调查类英语写作-2012广州一模

2012广州一模,基础写作必用句型,doasurveyonsthamongsbcarryoutasurveyaboutsthamongsbsurveysbonsth(whether、how+句子),1他们将就人们过去20年的生活如何改变做一个调查.2上周我们在2600个学生中对“whoisyouridol“做了一个调查3近来我在我的同学中做了一个有关他们对新的英语教科书看法的调查4近来我在高三学生中做了一个有关体育锻炼的调查,10%ofthe.,IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook,RecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.,Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”,Theyllcarryoutasurveyonhowpeopleslifehaschangedinthepast20years.,Theycarriedoutasurveyabouthowpeopleslifehaschangedinthepast20years.Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook.RecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.,IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook.Accordingtothesurvey,80%ofthestudentswerequitesatisfiedwithit,_15%dislikeditand5%hadnoopinion.Studentswholikeditsaidthepictureswiththetextswereveryattractive,whichgreatlyarousedtheirinterestsinlearning.Moreover,thebookwasveryinteresting,coveringmanyhottopicsandprovidinglotsorculturalknowledgeoftheworld._,studentswhodislikeditcomplainedthereweretoomanynewwordsanddifficultsentences,makingthetextsdifficulttounderstand.Inconclusion,thenewEnglishtextbookhashelpedmoststudentsimprovetheirEnglishenormously.,while,However,1.调查问题及调查对象；2.主要活动；3.感受及原因；4.期望。,Recentlywesurveyed368middleschoolstudentsonhowtheyspentthe2012SpringFestival.30%saidtheyspentmostoftheirtimewiththeirparentsvisitingrelativesandfriendswhile25%wenttravelingwithclassmatesorparents.45%ofallthosesurveyedindicatedthattheyjuststayedathometodohomework.(WhenaskedhowtheyfeltabouttheSpringFestival),mostsaidtheyenjoyeditbecausetheyreceivedlotsofluckymoney,butsomefeltunhappybecausetheamountofhomeworktheyweregivenleftthemhavingnotimeforfunactivities.Manystudentsexpressedthehopethatnextyeartheywillhavelesshomeworkandmorefreetime.,你参加学校的研究学习小组并对高三学生的体育运动的状况进行研究。最近你对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查。【写作内容】请根据下列图例，用英语写一篇报告，并陈述你的观点。,【写作辅导】1.写作有可能用到的主要短语和单词：设施facility，提供资金的援助offersomefinancialaid，体育活动physicalactivities，体育训练physicaltraining，健康状况差beinpoorhealth。2.本文因为是对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查，属于普遍性问题，故应该使用一般现在时作为主流时态。,RecentlyImadeasurveyamongsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.Only35%ofthesurveyedstudentsdosports.Thereasonsareasfollows,halfofthestudentshavingtoomuchhomeworkandnotenoughtimetodoexercise,30%ofthemcomplainingaboutnoplaceswheretheycanrelaxthemselvesandnotenoughtrainingfacilities,10%livingtoofarawayfromtheplacesandsomeevennotknowinghowtotakeexercise.Becauseofthelackofphysicalactivities,manystudentsareinpoorhealth,soweshouldrealizetheimportanceoftakingexercise,andmeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethepresentsituation.Itwouldbegreatlyappreciatedthatourgovernmentandsocialorganizationsaswellcouldoffersomefinancialaid.,基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：偶像(idol)女生男生伟人18%18%父母25%11%影视明星50%14%体育明星6%48%（没有偶像）1%9%写作内容根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。,Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthefourthfortheboys.However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asforme,ThomasEdisonismyidol,becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.,你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论，下面是讨论记录：,你的看法,AsfarasIamconcerned,itisbetterforustomakepresentsbyourselvesbecauseThereceivercansenseourloveandbestwishestothemingiftsmadebyus957,LastFriday,ourclassmadeadiscussionaboutwhatshouldbepresentsforfriendsorclassmates.Theresultsareasfollows:60%peoplethoughtitgoodtobuypresentsinshopswherethegiftsareelegantandbeautiful,theyarefitforbeingprizes.Therestsupportedthattheycouldmakeitthemselves,andtheyheldtheideathatnotonlycanitshowoneselfstalent,buthelptostrengthentheawareofsavingaswell.AsfarasImconcerned,makingpresentsbyyourselfisaspecialwaytoshowyourwishestoyourfriends,whichtheycouldfeelthesincerelylovefromyou,Finderrorsinthefollowingsentences,1Mostofthestudentsconsideredthatweshouldpresentagoodsasagift2OurclasshadadiscussionaboutpresentsforclassmatesandfriendsonlastFriday.3Itisagoodchoicetogivepresentsbuyingfromshop.4Ifwithouttime,wehavenochoicebuttobuythegiftfromstores.,Theyhadadebateonwhethertheyshouldstopvehiclesonthehighwaytorescuethedogs,OurclasshadaheateddiscussionlastFridayonwhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriends.Sixtypercentofourclassmatessaidthattheywouldbuygiftsfromashopbecausetheythinksuchgiftsaredelicateandpretty,thusproperforgiving.However,theothersprefertomakethegiftsbythemselves.Ontheonehand,thiscanshowtheirpersonaloutstandingskillsandhelpthemdeveloptheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandontheotherhand,theycanusematerialsfromhometomakegifts,whichcanstrengthentheirawarenessofimportanceofsaving.Inmyopinion,givinggiftsmadebyourselvesisabetterwaytoexpressourfeelings.,consider/believe,Dearmum,IvejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter-schoolactivitiesandtheconsequencesofthisformyfuture.(或Ivejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyparticipationinsomanyafter-schoolactivities,theeffectofthisonmystudyperformanceanditsconsequencesformyfuture)Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry.Imalsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities.ItstruethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedontworry.Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax,developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance,althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass.来源:Z.xx.k.ComForthisreason,andtoalsorelieveyouofyourworry,Ihavedecidedtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthisterm.ThiswayIcanstillenjoytheoutsideactivitieswithoutaffectingeitheryouormystudyperformance.,第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的书信，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。DearDavid,Iamwritingyouthisemailbecauseyouresobusyeverydaywithyourstudiesandafter-schoolactivitiesthatweseldomhavechancestotalkface-to-face.ThereissomethingthatIamveryworriedabout.Youhavealwaysbeenanactiveboy,willingtohelpothersandalwayslookingforanopportunitytotrysomethingneworlearnsomethingdifferent.IthinkthesearewonderfulqualitiesbutIamconcernedthattheymaybeaffectingyourstudies.Inthepastthreemonthsaloneyouhavejoinedatleastfourdifferentstudentclubs.Iseetheseactivitiestakingupmoreandmoreofyourtime.Yourealwaysdiscussingsomethingwithyourclassmatesorsurfingonline.Yourealsodevotinglesstimetohomeworkandevenyourteacherssayyouarelookingverysleepyinclass.Iknowthatthesekindsofactivitiesarefunandcanhelpyourdevelopment,butIthinktheyhavestartedtodamageyourperformanceatschool.Pleaserememberthemostimportantthingatthisstageofyourlifeisyourstudies.Rightnowyoushoulddoyourbestinyourexaminationsasitwillgiveyoumorechoicesisyourfuture.IbegyoutofocusonyourmaingoalandnottothrowawayallyouryearsofhardworkYourlovingmother【写作内容】1.以约30词概括书信的主要内容。2.以约120词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法，内容包括：（1）你读信后的感受；（2）你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；（3）你对你妈妈的承诺。,认真审题，审体裁，抓要点,Dearmum,IvejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter-schoolactivitiesandremindsmeoftheconsequencesformyfuture.,letter,Summary2,Dearmum,Ivejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyover-participationinafter-schoolactivitieswhichhasabadeffectonmystudyperformanceandremindingmeofitsconsequencesformyfuture,Dearmum,Iamsorrytokeepyouconcernedaboutmystudyperformanceandfutureduetomyover-participationafter-schoolactivities.,你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法你1读信后的感受；,Thankyouforremindingmeoftheimportanceofmystudy.Readingyourletter,regretsandappreciationarefilledwithmyheartandsoul.Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry.Imalsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities.,ItstruethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedontworry.Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax,developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance,althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass.Ontheotherhand,asaSenior3student,Ishouldbeambitiousenoughtoattachgreatimportancetomylessons.Afterall,timeandtidewaitfornoman.SoIwilltrymybesttobalanceactivitiesandstudy,tryingtomakeactivitieshelprefreshmyselftostudymoreefficiently.,（2）对于学校社团或俱乐部活动，你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；,你对你妈妈的承诺,NowIhavemadeupmymindtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthistermandhopetorelieveyouofyourworry.,ThereforeIwillsparenoeffortstobreakawayfromthebusysocialactivities,instead,Iwillattachenoughimportancetomystudyanddevotemyselftomylessonstostruggleforabrightfuture.,DearPatti,Imwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonmystudies.Asyouknow,footballisaverypopularsportintheworldandIamattractedtoitandIhavefallenindeeplovewithit,whichmakesmefeelsocrazy.Ihavebeenspendinglotsoftimedoingmanythingsrelatedtoit,likewatchingfootballmatches,readingnewspapersandmagazines,andsearchingtheWebformoreinformationaboutfootball.Asaresult,ithascertainlydisturbedmynormalstudy.ThoughIknowtobeafootballfanismyhobbyandmymajorobjectiveistolearn.Iamstillaseniortwomiddleschoolstudent,andIllhavemyownbusinessevenwhenIgrowup,soIamnotlikelytodoajobinthefieldoffootball.ButnowIcantstopmyselffromgettinginvolvedfurtherwithfootball.SoIfeelverydepressedandwanttoknowhowtodealwiththecontradiction(矛盾)betweenmystudiesandhobbies.Yourssincerely,LiMing,DearLiMing,Thankyouforyourletter.Fromyourletter.Iveknownsomethingaboutyoursituation.Youareverydepressedbecauseofthecontradictionthatyoucanttearyourselfawayfromfootball,whichhasbeendisturbingyousomuchthatyoucantconcentrateonyoulessons.Hobbiesareveryimportanttoaperson,withoutwhichlifewontbeascolorfulasitshouldbe.Theycancheeryouupandimproveyourcomprehensiveabilities,buttheyalsorequiretimeanddevotion.Youarestillastudent,whosemaintaskshouldbegainingknowledge,soyoumustknowwhichismoreimportantthingtodoindiffe