晒课中考书面表达PPT课件

.,1,书面表达,中考英语专项复习,曹树林,.,2,书面表达中考考试要求,要求学生能根据所给提示或要求，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等；单词数量控制在80个词左右。,.,3,一.评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据短文的内容要点初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的语言要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.短文中若出现真实的人名、校名或地名，酌情减分。二.评分标准1.很好（1315分）内容完整、涵盖了所有内容要点、层次结构清晰、语言流畅、地道，有新意。语言基本无误。2.好（1012分）内容完整，涵盖了基本内容要点，内容基本连贯，较清晰、语言较流畅、地道，有少量错误。3.一般（79分）内容较完整，但表达不够充分，层次结构较不太合理、语言不够流畅、地道，有较多语言错误。4.较差（46分）只包含了少数要点，内容过少，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言表达错误较多，不能完整表达意思。5.差（03分）只包含一个要点或所写内容与要求无关，内容不完整，语言表达错误很多，仅有几个单词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意思。.,书面表达的评分细则,Stepsofwriting,1.Cross-question(审题),Style(体裁）Person（人称）Tense（时态）,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,Cross-question(审题),Style(体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）:_,调查报告,第一人称,一般现在时,Beforewriting,1.Cross-question(审题),据实描写：适当发挥：,度假方式,细节及提倡假日休闲,Stepsofwriting,2.Anoutlinedrawing,Listkeypoints(列要点)ArrangeandAdd(布局加首尾),Beginning,Body,Ending,Concludingsentence结论句,Supportingsentence支持句（细节、例子、数据或引文）,topicsentence主题句,Structure,开门见山，紧扣主题,总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应,总分总,结尾通常总结文章主要观点,或者发表自己的观点等等.,Listkeypoints,1.Alotofpeopletravel.2.Somepeoplestayathome.3.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.4.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.(thekeypoints)Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）,加(add),Stepsofwriting,3.SentenceMakingandBeautifying,word,phrase,sentence,Beautifying（美化）,内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.(thebeginning)Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.(theending),mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.,美化(beautify),方法一:善用意义相近的高级词汇，避免行文单调,英语写作技巧,Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.,somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.,somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.,Itmakesthemrelaxedtovisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplehavetowork.,Itmakespeoplerelaxedtovisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplehavetowork.,方法二:活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采,英语写作技巧,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求,Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Itmakesthemrelaxedtovisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplehavetowork.(thekeypoints)Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）,只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻,Proverb（谚语）,方法三:妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。,英语写作技巧,Sentenceconnection,sentences,passage,Linkingwords（连接词）,Trytousesomelinkingwordstomakeyourwritingmorefluently,连(connect),Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）,Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Itmakesthemrelaxedtovisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplehavetowork.(thebody),连(connect),Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.,Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Anditalsomakesthemrelaxedtovisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.,Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.PeopleWhorelaxwellworkwell.,方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。,英语写作技巧,Stepsofwriting,4.Checking,Spelling(拼写)Tense(时态)Grammar(语法)Handwriting(书写)Punctuationmarks(标点符号),GreatchangesinmyhometownForthepastseveralyears,myhometownchangesalot.Suchasinthepast,thehousesoldandsmall,butnowthebuildingsaretallandbeautiful.Andatthattime,farmersworkhardlyandmadelittlemoney.Butnowpeopleareworkinginthefactoryesandtheymakemuchmoremoney.Becauseitsrelaxingworkinthefactory,sotheyleadahappilylife.,Stepsofwriting,5.Copyingout,书写规范，卷面整洁,书写不规范，卷面不整洁,0分。,第三档（一般）：（79分）9分，再减去书写、卷面分。,.,27,（2013,河北）书面表达（计10分）假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“LuckyMoney(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies（爱好）”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一份发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。提示：(1)Whydoyouliketalkingabouthobbies?(2)Whatsyourreasonfornottalkingaboutluckymoney?要求：（1）发言稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）词数：6080。参考词汇:onesownhobby,apropertopic(合适的话题),personal,unhappyIthinktalkingabouthobbiesisbetterthantalkingaboutluckymoney.Itis,提供中英文材料,.,28,提供表格及文字说明,（2015，河北）（计15分）英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数：80个左右（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）。Hi,everyone!Heresmyplanfortheweekend.Thankyou!,.,29,提供表格及文字说明,.,30,（2016，河北）,看图,.,31,（2017,河北）(计15分）英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你李华的名义写一篇演讲词，向同学们介绍一下自己。提示:(1）Wh