高考写作概要writing--summaryppt课件

.,1,SummaryWriting,ByStone,.,2,.,3,When?Where?Who?What?Why?How?,StoneSoup,.,4,Questions,When?Where?Who?What?Why?How?,longago,suninthesky,2.apoorlittletown,3.ayoungman,4.hungrywantedtoaskforsomethingtoeatrefusedtogivehimfood.,5.Allthepeoplehadalittlefood,butnotenoughtoshare.,6.hadanidea.madeafirecookedthestonesoupattractedthepeopletoputsomefoodintoit.shared.,.,5,Longago,ayoungmancameintoapoorlittletown.Hewasveryhungryandwantedtoaskforsomefoodtoeat.Butthepeoplerefusedtogivehimanyfood.Becauseallthepeoplehadalittlefood,butnotenoughtoshare.SoHehadanidea.Hemadeafireinthemiddleoftownandcookedstonesoup.Itattractedpeopletogooutandputsomefoodintothepot.Whenthesoupwasready,theyoungmansharedthesoupwithallofthem.,concise,complete,correct,coherent,.,6,概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,评分要点1）理解准确，涵盖全部要点2）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇3）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑4）完全使用自己的语言,.,7,Summarywritingforargumentation,.,8,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,1.Read,topic:,structure,Inwhatorderdoesthepassagedeveloptoshowthedifferent“attitudes”?,Tip1:Readfortopicandstructure,.,9,(2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,.,10,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,2.Explore（探究）,supportingideas,Findoutthetopicsentencesofeachparagraph,.,11,Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.,ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries,.,12,(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?,.,13,(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,Tip2:Explorefortopicsentences,leavingoutunnecessarypoints,.,14,3:Paraphrase（改写）,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.,different,mixed,various,opinions,views,ideas,Attitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes.,Peopleholddifferent/mixedopinionstowardsdirtovertime.,Tip3.Paraphrasewithsynonyms(同义词）,.,15,thoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,tectedpeoplefromgettingill.regarddirtontheskinasabarrieragainstdisease.,Paraphrasewithsynonyms（同义句）,.,16,Inthe18thcentury,regardedcleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth,Itwasnotuntil.thatpeolecametobelievewashingoffdirtbenefitedhealth.Centurieslater,peoplecametoadopt/employ/subsribetoascientificviewondirt,consideringitahealthypracticetoremovedirtofftheskin.,Tip4:Paraphrase（改写）withstructures(participle分词,with-structure结构,emphaticsentence强调句andsoon),.,17,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem,playwithdirthelpstrenghthentheirimmunesystem.exposuretosomedirtmayhelp/boostourimmunesystem.,Paraphrasewithsynonyms,.,18,Peopleholdmixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.,Inthe16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.,Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtmorethan200yearsago.Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.,Nowadays,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.,However,Nevertheless/But,people,4:Polish（润色）,nowadays,Tip5:Polishwithconnectivestomakeitcoherent.,.,19,5.Copy,Tip6:Copywithcleanness,.,20,Howtowriteasummary,R,E,P,C,P,5STEPS,6TIPS,Topicandstructure,Topic/supportingsentences,Connectives/Coherence,Cleanness,Synonyms,Structures,.,21,ExerciseReadandwritewiththestepsandtips,.,22,Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgotupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Nowadays,peoplestillholdthesameview.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthanatanyothertimeoftheday.Additionally,ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Thatiswhymanypeoplegettingupearlydophysicalexerciseyearafteryear.Also,wewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.Forexample,ifeveryoneinthefamilygetsupearly,wifewillhaveenoughtimetopreparethebreakfastforthewholefamily.Childrenwillhaveenoughtimetocatchtheschoolbus,andhusbandwillneverforgettochangehisdirtyshirt.Everythin