小学英语作文ppt课件

LookAndwrite,看图作文,200906010237蒋天晓,1,2,Sample1,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。,3,1.Goovertherequirement,1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:,Astory（atrafficaccident),pasttense,Tom,he,4,Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),5,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),6,Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),7,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),8,Thedriver/frightened/runaway,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),9,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),10,Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),11,Keywords,sentences,rideabike/runfastto,WhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.,hithim/falloffhisbike,Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.,befrightened/runaway,Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.,seetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaught,Awomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.,12,3.Writingapassage,Passage1,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.,13,passage2,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.,14,Passage3,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.,15,Usingconnectives,并列转折3.因果4.其他,and,bothand,but,however,though,while,so,therefore,because,when,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,sothat,finally,asaresult,Whatwasworse,16,Summary:Howtowriteapicturestory?,Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）,Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.),17,基本篇章结构点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）事件的起因事件的发展/过程事件的结果扣题,18,中考作文的评分标准,四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分一档文：内容完整，