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1,第一节,Ifyouwantsomethingyouneverhad,youhavetodosomethingyouhaveneverdone!,QQ：3328222985,毕云Brittany,.,2,WarmUp,Howdoyouthinkwritingshouldbeprepared?要不要记忆素材？要不要背模板？要要要,.,3,上,从第一个字开始计算字数?脑子一片空白？,刑场什么感觉,考,.,4,ChinaDreamhaslong/currentbeenaheatedtopic.ThatChineseachieveChinadreamhaslongbeenahottopic.,.,5,大作文分类之横看成岭,1、教育2、建筑3、科技4、旅游5、交通6、文化7、环境8、传媒9、政府（5,10%）10、社会11、抽象（快乐，成功）,.,6,社会类包括：食品安全，快乐生活，男女平等平分家务；大城市生活,社会,政府,教育,.,7,2015作文分布,教育27%,社会21.2%,政府11.5%,.,8,2015作文题目汇总,.,9,雅思作文之横看成岭侧成峰,.,10,大作文分类之侧成峰,1、原因措施/原因结果/问题措施Inmanycountries,ahighproportionofcriminalactsarecommittedbyteenagers.Whatarethereasonsandwhatdoyousuggesttosolvethisproblem？2、一石二鸟（killtwobirdswithonestone）:混合题目例如：政府+教育2016.1.9;犯罪与教育；传媒与犯罪等Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneyinteachingsciencethanothersubjectsfortheprogressofthecountry.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?3、优势弊端，消极积极影响2015.1.29Scientistsandtouriststraveltoremotenaturalenvironments,suchastheSouthPole.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?,.,11,4、讨论双方，发表意见2015.1.17Somepeoplethinkthattheamountofnoisepeoplemakehavetobecontrolledstrictlywhileothersaythatpeoplearefreetomakeasmuchnoiseastheywish.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.5、同意不同意2015.1.10Theleadersordirectorsoforganizationsareoftenolderpeople.Butsomepeoplesaythatyoungpeoplecanalsobealeader.Doyouagreeordisagree?,.,12,教育1、Insomecountries,parentsexpecttheirchildrentospendlongtimestudyingbothinandafterschoolandhavelessfreetime.Whatarethepositiveandnegativeeffectsonchildrenandsocietytheylivein?长时间学习好不好2013.1.122、Caringforchildrenisimportantinanysociety.Allparentsshouldberequiredtotakechildcarecourses.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?父母参加育儿课2013.1.193、Somepeoplebelievethatstudyinginacollegeoruniversityisthebestwayforstudentstopreparefortheirfuturecareer.Othersthinktheyshouldleaveschoolassoonaspossibletodeveloptheircareerthroughworkexperience.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.3.9大学教育对就业的帮助4、universitiesandcollegesarenowofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighthedisadvantages?2013.3.2远程教育好坏,.,13,5、Somepeoplethinkthatolderschoolchildrenshouldlearnawiderangeofsubjectstoacquiremoreknowledge,whileotherpeoplebelievetheyshouldlearnasmallnumberofsubjectsindetails.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinions.2013.4.27通才还是专才6、Somepeoplethinkitisimportantforallchildrentolearnhistoryinschool.Othersbelievethatothersubjectsaremorerelevanttochildrenslivestoday.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.5.18是否应该学习历史7、Somepeoplethinkfamilyhasthemostpowerfulinfluenceonchildrensdevelopment.Others，however,believethatotherthingshavegreatereffects.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.6.15家庭教育重要吗？8、Somepeoplethinksecondaryschoolstudentsshouldlearninternationalnewsasoneoftheirsubjects,whileothersbelievethatthisisawasteofvaluabletime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2013.6.22学生应该学国际新闻9、Manyparentsthesedaysworkinothercountries,takingtheirfamilieswiththem.Doyouthinkadvantagesofthedevelopmentoutweighitsdisadvantages?2013.10.19,.,14,10、Aspartofeducation,studentsshouldspendaperiodoftimestudyingandlivinginadifferentcountytolearnlanguageandculture.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2013.11.21学生应该在国外生活一段时间学习国外的语言文化11、Childrenfinditdifficulttoconcentrateonorpayattentiontotheirstudyinschool.Whatarethereasons?Howcanwesolvethisproblem?2014.1.18学生不能专注学习的原因解决措施12、Childrenseducationisexpensive.Insomecountries,thegovernmentpayssomeorallofthecosts.Dotheadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?2014.2.22义务教育以及免费教育，教育很贵13、Somepeoplethinkthatallyoungpeopleshouldberequiredtohavefull-timeeducationuntiltheyareatleast18yearsold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？2014.3.818岁之前强制教育14、Somepeoplebelievethepurposeofeducationistopreparepeopletobeusefulmembersforsociety.Otherssaythatthepurposeofeducationistoachievepersonalambitions.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2014.4.12教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心,.,15,15、Somepeoplethinkthatchildrencanlearnefficientlybywatchingtelevision.Therefore,childrenshouldbeencouragedtowatchTVregularlybothatschoolandathome.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？2014.5.17看电视是否应该被鼓励对儿童教育来说16、Manyyoungpeopleleaveschoolwithanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Whatarethereasonsandhowcanweencouragethemtostudy?2014.5.24学生厌学的原因以及解决措施17、Somepeoplethinkadultsshouldlearnpracticalskillsbythemselves,whileothersthinktheyshouldlearnwithteachersintheclassroom.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2014.6.19成人实际能力（成人教育）提升靠自己还是靠老师18、Somepeoplesaythatitisbettertoteachlanguagestudentsinsmallclasses,whileothersthinkthenumberofpeopledoesnotmatter.Discussbothviewsgiveyourownopinion2014.12.4英语授课大班还是小班19、somepeoplethinkpaintinganddrawingsareasinprotantasothersubjects,andtheyshouldbecompulsoryinhighschooleducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagress?2014.12.20学生应该学习画画20、Insomecountriesmanyyoungpeoplechoosetoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discuss,.,16,theadvantagesanddisadvantages.2015.2.28间隔年21、Someworkingparentsbelievechildcarecenterscanprovidebestcareforchildren,whileothersthinkfamilymemberslikegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母22、Somepeoplethinkthatonlythebeststudentsshouldberewarded.Others,however,thinkthatitismoreimportanttorewardstudentswhoshowimprovements.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion2015.4.18最好的学生还是进步最大的学生应该收到表扬23、Somepeoplebelievethatinordertoimproveeducationalquality,weshouldencouragestudentstomakecommentsorevencriticismontheirteachers,butothersthinkitwillleadtothelossofrespectanddisciplineintheclassroom.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2015.5.16是否应该挑战教师权威,.,17,24、Itissuggestedthatyoungadultsshouldundertakeaperiodofunpaidworkinthecommunity.Doesitbringmorebenefitsordrawbackstothecommunityandyoungpeople?2015.7.4年轻人应该参加公益25、Somepeoplesaythatthebestwaytoletchildrenknowthedangerofcrimesisforthemtobeeducatedbythosewhowereonceinprisonbutnowhavebecomegoodcitizens.2015.8.8让罪犯来教育小孩26、Studentsinschooloruniversitycanlearnmorefromclassesandteachersthanfromothersources(e.g.theInternetorTV）.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2015.9.12学校教育最重要,.,18,27、Insomecountries,schoolsprovidegeneraleducationwithawiderangeofsubjects,whileinsomeothercountries,studentslearnanarrowrangeofsubjectsrelatedtoaparticularcareer.Whichoneismoreappropriateintodaysworld?2015.10.8学生是否应该多学科目28、Somepeoplesaythatplayingcomputergamesisbadforchildrenineveryaspect,whileothersthinkithaspositiveeffectsonchildrensdevelopment.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.电子游戏是否有利于小孩的发展2015.10.2429、Someschoolleaversgotravelingorworkforaperiodoftimeinsteadofgoingdirectlytouniversity.Doyouthinktherearemoreadvantagesordisadvantagesfortheirstudies？间隔年2015.11.7,.,19,30、AThebestwaytoteachchildrentocooperatewithothersisthroughteamsportsatschool.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(团队体育活动是教孩子合作的最好办法，是否同意？)2015.11.1431、Inmanysocieties，theroleofamotherdiffersinsomewaysfromtheroleofafather，Whydoyouthinkthesedifferencesexist?Howmighttheparentalroledevelopinthefuture?麻麻的角色比爸爸的角色重要2015.11.2132、对孩子而言，读书比看电视和玩电子游戏更好。Readingstoriesinbooksisbetterforchildrenthanwatchingtelevisonorplayingcomputergames.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2015.12.12,.,20,教育,谁来教？家长（爷爷奶奶）V.S.老师（学校）政府V.S.社会犯人V.S.学校?为了教育，父母应不应该参加育儿培训？粑粑麻麻谁的角色更重要？,课堂外电视，电子游戏，网络对教育有好处吗？远程教育？长时间学习行么?Gapyear?教育与就业？要不要参加课外活动？体育对教育有木有好处？,课堂内教什么偏才V.S.通才历史要不要学？政治要不要学？美术要不要学？能不能挑战老师权威？,教学方法进步最大的还是学习最好的应该被表扬？教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心？义务教育(谁掏钱)？大班小班？国外读语言好不好？,.,21,谁来教,Someworkingparentsbelievechildcarecenters(儿童保育中心)canprovidebestcareforchildren,whileothersthinkfamilymemberslikegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母,.,22,谁来教？,Someworkingparentsbelievechildcarecenters(儿童保育中心)canprovidebestcareforchildren,whileothersthinkfamilymemberslikegrandparentscandoitbetter.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion2015.3.14谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母教育引发热议，为什么？Youngstersdevelopmentisessentialtothe（long-termprosperious）prosperityofanationinthelongrun.如果是你，你打算怎么写？题目中暗示哪些点需要做回应（taskresponse）taskresponse:workingparents;childcarecenters;grandparents;比较；giveyouropinion,.,23,粑粑麻麻去上班，我去幼儿园去幼儿园有什么好处？,1、爸妈忙，没时间照看小孩.workingparents.Lookafter.bebusywith.beoccupiedwith2、基于这个情况，.是个趋势.tendtodo.（thereisatendencythat.）;giventhefactthatGiventhefactthat,workingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejobs,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenters3.幼儿园，这个地点，有哪些好处(老师专业，)Giventhefactthat,workingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejob,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenterswhereprofessionalteachersareavailablewhilechildrencanreceiveearlychildhoodenlightenment除了得到好的教育还能接触到各种游戏Giventhefactthatworkingparentsareusuallyoccupiedwithfull-timejob,theytendtosendtheirchildrentothechildcarecenterswhereprofessionalteachersareavailablewhilechildrencanreceivebothearlychildhoodenlightenmentandgetaccesstoavarietyofgames.,.,24,连接词的使用besides；inadditionto;additionally;,4、玩游戏有哪些好处Whatsmore,childrenwillbenefitalotfromplayinggames5、举例子.is(being)oneofthisexample，手眼协调能力Whatsmore,childrenwillbenefitalotfromplayinggames,takingbaseballforinstance.Theirhand-eyecoordinationiswelldevelopedduringthecompetitions.6、其他好处?7、团队合作，如何与同伴相处，促进，givenaboostto社交能力peerpressure8、Besides,teamsportswilldefinitelygiveaboosttocultivatingteamspiritsmeanwhileprovidingkidsthepossibilitytolearnhowtogetalongwithothers(theirpeers).Nevertheless,thosewhoarenurturedathomearelesslikelytodevelopsuchcertainskills.,.,25,去幼儿园的坏处儿园,过度句Thoughvariousadvantagesofkindergartenmentionedabove,itsundesirableeffectsshouldnotbeignored.1.老师精力有限，不是每个学生都能得到无微不至的照顾面对这一现状facedwith，结果是学生没法得到.本应该有的关心Firstly,facedwiththelimitedresourcesavailableinthekindergarten,itturnsoutthatchildcannotreceivetheequaltreatment,nottomentiontheexpectedconsideratecaring.虐童.abuseBesides,somenurseriesproved/reportedtohaveabusingscandals使家长很担心，用主语从句Besides,thatsomenurseriesprovedtohaveabusingscandalsworriesparentsalot.,.,26,论点2综上，另一个观点是可以理解的（另外一种趋势是被理解的）,祖父母溺爱Thusitisunderstandablethathomenurturingenjoyspopularitythaneverbefore.However,inmyopinion,familymembers,especiallythegrandparentsaremorelikelytospoiltheirgrandsonorgranddaughterinamorematerialway.Exposedtosuchfloodsofspoiling,nowonderthatthereisanincreasingnumberofyoungstersmisbehavewhencomparedwiththeirparentswhoarewell-disciplined.二孩政策放开，最大的阻碍来自哪里？老大why?小孩学会分享，不自私sharing，selfish.以自己为中心，认为是理所应当duetolackofexperienceinplayingwiththeirpeers,home-educatedchildrenarealwaysself-centered,havingnoideaofsharingplustakingeverythingtheyhaveforgranted.,.,27,结尾,Asallthefactorsmentionedabove,thepositiveeffectsofbeingeducatedinkindergartenfaroutweighsthatoflearningathome.,.,28,应不应该学政治新闻,Somepeoplethinksecondaryschoolstudentsshouldlearninternationalnewsasoneoftheirsubjects,whileothersbelievethatthisisawasteofvaluabletime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2013.6.22学生应该学国际新闻Whatwasyourfavoritesubjectwhenyouwereasecondarystudent,howaboutinternationalnews?Recently,whetherjuvenilesshouldlearninternationalnewsasasubjecthasarisenawidespreadtopicunderdiscussions.看新闻是趋势tendency，tendto;接触新闻getaccessto;Peoplewhosupportthisideamayarguethatitisadefinitetendencyforyoungsterstogetaccesstotheglobalnewssincethepastseveraldecadeshadwitnessedtremendouschangesinthecomplexrelationshipsamongcountries.,.,29,读新闻的人更受欢迎；拓宽学生视野，促进giveaboostto学生的成熟maturity；Globalnewsenjoyedincreasingpopularityamongteenagers.Thus,youngindividualswhoarefamiliarwithinternationalnewsaremorelikelytomakefriends.Inaddition,theglobalrelatedinformationcanhelptobroadourhorizons,givingaboosttothemindmaturityofyoungsters,byofferingoverallviews.反对学国际新闻依然有道理makesenseHowever,ifwetakealookattheoppositeviewpoints,wemayalsofindthatitmakesense.,.,30,理想是美好的，现实是残酷的giventhefactthat,学生时间都是被其他科目占满了这些科目为什么这么重要?升学要考面对这么紧张的学业压力学生不大可能挤出时间学新科目Giventhefactthatstudentsinsecondaryschoolsarealwaysoccupiedbymajorsubjects,likemath,English,physics,whichaccountforalargeproportionintheirentrancetestsproceedingtothenextperiod.Soitisunderstandablewhenyoungguysareexpectedtofocusonthesecrucialsubjects.Facedwithalotofhomeworkandacademicpressure,studentsarelesslikelytosparetimeforanewsubject.,.,31,国际化跟我有毛关系，我还是土鳖一只，在本地住Besides,regardlessofglobalization,mostofuslivelocallyratherthanglobally,whichmeansthatstudyinginternationalnewscanbeawasteoftimeformanyinthefuture.而且政治给人一种boring的感觉Whatsmore,relatingtopoliticalaffairs,internationalnewsleavesthepublictheboringimpression,whichisoflittleattractivetoteenagers.,.,32,学什么谁应该说了算,priorityNevertheless,whenitcomestomyperspective,thepriorityofdecidingwhattolearnshouldrelymoreonthestudentsthemselves.(Asforme,Ithinkthatthisproposalgoestoofarbeyondareasonableconsiderationforcurriculumdesign.)想学的应该如何对待，不想学的应该如何对待想学的多给支持，不想学的不要逼迫Whencertainsubjectsareavailableatschools,thosewhoareinterestedinglobalnewsshouldbeexposedtomorerelatedmaterialsandsupportswhilewhoshowslittleinterestshouldnotbeforcedtolearn.(281),.,33,其他观点补充,Nonetheless,schoolcurriculumcannotincludeeveryimportantaspectofhumanwisdom.Instead,itisthosedomainsthatofferfundamentalknowledgeandskillssuchasmathandscienceorbasicwaysofthinkinglikephilosophyandliteraturethatshouldbeconsideredtobecompulsoryforschoolchildrentomakeefforton.Homework：Somepeoplethinkallchildrenlearnhistoryinschoolisimportant;someothersthinklearningsubjectsmorerelevanttolifeisimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.（2013.05.18）,.,34,是否应该学单一科目素材积累,somepeopleitisuncessaryforstudentstolearn.thatisnotrelevanttotheirlives.Theyshouldputtheireffortsinamoreusefulsubjectsforbetterindividualdevelopment.Ifastudentwanttobeanengineer,theyshouldconcentrateonthestudyofsciencesubjects.Iftheywanttostudyabroad,theyshouldworkhardonimprovingtheirEnglishskills.Nocompanyoruniversitywillconsiderthestudentsknowledgeofhistoryinjobintervieworenrollmentofuniversities.,whichisconsideredasessentialforenhancingtheirsenceofhonor.byanalysizingthecausesandeffectsof2worldwars,peoplewouldbettercherish(aremorelikelytoworth)thepeacetodayandpreventsuchdisastershappeningagain.curriculumdesign;eliminationofXXXsubject.,.,35,Theypresumethathistoryisabouteverythingthathappenedinthepast;thereforehasnothingtodowithourpresentlifewhichhaschangedintoacompletelydifferentworld.Childrenlearninghistorycanbetterappreciatetheirtraditionalculture.Historyisabestwayforustoseethecurrentworldandpredictthefuture.Historyisespeciallyimportantforchildrentolearnbecauseitmakesthemmoreawareofthemselvesandtheworldandprovideculturalidentityaswell.,.,36,政府话题,20131.Governmentshouldgivemoremoneytosupportartists,agreeordisagree?2.Therestorationofoldbuildingsinmajorcitiesintheworldspendsnumerousgovernmentexpenditures.Thismoneyshouldbeusedinnewhousingandroaddevelopment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?3.Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldofferfinancialsupportandcaretotheelderlypeople,whileothersthinkthatoldpeopleshouldsavemoneyfortheirfuturelife.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion？4.Somepeoplebelievethatgovernmentshouldhelpandlookafteroldpeople,butothersbelievethatpeopleshouldsavemoneyfortheirlivesintheirfuture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.（2013.06.06）5.Insomecountries,studentspaytheircollegeoruniversityfees,whileinsomeother,governmentpayforthem.Doyouthinktheadvantagesthatgovernmentpaysthemoneyoutweighthedisadvantages?(2013.08.17),.,37,2014年,20140712Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeopleholdtheimportantpositionsinthegovernment.Somepeoplethinkthatitisagoodthing,whileothersarguethatitisnotsuitable.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyouropinion.20140719Somepeoplethinkthatgovernmentsshouldcareabouttheircitizensdietandhealth.Othersthinkthatpeoplethemselvesshouldtakeresponsibilityfortheirowndietsandhealth.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.20140809Somepeoplethinkthatgovernmentsshouldbandangeroussports.Others,however,believethatpeopleshouldhavethefreedomofchoosingsportingactivitiestheylike.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.,.,38,2014,20140920Indevelopingcountries,somepeoplethinkgovernmentsshouldintroducenewtechnologyforpeopleinordertoimprovequalityoflife,whileothersbelievegovernmentsshouldofferfreeeducation.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.20141002Governmentfundingforuniversitiesshouldonlybeprovidedtothebeststudentsasscholarshipandallotherfundingforuniversitiesshouldcomefromtuitionfeesandprivateorganizations.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?,.,39,2015,2015.1.10Theleadersordirectorsoforganizationsareoftenolderpeople.Butsomepeoplesaythatyoungpeoplecanalsobealeader.Doyouagreeordisagree?年轻人还是老人应该在政府任职2015.7.23Somepeoplesaythegovernmentshouldgiveprioritytothehealthcare,whileothersbelievethattaxpayersmoneyshouldbespentonmoreimportantthings.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion政府应该关注医疗，其他人认为应该花在更重要的地方2015.10.31Somepeoplethinkcreativeartistsshouldbefinanciallysupportedbythegovernment,whileothersbelieveartistsshouldbesupportedbyothersourcesoffinance.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.艺术家需要政府扶持，有的人认为他们应该有其他资金来源,.,40,2016,2016.1.9Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneyinteachingsciencethanothersubjectsfortheprogressofthecountry.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?,.,41,LOREMIPSUMDOLOR,政府,42,2015.10.31Somepeoplethinkcreativeartistsshouldbefinanciallysupportedbythegovernment,whileothersbelieveartistsshouldbesupportedbyothersourcesoffinance.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.艺术家需要政府扶持，有的人认为他们应该有其他资金来源Whethercreativeartistsshouldreceivefundsfromauthoritiesorseekforotherpotentialfinanciallysupportshascurrentbeenaheatedtopicunderdiscussion.Giventhefactthatartsrepresenttheparticularcultureofcertaincountries,symbolizingtheidentityofeverysinglenation,thosewhocreatearts,especiallythecreativeartists,enjoymorepopularitythanbefore.Besides,someworksofart,likethepaintingofMONALISAwhichdevelopsintoatourattraction,giveaboosttolocaleconomy.Thussomepeopleadvocatethatthegovernmentsshouldallocatecertainproportionofthebudgetstosupporttheartistsbyprovidingthemsomefinancialaids.,43,However,Itisalsotruethatthefinancialsupportfromgovernmentsalonecanhardlyguaranteeadecentpayorincomefortheartists.Asamatteroffactthat,therearemoreapproachesavailablethanmerelydependonlocalgovernmentsforartiststoearntheirlivings.Exposedtoimprovinglivingstandards,thereareanincreasingnumberofindividua