4.可以在河上泛舟戏水，欣赏两岸秀丽的风光。,While-writing,Stage1:,Makenotesaboutyouradventurecampbyansweringthequestionsbelow.(P31)Whatisthenameofyoursummercamp?Whereisyoursummercamp?Whatistheplacelike?Whatactivitiescanguestsdoatthecamp?Whatmakesyourcampspecial?,Stage2：,ReadthelayoutofthebrochureonP90andgettoknowwhattowriteaboutandhowtowriteitineachpartofthebrochure.=UseyournotestakendowninStage1tohelpyouwritesomebriefinformationin4paragraphs.,Thelayoutofabrochure,Campnameandopeningstatement-Writeacatchylinetoattractthereadersattention.example:Thebestsummerholidayyoulleverhave!,Thelayoutofabrochure,(Section1)Introductionofthecamp.Suchinformationaslocation,sizeorevencommentsaboutthecampcanbeincludedinthissection.example:CampXtremeislocatedonaprivatebeachonthebeautifulcoastofScotland.,Thelayoutofabrochure,(Section2)Describethemainfeaturesofserviceyourcampprovides.example:Wellteachyousurvivalskillsandyoulllearnhowtomakeafireandbuildyourownshelter.,Thelayoutofabrochure,(Section3)Mentionsomethingthatdistinguishesyourcampfromothersimilarones.example:WearetheonlycampintheUKtooffersurvivalskillstrainingfromrealexperts.,Stage3:,Refertothe“UsefulVocabulary”:enter,payavisitto,onfoot,goboating,view,beworthvisiting.,Stage4:Presentation,Checkthebrochure,两人一组的学生在完成写作内容之后，可以四人小组间互相交换彼此的brochure。检查上面提出的问题的同时，彼此给对方找出其语法或时态错误，之后自己改正自己的错误。,Homework,Whenchecking,payattentionto:1.Doesthewriterwritedirectlytothereaderasifheorsheistalkingtothem?2.Hasthewriterusedfactstomaketheproductorservicemorereal?3.Hasthewriterusedopinionstomakeitexciting?4.Doesthewriterdividetheinformationintosmallsectionsusingbulletinpoints?,Peerscoring,Samplewriting,WelcometoWanquanRiver,Wanquanriver,whichis163kilometerslong,isthethirdlongestriverinHainan.ItbeginsintheFive-fingerMountainandenterstheSouthChniaSea.ItissuchafamousattractionthateveryyearthousandsofChineseandforeignfriendspayavisittoit.Itsnotfarfromhere.Ittakesyouabouthalfanhourtogettherebybus.,Youcanalso