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高考英语作文“六步法”教学,创意与制作:新世纪中学郭中伦,Step1仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇Step5.检查润色Step6.定稿誊写,高考英语作文“六步法”教学,范例1,题目：Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsforyears.OnemorningMr.SmithcalledatMr.Greens.Thefollowingistheirconversation.S:Goodmorning.G:Goodmorning.S:IhaventseenyoursonTomforalongtime.Hashemadegreatachievements?G:Oh,Idontknowifheissuccessful,butIknowthathehasdrawnthegovernmentsattentionandthepolicearesearchingforhim.,分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情：一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。,要求：1、用间接引语描述如上幽默故事。2、词数为80100。,第一步：仔细审题,情景提供的方式是对话，题材是故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：usedto，callon，hesitate，makeachievements，etc,涉及的句子有简单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为80100。,第二步：理清要点,本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是谈论Mr.Green的儿子，故事以Mr.Green一段幽默的话结尾。所以，本文要点如下：1、Mr.Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜访。3、他们互致问候早上好。4、Mr.Smith说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。.,第三步：译写单句,1.Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.2.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.3.Theysaidgoodmorningtoeachother.4.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.5.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant.Thepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第四步：连句成篇,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.Theysaid“goodmorning”toeachother.ThenMr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第五步：检查润色,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother(said“goodmorning”toeachother),thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwondered(.Heasked)ifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthought(said)thathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第六步：定稿誊写,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第六步：定稿誊写,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,范例2,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。参考词汇：明珠pearl，鸦片opium。,第一步：仔细审题本文属说明性文章。,第二步：理清要点1、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。,第三步：译写单句,1.HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k.Herpopulationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherland.4.Herfutureisverybeautiful.,第四步：连句成篇,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045kand(.Her)populationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandand(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.,第五步：检查润色1,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(Herareais)1,045kand(.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.,第五步：检查润色1之后的文章,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第五步：检查润色2,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand),thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhard(willbeworkinghard)tomakehermorebeautiful.,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第五步：检查润色2之后的文章,第六步：定稿誊写,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第六步：定稿誊写,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,Homework:,请以记者的身份,根据案件登记卡所提供的情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：100词左右。,Possibleversion:Yesterdayafternoon,arobberyhappenedinabankintheParkStreet.Accordingtothewitnessesstatements,itwasfiveminutesto5:00pm,justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebank.Anditwasrainingheavily,withlittletrafficontheroadoutside.Suddenly,twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns.Thentheyputthemoneyinbags,rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20,000dollars.Allthethingsl