议论文正反观点对比写作

观点对比型写作训练,writing:(20minutes),在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章，并发表自己看法。,注意：词100左右上网：goonline方便的：convenient逃学：beabsentfromschool,Recently,ourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldgoonlineinoursparetime.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Moststudentsthinkthatwecangoonlineasmuchaspossibleinoursparetimebecausewearefreethen.ThroughtheInternet,wecangainplentyofthenewestknowledgeandthelatestnewsathomeandabroad.Whatsmore,networkoffersusaconvenientwaytocommunicatewitheachother.Mostimportantly,theInternetmakesourlivesoutsideclasscolorfulandvaried.,Ontheotherhand,fewstudentsholdtheviewthatgoingonlineispartofourdailylife.Buttheysuggestatimelimit.Theyhavefoundthatalotofstudentsareplayingcomputergamesinsteadofstudyingtheirlessons.Thereareevensomestudentswhoareabsentfromschoolfordays.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkwecangoonlineinoursparetimeinarightway,butwemustlimitourtimeontheInternet.,Recently,ourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldgoonlineinoursparetime.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Moststudentsthinkthatwecangoonlineasmuchaspossibleinoursparetimebecausewearefreethen.ThroughtheInternet,wecangainplentyofthenewestknowledgeandthelatestnewsathomeandabroad.Whatsmore,networkoffersusaconvenientwaytocommunicatewitheachother.Mostimportantly,theInternetmakesourlivesoutsideclasscolorfulandvaried.Ontheotherhand,fewstudentsholdtheviewthatgoingonlineispartofourdailylife.Buttheysuggestatimelimit.Theyhavefoundthatalotofstudentsareplayingcomputergamesinsteadofstudyingtheirlessons.Thereareevensomestudentswhoareabsentfromschoolfordays.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkwecangoonlineinoursparetimeinarightway,butwemustlimitourtimeontheInternet.,二.抓要点，列提纲-文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,首段：提出问题,第二段：不同观点对比,第三段：说明自己观点,写作步骤,1.审题（文体，时态，人称内容要点等）2.列提纲（安排好段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾）3.组合句子（连词成句，连句成篇）4.检查润色,Example1:,在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章，并发表自己看法。,注意：词100左右,本文属于_，基本时态是_，人称用_.,议论文,一般现在时,第一和第三人称,一.审题,提纲要点（mainpoints),1.在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。2.大多数同学认为时间是自己，提倡多上网3.网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新消息4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时6.多数人上网是玩游戏而不是学习7.个别同学甚至逃学上网8.自己看法及原因,及原因,1.在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一.,2.大多数同学认为时间是自己，提倡多上网3.网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新消息.4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活.,5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时6.多数人上网是玩游戏而不是学习7.个别同学甚至逃学上网.,8.自己看法及原因.,topic,Somepeoplesopinionandreasons,Otherpeoplesopinionandreasons,thewritersopinionsandreasons,介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：,三、组合句子介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是WehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿Wevehadasurveyonhowtochoosetheircourses,majorsanduniversities.practice:最近，我们班举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是我们是否应该利用课余时间上网。Recently,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldgoonlineinoursparetime.,过渡句,Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.However,eachcoinhastwosides.,主要有两种不同意见。,然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。,然而，每个硬币都有两面。,+介绍正方观点：,Sixtypercentofthestudentsareinfavouroftheidea.ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathinkSomepeoplebelievethatPractice:大多数学生支持我们应该利用课余时间上网的观点。Mostofthestudentsareinfavouroftheideathatweshouldgoonlineinoursparetime.,介绍反方观点,However,ofthestudentsthinkOntheotherhand,ofthestudentsthinkHowever,othershavedifferentopinions.Practice:但是别的人有不同的看法。他们认为多数学生上网是为了玩游戏而不是学习。However,othershavedifferentopinions.Theythinkthatmostofstudentsgoonlinetoplaygamesbutnottolearn.,本人观点inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith,Asforme,AsfarasImconcerned,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,whatismore;inaddition；besides,moreover,however;onthecontrary,therefore;asaresult;because,like;unlike,ontheotherhand,tosumup;allinall,1.表示递进,2.表示转折,HowtopolishyourWriting,3.表示因果,4.表示对比,5.表示总结,:,26%ofthestudents_theopinion.(赞同）Theyare_weakinsubjects_theycantcontrolthemselves.（不但而且）*_,（与之相反）74%ofthem_.(持有不同/相反的观点）,小试牛刀：衔接词,areinfavourof,arefor,notonly,butalso,Onthecontrary,holdadifferentview.,holdtheoppositeopinion,_,(在我看来）studentsshouldformagoodhabitofstudyingbythemselves_(而不是）dependingonteachers.,Inmyopinion,Personallyspeaking,AsfarasImconcerned,insteadof,高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（很好）（2125分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考书面表达评分标准,HowtopolishyourWriting,审,抄,列,四步,HowtopolishyourWriting,润,润,构思-文章结构,Lastweek,ourclassheldadiscussionaboutwhetherteachersshouldteachinfreeclass.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions对自习课讲课有两种态度.(2)态度一:.26%的学生赞同原因（1）原因（2）(3)态度二:74%的学生反对。原因（1）原因（2），(4)我的观点:学生应该形成自己的学习习惯,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,表示不同观点的套语,Paragraph1总起:Differentpeoplehold/havedifferentopinions.PeoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.,paragrap2表达赞同观点ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathinkSomepeoplebelievethat,表达反对的观点:Onthecontrary,ofthemholdadifferentview.ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.However,eachcoinhastwosides.Ontheotherhand,peoplethat.,object,(4)你的观点:,inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith,Asforme,AsfarasImconcerned,总结：inbrief,inaword,insummary,HowtopolishyourWriting,构思-短语,watchovercantcontrolthemselveshavenocontroloverthemselvesdontknowhowtostudybepooratschoolworkbeweakinsubjects,观点一（1）教师讲课能帮助监督自控能力较差的学生.（2）教师讲课对于不知怎么学习并且成绩差的学生是个帮助,构思-短语,观点二(1)学生应该利用自习课复习，练习和预习。（2）教师占用时间讲课不公平。,makeuseoftakeadvantageofgoovertheirlessons/reviewdoexercisespreviewprepareoneslessonstakeupsomuchfreeclassItsunfairforstudents,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,whatismore;inaddition；besides,moreover,however;onthecontrary,therefore;asaresult;because,like;unlike,ontheotherhand,tosumup;allinall,1.表示递进,2.表示转折,HowtopolishyourWriting,3.表示因果,4.表示对比,5.表示总结,:,26%ofthestudents_theopinion.(赞同）Theyare_weakinsubjects_theycantcontrolthemselves.（不但而且）*_,（与之相反）74%ofthem_.(持有不同/相反的观点）,小试牛刀：衔接词,areinfavourof,arefor,notonly,butalso,Onthecontrary,holdadifferentview.,holdtheoppositeopinion,_,(在我看来）studentsshouldformagoodhabitofstudyingbythemselves_(而不是）dependingonteachers.,Inmyopinion,Personallyspeaking,AsfarasImconcerned,insteadof,句式-化腐朽为神奇,Theythinkthatteachersteachinfreeclassisnotsuitable.Theythoughtteacherstaketimetospeaklessonsisunfairtothem,Itis+adj/n+(forsb).todowhenIf,takeup,teach,*,Teachersteachinfreeclassisagoodidea.,Studentshavetimetochecktheirlessons.,句式-化腐朽为神奇名词性从句,Weshouldvaluewhatwehave,句式：强调句和倒装句,I,Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.,Hardlyhadtheygottothestation