书面表达之提高训练PPT课件

.,1,2018书面表达之提高训练,.,2,level（档次）,level1.21-25(excellent)level2.16-20(aboveaverage)level3.11-15(averagelevel)level4.6-10(belowaverage)level5.1-5,.,3,.,4,.,5,.,6,.,7,.,8,书面表达“五大得分点”,1、卷面:clean(议论)2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;3.希望了解她的近况。,实战演练,.,11,DearSue,1.对她表达感谢之意;(议论)2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;3.希望了解她的近况。,.,12,对她表达感谢之意;(议论)Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingthislettertosaythankyou.Youwereverypatientwithus.Youtaughtwellandyoutaughtmealot.Wehavemadegreatprogresswithyourhelp.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;Iwanttotellyousomethingnewaboutmyclass.AfteryouleftfortheAmerica,wehadanEnglishcompetition.Wealldidverywell,usingtheknowledgeyoutoldus.youhelpedussomuch!希望了解她的近况Sue,Imissyousomuch.CouldyoutellmeyourlifeinAmerica?Howiseverythinggoingonwithyou?Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply!,.,13,Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingthislettertosaythankyou.Firstandforemost,itisclearthatyouwereverypatientwithus.Additionally,needlesstosay,youtaughtwellandyoutaughtmealot.Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodoubtthatwehavemadegreatprogresswithyourhelp.Asaresult,wearegratefultoyou.Wewontforgetthesedaysthatwespenttogether.Bytheway,Icantwaittotellyousomethingnewaboutmyclass.AfteryouleftfortheAmerica,wehadanEnglishcompetition.Wealldidverywell,usingtheknowledgeyoutoldus.Noonecandenyyouhelpedussomuch!Sue,Imissyousomuch.CouldyoutellmeyourlifeinAmerica?Howiseverythinggoingonwithyou?Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply!,.,14,作业：,你喜欢哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。,.,15,你喜欢哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。Ilikehistorybooksandliterarybooks.Iamfondof/crazybouthistorybooksandliterarybooks.whatinterestsmemostisliterarybooks,especiallythosebyfamouswriters.Foronething,theyhelptoimprovemywritingskills（提高我的写作技能）andbroadenmyhorizons.(开阔视野）Foranother,theycanenrichmylife（丰富生活）andprovidemewithgreatfun.（提供乐趣）,.,16,段落结构和过渡词,threeparts3段一段一主题-扩展,最好每句都用,.,17,【最常用的段落框架】,（2）Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,.Foronething,.Foranother,.一方面.另一方面.（3）Firstandforemost,.Additionally,./Inaddition,.Lastbutnotleast,.首先，.其次/此外.,最后.（4）Tobegin/startwith,.Moreover,.Furthermore/Whatsmore,.Finally,.首先，.其次.,此外.,.,最后.,.,18,某英文报社举办以“ILikeReading”为主题的征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文：1你为什么喜欢读书；2你喜欢哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。,ILikeReadingReadingismyfavoritehobby.Icanneverstoptheloveforreadingbecausebooksarelikewiseteachersaswellasgoodfriendsinmylife.Asweallknow,booksarethesourceofknowledge.Ibenefitagreatdealfromreading.Thereareavarietyofbooksforustochoosefrom,likehistorybooks,sciencebooks,literarybooksandsoon.Butwhatinterestsmemostisliterarybooks,especiallythosebyfamouswriters.Foronething,theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.Foranother,theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.Isntitapleasuretohavegreatcalminmindwhileyouarereading?,.,19,假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom给你写了一封邮件，向你寻求一些如何保持健康的建议。,DearTom,Iwasverygladtohearfromyou._,实战演练,.,20,假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom给你写了一封邮件，向你寻求一些如何保持健康的建议。,DearTom,Iwasverygladtohearfromyou.Asfortheproblemyouputforwardinyourletter,Iwouldliketosharethewaytokeepfitwithyou.Needlesstosay,healthisveryimportantforallofus.Inordertokeepfit,weneedtoknowhowtokeephealthy.Therearesomewaystokeepfit,whichareasfollows.首先，注意你的饮食。其次，有规律地锻炼。最后，养成良好的生活习惯。如果你能遵循以上建议，你一定能保持健康。,.,21,DearTom,Iwasverygladtohearfromyou.Asfortheproblemyouputforwardinyourletter,Iwouldliketosharethewaytokeepfitwithyou.Needlesstosay,healthisveryimportantforallofus.Inordertokeepfit,weneedtoknowhowtokeephealthy.Therearesomewaystokeepfit,whichareasfollows.Firstandforemost,keepabalanceddiet.Youshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables,becausetheyaregoodforhealth.Meanwhile,donteattoomuchfoodthatcontainsfat.Inaddition,takeexerciseregularly.Regularexercisecanhelpyoukeepfit/buildupyourbody.Lastbutnotleast,formthegoodlivinghabit.Enoughsleepcanmakeyoulookgreat!Ifyoucanfollowthesuggestionsabove,youaresuretokeephealthy.,.,22,过渡词,.,23,【十五大类过渡词】,温馨提示：有必要一一研读！对写作、完型、翻译都很有帮助！花30分钟抄几遍吧！最佳学习方法：先把全部的学一遍，再挑出你自己写作时可能用到的背过！(1)表并列关系的过渡词:and,also,aswell,aswellas,or,too,notonly.butalso,both.and,either.or,neither.nor2)表递进关系的过渡词:besides,inaddition(加之,除之外),moreover(此外,而且),whatsmore(更重要的是),whatsworse(更糟糕的是),.,24,(3)表转折对比的过渡词:but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary(相反),although+句子,despite,inspiteof+名词,nevertheless(然而),yearsago.today,theformer.thelatter,(4)表原因的过渡词:because,since,as,for,nowthat+句子becauseof,thanksto,dueto，owingto,(由于)+名词性短语(5)表结果的过渡词:So.；Thus,.；Therefore,.；Asaresult,.；sothat.；hence(因此),.；so.that.；such.that.；,.,25,(6)表条件的过渡词:If=onconditionthat(条件是)；as/solongas(只要)；unless(7)表时间的过渡词:when,while,after,before,until,later,soon,lately,recently,since,fromthenon,fromnowon,then,suddenly,allofasudden,atthesametime,next,earlythismorning,afterawhile,inafewdays,now,presently,atpresent,finally,atlast,eventually,immediately,themoment,assoonas(8)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast,eventually(终于)afterward(后来),meanwhile(几乎同时),thereafter(在那以后),.,26,(9)表换一种方式表达的过渡词:Inotherwords,.；Thatistosay,.；Toputitanotherway,.；(10)表进行举例说明的过渡词:take.forexample,forinstance,forexample,like,suchas(11)表陈述事实的过渡词:infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth(12)表强调的过渡词:certainly,indeed,aboveall(尤其是，最重要的是）,mostimportantly,infact,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,.,27,13)表比较的过渡词:similarly,similarto(14)表目的的过渡词:forthisreason,forthispurpose(为此),inorderto,soasto,inorderthat+句子(15)表总结的过渡词:inaword(总之,),ingeneral(总而言之）,inshort(总之),afterall,generallyspeaking（一般而言）,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary,.,28,【过渡词专项练习】,湖北卷(infact,inmyopinion,foronereason,so,foranotherreason,therefore)Imverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.Ivebeenthink-ingaboutthequestionyouaskedme._,Youshouldcomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad._,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChina.Itwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob._,Iknowafewbigcompaniesinourcityarehopingtohirepeoplelikeyou._,Ithinkitwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyaregettingold.Ithinkitsagoodideaforyoutoreturn._,whatareyouwaitingfor?,Inmyopinion,Foronereason,Infact,Foranotherreason,Therefore,.,29,(inmyopinion,itisknowntousall,whatsmore,so,but,insteadof)_thatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.Asstudents,weoftentakeexaminationsatschool._sometimeswehavetoomanyexaminationswhicharetoodifficultforus.Someofusarelazyanddontworkhardatourlessons._,whentakingexaminations,theysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers._,itiswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Westudentsshouldbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghard_cheatinginexaminations._,weshouldimproveourstudymethodsandgetwellpreparedforexaminations.,Itisknowntousall,But,So,Inmyopinion,Insteadof,Whatsmore,.,30,遣词造句-后面添,.,31,尾巴句型:,“因为/以防/所以/为了/如果/只要/这件事”1.因为.,thatsbecause/because/,for/forthereasonthat.+句子,becauseof/owingto/thanksto/dueto+名词【搭配！注意搭配！】ItisimportantforustolearnEnglish,becauseEnglishisaninternationallanguageandiswidelyspoken.2.以防.,incase,forfearthatWemustlearnEnglishwell,incaseweneedit.Forexample,jobinterview,CollegeEntranceExamination.,.,32,3.所以.so./.,asaresult,./.,therefore,./.,consequently,.Readingcanenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizons,asaresult,wearesupposedtoreadbooksfrequently.4.为了.sothat/inorderthat.+句子soasto/inordertodoWeshouldrememberwordsasmanyaspossibleinordertoimproveourEnglish.,.,33,5.如果.If,.6.只要Aslongas,.IfyouwanttoimproveyourEnglish,youshouldrememberwordsasmanyaspossible.Ifyoucanfollowthesuggestionsabove,youaresureto.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youcancallmeat4444444.Aslongasyouworkhard,youareboundtomakegreatprogress.Aslongasyoupractisemore,youaresuretoimproveyourspokenEnglish.,.,34,7.“这件事”，which(定语从句）Imwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao,whichisbecomingpopularinChina.ItookpartinanEnglishContest,whichisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.IwanttovisitNewZealand,whichisfamousforitsbeautifulsceneryandplacesofinterest.8.程度so+adj+thatsuch+n+thatThefilmissointerestingthatIseeitthreetimes.,.,35,【练习1】你的英国笔友Peter想学中文，你给他意见。1.选报中文进修课程。(语言课程languagecourse）2.广泛涉猎中文书刊、电视。（杂志magazines电视节目CCTVprograms）3.时常吟唱中文音乐艺术作品。4.广交华夏大地五湖四海的挚友。（交朋友makefriends),.,36,Hereareseveralsuggestionsforyou.Tobeginwith,attendingalanguagecoursewillprovideyouwiththemostwidelyusedwordsandexpressions.Besides,somelocalbooksandmagazinesaswellasCCTVprogramscancultivateyourinterestsandbroadenyourhorizonsandhelpyouknowmoreaboutourculture.Whatsmore,itisalsobeneficialforyoutolearnsomesongs,likeAbovetheMoon,whichcangraduallyimproveyourpronunciationandyourlisteningskills.Finally,makesomefriendsfromChinasothatyoucannaturallypracticethiselegantlanguagewiththem,inthatitispracticethatmakesperfect.,.,37,【八个“万能弊”】,1、浪费时间精力Itisagreatwasteoftimeandenergy.2、浪费金钱Itcostssomuchmoneythatmanyfamiliescannotaffordit,whichmayevenresultinseriousfinancialburden.3、影响学习Itneverfailstohaveabad/negative(负面的、消极的)effectonourstudy.4、影响身心健康Itisundoubtedly(毫无疑问地)badfor/harmfultoourphysicalandmentalhealth.,.,38,5、影响人际关系Ourfamily/interpersonalrelationshipwillbeaffected.6、让人上瘾Itwillgradually(逐渐地)/eventually(最终)getyouaddictedtoit7、产生各种麻烦和问题Itwillcauseendlesstroubleandvariousproblems.8、导致不可预料的后果Itwillleadtosomeunexpectedoutcomes.,.,39,为什么要远离电脑游戏,Frommyperspective,itisvitalforusteenagerstostayawayfromcomputergames.Asforthereasons,firstandforemost,itisagreatwasteoftimeandenergy;consequently,ourstudywillbebadlyaffected.Additionally,itcostssomuchmoneythatmanyfamiliescanotevenaffordit.Lastbutnotleast,computergameswillgraduallygetyouaddictedtoit,whichneverfailstocauseendlesstroublesandvariousproblems.,.,40,中学生该不该带手机上学,Frommyperspective,wehighschoolstudentsarenotsupposedtotakethemobilephonetoschool.Asforthereasons,firstandforemost,itisagreatwasteoftimeandenergy;consequently,ourstudywillbebadlyaffected.Additionally,itwillundoubtedlydoharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itwillgraduallygetyouaddictedtoit,whichneverfailstocauseendlesstroublesandvariousproblems.,.,41,【八个“万能利”】,1、挣钱Wecanmakesomepocketmoneytobuysomemeaningfulandeducationalbooks.2、培养兴趣、开头视野Onlybydoingsocanwecultivateourinterestsandbroadenourhorizons.3、提高能力（交际、交流）Notonlyourcommunicationabilitybutalsoourinterpersonalskillscanbepolished(打磨)andimproved.4、交朋友Wecanmakesomeclose(亲密的朋友)friendstosharewitheachotherourownlifeexperience.,.,42,5、利用好时间Wewillbeabletomakethemostof(最大限度利用好)oureverydaytimetodosomevaluable（有价值的）things.6、享受生活Itgivesyouanopportunitytoenjoyyourlifefromadifferentpointofview.7、有意义、有趣Itisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsoentertaining.8、面对挑战、克服苦难、达成目标、实现梦想Itcanteachushowtofacechallenges,overcomedifficulties,achieveourgoalsandrealizesourdreams.,.,43,中学生利用暑假去打工的好处,Frommyperspective,itisnecessaryforusteenagerstodosomepart-timejobsduringthesummervacation.Asforthereasons,foronething,wewillbeabletomakethemostofeverytimetodosomevaluablethings.Sothatnotonlyourcommunicationabilitybutalsoourinterpersonalskillscanbepolishedandthusimproved.Foranother,itcanteachushowtofacechallenges,overcomedifficulties,achieveourgoalsandrealizesourdreams.,.,44,.,45,如“IamLiHua,a17-year-oldboycurrentlystudyinginXinhuahighschool.Borninafamilyofwriters,Imcrazyaboutreadingnovelsandwritingpoems.”这样的句子是值得大家背诵、模仿的。,根据“写信目的”的不同，书信可分为感谢信、邀请信、建议信、道歉信、自荐信、求助信、咨询信、祝贺信、告知信等，其写信目的的写法各不相同，值得大家一一掌握。常用句型列举如下：自荐信：Iamwritingthislettertoapplyforthejob/position.感谢信：Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyou.邀请信：Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhe.(asourguest/judge).建议信：Iamwritingtheselinestogiveyouahand.求助信：Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.道歉信：Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyou.,.,46,结尾段一般为各种“客套话”，客套话包含感谢、致歉、必要的补充说明、个人愿望、期待回信等等。在交际中，合理地使用“客套话”可以体现考生的交际能力和个人修养。想写好结尾段，考生应识记一些常用的客套话写法，如：再次表达歉意：Iwouldliketoapologizetoyouagainfordoingsth.（用于道歉信）希望得到某份工作：Thechanceofferedtome,Iwoulddedicateallmyeffortandwisdomtoyournewspaper/thegames.（用于自荐信）希望对方问题得到解决：Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbebeneficialandusefulforyou.（用于建议信）希望对方能够施予援手：Hopefully,youwouldbesokindastogivemeahandatyourearliestconvenience.感谢对方读信：Thankyouforreadingmyletterinsuchahotsummer.（用于各种书信，insuchahotsummer五个单词意义非凡，聪明的考生你懂的）期盼对方回信：Sincerelylookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.在书信的结尾，还应写上Bestwishes.以及Yourstruly,LiHua等，以满足书信格式的要求。,.,47,两篇高分范文如下，希望大家认真揣摩、熟练背诵、活学活用,DearSirorMadam,Howareyoudoing?IamaChinesestudentcurrentlystudyinginyourschoolforthesummercourses.IhavebeenenjoyingmyselfherebutIhavegotsomeproblemswithmylifeandstudy.So,Iamwritin