《图表柱状饼状》PPT课件

如何进行图表式作文写作,范例引路：,MODELWRITING,请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为ChangesinChinesePeoplesDiet的短文,短文可分为三小节:1)statethechangesinpeoplesdietinthepastfiveyears;2)givepossiblereasonsforthechanges;3)drawyourownconclusions.注意:1.尽可能少引用数据;2.词数100左右,TherehavebeensomechangesinthedietoftheChinesepeople.Grain,themainfoodofthemostpeopleinChina,isnowplayingalessimportantrole.Theamountoffruitandvegetablesintheaveragepersonsdiethasalsodroppedby1.5%from1999to2003.Themountofmilkandmeathasincreased.Thechangesindietcanbeexplainedbyseveralreasons.Foronething,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,peoplecanaffordtobuybetterfoods.Foranother,peoplehaverealizedtheimportanceofabalanceddiet.Inaword,thechangesarethesignsoftheimprovementinpeopleslives.Thereisnodoubtthattherellbegreaterchangesinpeoplesdietinthefuture.,第一步：点明主题,第三步：归纳总结并得出结论,第二步：观察图表中数据的增减总趋势，分类式阐明，并说明原因.,TherehavebeensomechangesinthedietoftheChinesepeople.Grain,themainfoodofthemostpeopleinChina,isnowplayingalessimportantrole.Theamountoffruitandvegetablesintheaveragepersonsdiethasalsodroppedby1.5%from1999to2003.Theamountofmilkandmeathasincreased.Thechangesindietcanbeexplainedbyseveralreasons.Foronething,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,peoplecanaffordtobuybetterfoods.Foranother,peoplehaverealizedtheimportanceofabalanceddiet.Inaword,thechangesarethesignsoftheimprovementinpeopleslives.Thereisnodoubtthattherellbegreaterchangesinpeoplesdietinthefuture.,Theamountof,beexplainedby,Foronething,Foranother,economy,realized,playingalessimportantrole,Inaword,总结规律,图表式作文写作分三步：,一、开头Starting二、分析数据Analyzing三、得出结论Comingtoaconclusion,第一,开门见山地点名本图表所反映的主题常用的词汇有：,1.table,chart,figure,graph,2.describe,tell,show,represent,第二,分析数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写,在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。,1.上升：,rise,increase,morethan,2.下降：,drop,reduce,decrease,fall,lessthan,3.强化论点：,First,Second,ThirdFinallyFirstly,Secondly,ThirdlyFinallyFirstofall,Then,Next,AtlastFurthermore;Besides;MoreoverWhatsmore,;Atthesametime,;Whatisworse,4.比较：,compareto/with,comparedto/with,incontrastto,5.相同：,asas,thesameas,similarto,6.不同：,differentfrom,differencebetween/among,第三，归纳总结或发表评论.(有时第三步可省略）,常用的词汇有：1.Finally;Therefore2.Inaword;Inshort;Intheend;Inotherwords;Asaresult;Inall;3.Generallyspeaking4.AsIhaveshown;Ashasbeenstated;Asyou(we)allknow,课堂练笔,CLASSROOMPRACTICE,School-agechildrenattendingschool,94%,95%,96%,97%,98%,99%,1.Describetheinformationinthebargraph.2.Compare1985with2002,whatwasthechange?3.Whyyouthinkthesechangeshavehappened?,Thenumberofschool-agechildrenattendingschoolincreasedbetween1985and2002.In1985,morethan95percentofschool-agechildrenattendedschool,whilein2002morethan99percentofschool-agechildrenattendedschool,risingbynearly4percent.Ithink,itiswiththehelpofthegovernmentthatmoreandmoreschool-agechildrenhavethechanceofattendingschool.Accordingtothegraphandthepresentsituationaswell,itishopedthatalltheschool-agechildrenwillgotoschoolin2010.Iwouldliketoputthebarfor2010ashighas100%.,巩固练习,AWritingPractice请根据下面曲线图（graph）“Thenumberofcaraccidentsin2001”，写一篇文章。1描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布（distribution）及总趋势。2描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。3词数：100左右。4参考词汇：高峰peak；多雨的日子rainydays。,Mainpoints:Part1:demonstratethegeneralsituation1.twopeaksinaccidentsin2001March,numberofaccidents:35August,numberofaccidents:422.accidentsdecreasefromAugusttoDecember3.thelowestpointoftheyear:DecemberPart2:Causes:rainyseason,springandsummerPart3:Yourownopinionorcomments,PossibleversionFromthegraph，wecanseethatthereweretwopeaksinaccidentsin2001OnewasinMarchwiththenumberofaccidents35TheotherwasinAugustwiththenumberofaccidents42，whichwasthehighestpointonthedistributionlineFromAugust，thenumberofcaraccidentsdecreasedtillitreachedthelowestpointoftheyearinDecemberThetwopeaksoccurredinspringandsummer，thetwoseasonswhichhadmostoftheyearsrainDrivingtendstobemoredangerousonrainydaysMaybetheweatheristhemostimportantreasonforcaraccidentsBecareful，whenyoudriveacaronrainydays.,Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thenumberofcaraccidentsin2001isquitedifferentfrommonthtomonth.ThefirstpeakappearsinMarch.Obviouslywiththetemperaturegoingupinspring,peoplebecomeeasytogetimpatientandtolosetheirattention,thuscausingtheaccidents.Thenthenumberdropsforashorttimebeforeasuddenincreasetothetoppointaroundwholeyear.ActuallyitsnothardtoconnectthelargenumberofcaraccidentswiththerainydaysinAugust,whichmakescarsdifficulttostopintimeontheslipperyroad.However,thenumberkeepsfallingtillDecember.AsfarasIamconcerned,todecreasethecaraccidents,weareabletodoalot.Neverdrivewhenwearetootiredtoconcentrateourattention,keepthecarspeedslowafterrain,trytotakepublictransportationasoftenaswecan.Aboveall,itisofgreatimportancetodeveloptheawarenessofbuildingaharmonioussociety.-WangSujie,Seeingfromthediagram,wecanknowthenumberofcaraccidentsin2001reachedthepeakinMarchandAugust,withasharpdecreaseinthefollowingmonths,especiallyinDecember,withjusttencaraccidents.Accordingtotheresult,thereisafactor,whichisofgreatimportance,thatis,theweather.TherearemorerainydaysthanothertimeinMarchandAugust,whichcontributestothegrowingnumberofcaraccidents.Fromtheabovediscussionwehaveenoughreasonstoappealtodriverstobecarefulwhenitrains.Withourcommonefforts,therewillbefeweraccidentsbutmoresafedriving.Becarefulnow,foryouandforyourfamily.-LiuXin,Asisshowninthegraph,thereweretwopeaksofthenumberofthecaraccidentsn2001,inMarchandAugust.Afterthesecondpeak,thenumberofthecaraccidentswererapidlydecreasinguntilthelastmonthoftheyear.Thereisonlyonereasonforthischangebehindthesituationreflectedinthetable.ItrainsalotinMarchandAugustsothatcaraccidentsoftenhappenonrainydays.Fromtheabove,Ithinkthewaytosolvetheproblemsiseasytofind.Firstlywecantakepublictransportationduringtherainydaystopreventcaraccidentsforhappeningtoourselves.Secondlyweshouldcaremoreabouttheconditionsontheroadanddriveslowly.Perhapsthemostimportantlyofallistoraisetheawarenessofthesafetyincardriving