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writing,1,2,Howdouyoudescribeonesfear,1.Desperateandhopless,Ihadnochoicebuttositinthedarkness,hopingthatsomeonewouldcometomyrescue.2.Hearingsomestrangesound,Istoodstill,tremblingthithfear/interror.,3SonervouswasIthatIcouldclearlyhearmyheartpounding/beatingwildly.4.Myhandsbegantosweatandmymouthdry.Iwantedtoscreamatthetopofmymouth.,5.Mymindwentblankandmykneeswereshaking.6.Theterrifyingscenescaredthepantsoffofme.,3,retellthestory,Ask6basicquestions:,whowhenwherewhatwhyhow,4,Climax(theturningpoint),FallingAction(whichhelpsprobemsolved),Resolution(ending),STORYMAP,Themes,Setting(time/place/character),RisingAction(whichmakesproblemworse),Climax(theturningpoint),FallingAction(whichhelpsprobemsolved),Resolution(ending),5,IfollowedMaliintothejungle,Malitaughtmetomakeabedwithmoss,aftersupper,Malifellasleep,Ifeltaloneandfrightened,Iheardnoisesofanimals,IwantedtoscreambutIstoppoedmyself,Iclosedmyeyesandheardathousandnoises,Iopenedmyeyesandheldaknife,6,findclues,1.thegivenpassage:findsentencesthatdescribethemaincharacter.,1.Isuddenlyfeltaloneandafraid.2.suddenlymymouthwentdry.3.Iwantedtoscream.4.Ifeltmymouthopenwide,readytoscreamasloudaspossible.5.。,1.OldMalilitafire.2.Heshowedmehowtomakeabedwithmoss.3.“Ilearnedmakebeds,bywatchingandlistenningtoothers.,tip1:makefulluseofthegiveninformation;payattentiontothevividdescribtionwhichyoucanuseinyourownwriting.,IwasfrightenedatthejunglewhileOldMaliwasmoreexperenced.Therefore,IcancountonhimwhenIwasintrouble.,7,findclues,1.thegivenwords:classify:,Tip2:choosethekeywordscoveringthemostimportantinformation,suchasthemaincharactersandthemainobjects.,jungle,OldMali,night,learn,fastasleep,fire,scream,noises,imaginary,nouns:jungle,OldMali,night,fire,noises,verb:learn,fastasleeep,scream,adjective:dark,imaginary,8,findclues,3.thegivensentences:Para1:Para2:,Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.,OldMalisquietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.,9,inferthedevelopment,Para1:Para2:,Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.,OldMalisquietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.,tip2:Byraisingquestionsonyourownyoucanpeoducemoredetailsofthedevelopmentofthestory.,whatdidMalisaytome?,Istherearealwildanimal?whatwasitlike?HowdidIreact?,Howdidwesolvetheanimalproblem?Whatonearthwastheanimal?AfterIfeltbetter,whatwouldIdo?,10,version:,para2:,tip:thelastsentenceofthepara1shouldbenaturallyconnectedwithpara2,otherwiseitmaylookstrange.,11,version:,para2:,tip:thelastsentenceofthepara1shouldbenaturallyconnectedwithpara2,otherwiseitmaylookstrange.,12,firstdraft,IthoughtIsawascaryanimal.ItwastheuglestmonsterIhadeverseen.Iwasnearlyfrightenedtodeath.ItwasatthatmometthatoldMalicomfortedme.,Thewildanimalturnedouttobetheshadeofthetrees.OldMaliunderstoodmeandtoldmenothingtoworryabout.ThenIrelaxedandfellasleep.,13,reviseandpolish,1._Iapproachedtheburningfire_Imighthaveseenafierceanimal,withsharpteeth_(我刚一靠近火堆,我就好像看见了一只凶猛的野兽,长着尖锐的牙齿,似乎眨眼间就能吞掉一切)2.我从没见过这么恐怖的怪物。3._(如此恐惧)wasIthatIstoodstill/wasfrozen.大脑一片空白,心跳加速。_.4.我正要尖叫,这时我听到温和的声音传来,“怎么了”。IturnedaroundandfoundMali_(关切地看着我)5._(即尴尬又紧张),Isharedmyabsurdimaginationwithhim.6.Afterhearing/Havingheardmyworry,Maligentlycomfortedme,“IassureyoueverythingisOK.”,Hardlyhad,when,asifitcanswalloweverythinginablinkofaneye.,NeverhaveIseensuchaterrifyinganimal.,Ihaveneverseenamoreterrifyinganimal,Sofrightened,Mymindwentblankandmykneeswereshaking.,Iwasabouttoscreamatthetopofmyvoice/withallmystrengthwhenIheardasoftvoice,“AreyouOK?/Whatsthematter?”,lookingatmewithconcern,Embarassedandnervous,tip:trytousevarioussentencestructurestomakeyourwritingmorevividandlessboring;advancedwordsanddescriptionsofmentalstate,enviornmentandactionsarenecessary.,14,reviseandpolish,1.We_(小心翼翼)tothefire,_(却发现除了树影什么都没有)2.I_(如释重负叹了口气)3.ItwasnotuntilIreturnedtonarmalthatMaliwenttobed.NotuntilIreturnedtonormaldidMaligotoded.4.Relaxedandexhausted,Ialsofellasleep,dreamingthatwehadagreattimeexploringthefascinatingjungle.,15,thetips,Tip1:choosethekeywordscoveringthemostimportantinformation,suchasthemaincharactersandthemainobjects.,tip2:makefulluseofthegiveninformation;payattentiontothevividdescribtionwhichyoucanuseinyourownwriting.,tip3:Byraisingquestionsonyourownyoucanpeoducemoredetailsofthedevelopmentofthestory.,tip4:trytousevarioussentencestructurestomakeyourwritingmorevividandlessboring;advancedwordsanddescriptionsofmentalstate,enviornmentandactionsarenecessary.,tip5:thelastsentenceofthepara1shouldbenaturallyconnectedwithpara2,otherwiseitmaylookstrange.,16,themajorproblems,软伤:1.情节不合理,思维跳跃过大,与所给上文不契合。2情节太简单,寥寥数语,缺乏环境动作描写和人物内心的描述3没有结局4.语言太简单,不够生动具体。,Alackofaccurateunderstandingofthegivenpassageandreasonableimagination.,17,themajorproblems,硬伤:1.字迹潦草,卷面不整洁2拼写错误,语法错误,句子结构混乱(时态,词汇)3.Chinglish,18,Practicemakesperfect,Myfirstadviceisthatyoushouldpaygreatattentiontoyourhandwriting,whichisofvitalimportancetoyourgrade.Besides,IrecommendthatyoureadfamousEnglishnovelsinyoursp

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