英语议论文正反观点对比写作

高考应试作文写作训练,正反观点对比,越来越多的人拥有微博（micro-blog），下表反映了人们对微博的不同看法假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提示，给某英语报社写一篇100词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的看法。注意：1所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,书写注意事项,3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。eg:,HecanspekerEnglishverywell.,HecanspekerspeakEnglishverywell.,Talkaboutitinyourgroup.,1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。,2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。,Game,英文字母示例,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,中考各档书面表达示例,21,4分,10,5,Badsample,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,对比鲜明,Remember：,Wemustpayattentiontoourhandwriting,itcanhelpusgetahighgrade.,A常见题型：talkinyourgroup1、根据汉语提示完成作文。2、根据表格提示完成作文。3、根据图片提示完成作文。要求：写一篇100字左右的英语作文。,书面表达常见题型及写作技巧,B写作策略:please,remember,审列润(整,连,美)草稿纸,抄试卷,写作基本要求,1.字数达到要求。（100字左右）2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。4.标点正确。5.文章内容是否切题。6.格式正确。,高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（很好）（2125分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考书面表达评分标准,HowtopolishyourWriting,本文属于_，基本时态是_，人称用_,议论文,一般现在时,第一和第三人称,审题,抓要点，列提纲-文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,构思-文章结构,WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,itiscommontoseemanypeoplesetuptheirownmicro-blogs.对微博有两种态度.(2)态度一:.一部分人认为它好，原因（1）原因（2）(3)态度二:另一部分人认为它不好，原因（1）原因（2），(4)我的观点:好or不好？,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,表示不同观点的套语,Paragraph1总起:Differentpeoplehold/havedifferentopinions.PeoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.,paragrap2表达赞同观点ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathinkSomepeoplebelievethat,表达反对的观点:Onthecontrary,ofthemholdadifferentview.ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.However,eachcoinhastwosides.Ontheotherhand,peoplethat.,object,(4)你的观点:,inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith,Asforme,AsfarasImconcerned,总结：inbrief,inaword,insummary,Howtopolish(完善)yourWriting,构思-短语,观点一1展示才华、分享经验；2认识朋友、增加知识,showtheirtalent;shareexperiencemeetnewfriends;gainknowledge,观点二1花费很多时间和精力2影响工作和休息。,ittakesbothtimeandenergytodosth;affectourworkandrest,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,whatismore(而且);inaddition(此外)；besides,moreover(而且，此外),however;onthecontrary(正相反),Therefore(因此，所以);asaresult;because,like;unlike,ontheotherhand,tosumup;allinall,1.表示递进,2.表示转折,HowtopolishyourWriting,3.表示因果,4.表示对比,5.表示总结,:,Somepeoplethinkitis_showtheirtalentandshareinformation.(赞同)_,（与之相反）Others_.(持有不同/相反的观点),小试牛刀：衔接词,However,holdadifferentview,holdtheoppositeopinion,agoodwayto,Onthecontrary,Moreandmorepeoplehavetheirownmicro-blogs.Somepeoplethinkitisgood,becausetheycanshowtheirtalentandshareinformation.Itisconvenienttothem.Theycanalsomeetnewfriendsandgainknowledge.However,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.Othersthinkitisbad.Theyspendalotoftimeandenergyonit.Soitwillaffectourworkandrest.Ithinkthemicro-blogisverygood,becausewecancommunicatewithourfriends.,(1)Moreandmorepeoplehavetheirownmicro-blogs.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,itiscommontoseethatmanypeoplesetuptheirownmicro-blogs.,句式(1):Itis+adj/n+(forsb).todo句式(2):宾语从句,句式-化腐朽为神奇,(2)Somepeoplethinkitisgood,becausetheycanshowtheirtalentandshareinformation.Itisconvenienttothem.,Somepeoplethinkitisagoodwaytoshowtheirtalentandshareagoodamountofinformationandexperience.Meanwhile,itsconvenienttokeepintouchwithfriends.,(3)Theycanalsomeetnewfriendsandgainknowledge.,Itisalsoanewplatformtomeetnewfriendsandgainknowledgeoftheoutsideworld.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,(4)Othersthinkitisbad.,However,othershaveoppositeopinions.,注意：使用高级词汇,Theyarguethatittakesbothtimeandenergytowriteneworreadmicro-blogs,whichwillaffectourworkandrest.,(5)Theyspendalotoftimeandenergyonit.Soitwillaffectourworkandrest.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,非限定语从句,名词性从句,(6)Ithinkthemicro-blogisverygood,becausewecancommunicatewithourfriends.,Inmyview,themicro-blogisagoodtoolforustokeepoureyesopenandcommunicatewithothers.Itwillbenefitusalotifwecanlimitthetimewespendonittoavoidgettingaddicted.,broadenourhorizons,句式-化腐朽为神奇,Dearsir,recentlyourclassmatesWiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,itiscommontoseemanypeoplesetuptheirownmicro-blogs.Somepeoplethinkitisagoodwaytoshowtheirtalentandshareinformation.Meanwhile,itsconvenienttokeepintouchwithfriends.Itisalsoanewplatformtomeetnewfriendsandgainknowledgeoftheoutsideworld.However,othershaveoppositeopinions.Theyarguethatittakesbothtimeandenergytowriteneworreadmicro-blogs,whichwillaffectourworkandrest.Inmyview,themicro-blogisagoodtoolforustobroadenourhorizonsandcommunicatewithothers.Itwillbenefitusalotifwecanlimitthetimewespendonittoavoidgettingaddicted.,词汇层面,1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。,使用较高级的词汇,读书对心灵有益。,ReadingdoesgoodtoourmindReadingisbeneficialtoourmind.Readingisofgreatbenefittoourmind.,Readingisgoodforourmind.,(1)Studentscanenrichtheirknowledge(2)Stuentscanhaveagoodcommandoftheirknowledge,Studentscanlearntheirknowledge.,Homework,仿写文,Howt