最新高考英语专题解析课件-基础写作[项目描述]ppt课件

1,相关短语,1.originateas.以出现/起源2.ameansofsurvival一种生存手段3.developinto发展成为4.beallowedto被允许5.growsteadily稳定增长,2,6.twiceinhistory历史上两次7.participatein参加；参与8.isconsideredtobe(as)被认为是9.whatismore此外10.offersb.help给某人提供帮助11.besimilarto与相似,3,12.choosetwosubjectsoutof.从中选择两个科目13.earnitsstatusasasport作为一项运动取得它的地位14.relatedreadingmaterials相关的阅读材料15.broadenoneshorizons开阔视野16.providesb.withaplatform给某人提供一个平台,4,1.项目描写一般是对某个事物、某项活动、某种风俗习惯等的描写,考生平时应多阅读英语报刊杂志,了解最新的技术发展,掌握一些相关的地道英语,如“畅销书”可以翻译为bestsellers，“卖断货”可以翻译为“selloutofstock”。,5,2.我们在项目描写的作文中需要特别注意词性,比如说“这个产品是高质量的”,我们容易错翻译为“Thisproductishighquality”,这就是我们直接按照字面翻译,没有注意到quality是个名词而不是形容词,所以我们应该翻译为“Thisproductisofhighquality”。,6,你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：,7,例题导写1.首先,认真审题,归纳信息。对于事物的描写和说明,考生可以根据事物的性质、特点划分信息。本题目里对奥运射击的项目的陈述,是按照时间顺序排列,因此在信息点的划分这步相对容易。射击的背景和现状分别是第一句和第五句,射击的发展中1896-1932年的变化可以用两句话表述,1968年妇女第一次获得参加奥运会的权利可以放在第四句描述。2.接着,词汇整理,草拟提纲。项目描写的文章考生要注意使用正确、地道的语言把句子组织在一起。,8,词汇整理翻译或完成下列单词或短语。句1：(1)射击_(2)生存工具_(3)直到才_,meansofsurvival/meansofmakingaliving,shooting,not.until.,9,句2句3：(4)(运动)项目_(5)中断_(6)重回奥运会_,ThesportreturnedtotheOlympics/TheOlympicswererestarted.,sportsevent,besuspended/bepaused,10,句4：(7)允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛_句5(8)稳步发展_,allow/permitwomentotakepartin/joinin/competein/participateintheOlympics或womenareadmittedascompetitorsintheOlympics,developsteadily,11,3.难句翻译翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句1：(1)射击最初只是生存工具。(1)Shootingoriginatedasameansofsurvival.(2)19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。(2)Shootingdevelopedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.,12,合并：Version1:Shootingwasoriginatedasameansofsurvivalanddevelopedintoasportinthelate19thcentury.(并列句)/Shooting,(whichwas)originatedasameansofsurvival,didntdevelopintoasportonlyuntilthelate19thcentury./Itwasnotuntilthelate19thcenturythatshooting,(whichwasoriginatedasameansofsurvival),developedintoasport.(定语从句,not.until的句型),13,句2句3：(1)1896：第一次成为奥运项目(1)ShootingbecameanOlympiceventofficiallyin1896.(2)1904：中断;(3)1928：中断(2-3)Shootingwassuspendedin1904and1928.(4)1932：重回奥运会(4)ItreturnedtotheGamesin1932.,14,合并：ShootingbecameanOlympiceventofficiallyin1896,butitwassuspendedin1904and1928.ItdidntreturntotheGamesuntil1932./ShootingbecameanOlympiceventofficiallyin1896.Then,itwassuspendedin1904and1928butfinallyreturnedtotheGamesin1932.,15,参考范文Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.Thesportfirstappearedin1896,butnonewerecontestedduringthe1904and1928Games.ThesportreturnedtotheOlympicsin1932.WomenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshootingin1968.Thesporthasgrownsteadilyfromjustthreeshootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.,16,4.连句成文。在写作过程中不要被中文提示限制了思路。如第一个信息点的“生存工具”,容易翻译为“thetoolofsurvival”,但在这里用tool是不贴切的,射击不是实物,应该是指“生存的方式”,所以应该用“themeansofsurvival/themeansofmakingaliving”更贴切。又如最后的一个信息点“稳步发展,1896奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有17项。”看上去似乎有三个分句,但其实通过逻辑分析，这个句子用一个简单句就可以表示出来(“奥运会从只用三项射击项目稳步发展到现今的17项”),也就是只需要使用developsteadilyfrom.to.这个词组就可以把这个句子表述清楚了。,17,能力提高1.短语翻译(1)我很荣幸_(2)有超过十年的历史_(3)高的品质_,ofhighquality,Iamhonoredtodo,hasahistoryofover10years,18,(4)不但而且_(5)国内外_(6)良好的售后服务_(7)团圆、运气、财富的象征_,asymbolofreunion,luckandfortune,Notonly.butalso,athomeandabroad,goodafter-saleservice,19,(8)表达祝福_(9)家庭聚会_(10)完善的功能_,completefunctions,expressbestwishes,haveafamilyreunion,20,2.作文填空(1)IamhonoredtointroduceonekindoflaptopVenuslaptopproducedbyourcompanywhich(1)_(有生产手提电脑十年以上的历史).Ourproduct,Venuslaptop,withacharmingappearance,is(2)_(高的品质)andhas(3)_(完善的功能).,completefunctions,ofhighquality,21,Notonlyisiteasytooperateandcarrybutalsothepriceoftheproductisreasonable.Whatsmore,itwasonceawardedthefirstprizeinaprovinciallaptopappraisal.Itsellswellathomeandabroadandhasagood(4)_(售后服务).,22,(2)TheMid-autumnFestival,whichisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina,fallsonAugust15thoftheLunarcalendareveryyear.(5)_(不仅仅)isitpopularinChina_itisalsocelebratedinmanyotherAsiancountries.,but,Notonly,23,Peoplebelievethatthemoonis(6)_(团圆、运气、财富的象征),anditisacustomto(7)_(表达祝福)tothebelovedonesatthisparticulartime.Onthatdaypeopleusuallygobackhometo(8)_(家庭聚会),enjoyingalargemealwiththeirfamily.Theywillalsoeatmooncakes,whichareroundcakeswithmeat,eggs,nutsandotherthingsinside.,24,假设你想说服你爸爸给你购买最新的一款手机iphone4,请你根据以下写作内容给他描述iphone4的情况。写作内容,25,参考范文TheiPhone4,atouch-screensmartphone,whichisthefifthgenerationoftheiPhone,isconsideredground-breakingandthebestsmartphoneintheworld.Comingintwocolors,blackandwhite,itretains(保留)almostallofthesamedesignfeaturesasitspredecessor(前身),theiPhone3.,26,However,withmorepowerfulbattery,ithas200hoursstandbytimeand8hourstalktimeon3G.Whatismore,thecamerainsideitisgreatlydeveloped.Whatismostamazingisthatnotonlycanyouorderittodothingslikesendingmessageswithyourvoicebutalsoitcanunderstandwhatyousayandofferyouhelp.,27,精华点评,这是对一个新的电子产品的描述,考生可以使用生动的语言描述,避免文章枯燥无味。如表示“突破性的”,考生可以使用形容词ground-breaking,或者名词breakthrough;表示外形与iphone3相似的时候,很多考生可以考虑到besimilartoiphone3inappearance,但范文中使用了retainalmostallofthesamedesignfeaturesas这个短语，使文章的语言更加高级和生动。,28,最后两句是表现iphone4改善了的和新的功能,因此范文中补充了两个细节withmorepowerfulbattery(第四句)和Whatismostamazingisthat.(第五句),使整个描述更有吸引力。,29,最近,你的英国笔友Jack的学校开展了选修课,他来信询问你校选修课的开展情况。请你根据以下提示,写一封回信介绍你校选修课情况。包括以下内容要点：,参考词汇：选修课electivecourse书法calligraphy,30,参考范文DearBob，Iampleasedtointroducetoyoutheelectivecoursesofourschool.Theelectivecoursesareheldfrom4:00to5:00intheafternooneveryWednesday,lastingaterm.Everystudentcanchoosetwosubjectsoutof20accordingtotheirowninterests,suchastheBriefIntroductionofChineseLiterature,theAppreciationofMovies,andCalligraphy.,31,Thereisnohomeworkfortheelectivecourses,butstudentsareencouragedtodoalotofrelatedreading,whichprovidesuswithaplatformforourdevelopment.Noexamswillbetakenandinsteadstudentsarerequiredtowriteanessay.Ilikeourselectivecoursesbecaus