英语求职信的细节

精品文档2016全新精品资料全新公文范文全程指导写作独家原创1/4英语求职信的细节一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。REPLYINGTOYOURADVERTISEMENTANSWERINGYOURADVERTISEMENTBELIEVINGTHATTHEREISANOPPORTUNITYTHINKINGTHATTHEREISAVACANCYINYOURCOMPANYHAVINGREADYOURAD再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面1句较差，经过修改后2句显得比较恰当。A1REPLYINGTOYOURRECENTADVERTISEMENTINTHEBOSTONEVENINGGLOBE,IWISHTOAPPLYFORTHEPOSITIONOFSALESMANAGER2IAMAPPLYINGFORTHEPOSITIONOFSALESMANAGERIBELIEVEMYQUALIFICATIONSWILLMEETYOUREXACTINGREQUIREMENTSB1IBELIEVEAFTERREADINGYOURADVERTISEMENT精品文档2016全新精品资料全新公文范文全程指导写作独家原创2/4INTHISMORNINGSJOURNALTHATYOUAREOFFERINGJUSTTHEOPPORTUNITYIAMLOOKINGFOR2YOURADVERTISEMENTINTHISMORNINGSJOURNALFORANADJUSTMENTMANAGERPROMPTEDMETOAPPLYFORTHISPOSITIONC1HAVINGREADYOURADVERTISEMENTINTHENEWYORKTIMESFORANACCOUNTANT,ITHOUGHTYOUMIGHTBEINTERESTEDINMYAPPLICATION2INYOURADVERTISEMENTFORANACCOUNTANT,YOUINDICATEDTHATYOUREQUIRETHESERVICESOFACOMPETENTPERSON,WITHTHOROUGHTRAININGINTHEFIELDOFCOSTACCOUNTINGPLEASECONSIDERMEANAPPLICANTFORTHEPOSITIONHEREAREMYREASONSFORBELIEVINGIAMQUALIFIEDFORTHISWORK二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子IDPREFERNOTTOSETASALARY,BUTSINCEYOUASK,ICONSIDER6,500AMONTHTOBESATISFACTORYITSHARDFORMETOSAYWHATMYSALARYSHOULDBESETAT,BUTIFPRESSEDIWOULDHAVETOASKFORAMONTHASANINITIALSALARYIDONTFEELTHATISHOULDSETMYOWNSALARY,精品文档2016全新精品资料全新公文范文全程指导写作独家原创3/4ASIAMHAPPYENOUGHTOHAVETHEPRIVILEGEOFWORKINGFORYOUHOWEVER,IWOULDCONSIDERAMONTHSATISFACTORYCOMPENSATIONFORMYAPPRENTICESHIP三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用ASFORSALARY,IDONOTKNOWWHATTOSAYWOULD4,500AMONTHBETOOMUCHDOYOUTHINKIWOULDBEASKINGTOOMUCHIFISAID5,000DOLLARSAMONTHYOUKNOWWHATMYSERVICESAREWORTHBETTERTHANIDOALLIWANTISALIVINGWAGE四、关于求职信的结尾用语，下面也有三组例句。每一组里面1句较差，经过修改后2句显得比较恰当。A1软弱、羞怯的IFYOUTHINKICANFILLTHEPOSITIONAFTERYOUHAVEREADMYLETTER,ISHALLBEGLADTOTALKWITHYOU2改写后较佳IFMYQUALIFICATIONSMEETYOURSTANDARDS,IWOULDBEHAPPYTOSPEAKWITHYOUINPERSONB1怀疑，不妥、不安全的IFYOUAREINTERESTED,精品文档2016全新精品资料全新公文范文全程指导写作独家原创4/4PLEASELETMEKNOWIMMEDIATELY,ASIMSUREANINTERVIEWWILLCONVINCEYOUIMTHEMANFORTHEJOB2改写后IWOULDLIKETOREQUESTANINTERVIEWYOUCANREACHMEBYTELEPHONEATBEIJING123456BETWEENTHEHOURSOF79AND5309ANYEVENINGC1哀求式的句子，不够完整漏掉面谈时间IWOULDAPPRECIATETHEOPPORTUNITYFORANINTERVIEWICANBEREACHEDBYCALLINGBEIJING123456782改写后MAYIHAVETHEOPPORTUNITY