英语高考作文范文14.咨询信.ppt

14.咨询信,文体概述咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内容：1.说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因。2.征询具体信息。3.期待回复并表示感谢。,常用语块1.寻求帮助_2.向某人提供某物_3.首先_4.盼望着_5.更多的信息_,furtherinformation,askforhelp,providesb.withsth.,tostartwith,lookforwardto,6.即将到来_7.为向某人收取费用_8.为而表示感激之情_9.对来说很重要_10.寄回_,postback,roundthecorner,chargesb.for,begratefulfor,beimportantto,11.对感兴趣_12.参加_13.决心要做某事_14.希望_15.缺乏/缺少_,beshortof/beinlack/demandof,beinterestedin/takeinterestin,takepartin/participatein,makeuponesmindtodosth.,inthehopeof/that,套用句式如果能给我提供方面的信息我将不胜感激。2.我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关的信息。,1.Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationregarding/concerning,2.Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding,3.此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？4.您能告诉我吗？5.期待您及时答复。,3.Besides,isthereanythingthatIshouldpayspecialattentionto?,4.Wouldyoubesokindastotellme?,5.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaorIplantogotoBritaintoattendsummerschoolduringthevacation.Ihadseenyouradvertisement,andIwouldliketoknowanythingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.,and,have,something,Firstwherewillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshourarethereperweek?Beside,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.WhatIwouldalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopaytothecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluding.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua,when,hours,Besides,for,included,1.orand两句之间是“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。2.在summer前加a单数可数名词前用不定冠词表泛指。3.hadhave根据上下文语境，此处应用现在完成时。4.anythingsomething肯定句中要用something。5.wherewhen根据上下文逻辑，此处应该是表示“什么时候”的疑问句。故填when。,6.hourhours因为howmany后须用名词的复数形式。7.BesideBesides此处表示补充说明关系“此外/而且”，beside意为“在旁边”。8.去掉Iwouldalso前的What后面是一个完整的句子，What在此显然是多余的。9.tofor固定短语payfor意为“为付费”。10.includingincluded此处为被动结构，意为“包含在内”。,课堂练习假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练(instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：1.训练的具体时间和地点。2.条件和费用。3.其他特别注意的事项。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearSir/Madam,Ihavereadyouradvertisementinthenewspaper.Youmentionedinitthatyourinstructorsarefullyqualifiedandyouensurethatlearnerswillbeabletoswimwellafteroneweekstraining.IcanswimalittlebutImnotveryconfidentinthewater.SoIminterestedintakingpartinthetrainingcourse.Fortunately,thesummerholidayisaroundthecorner.Imwritingtoinquirewhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven,andhowlongthetrainingcoursewilllasteachday.,Ialsowanttoknowhowmuchyouwillchargemeforthat.Besides,wouldyoubesokindastotellmewhetherthereisanythingspecialthatshouldbepreparedordoesyourcompanyprovideeverythingnecessary?Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua,课外作业假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下：1.入住时间：1月27日2月5日；房间号：608。2.相机：型号CanonIxus860，白色；你的17岁生日礼物，很重要。3.请他/她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢。4.你的地址在信封上。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearSir/Madam,Iamverygratefulforyourgreatservicewhilestayingatyourhotel,butImwritingtoaskforyourhelpwithsendingbackmycamerathatIleftinyourhotel.IcheckedinonJanuary27andoutonFebruary5andstayedinRoom608forthewholetime.PerhapsbecauseIleftinsucharushfortheairport,Imadethemistakeofleavingmycameraintheroom.,Sinceitwasagiftfrommyparentsonmy17thbirthday,itsveryimportanttome.ItsawhiteCanonIxus860.