中考英语写作示范课人物篇PPT课件

.,1,中考英语写作人物篇,.,2,Brainstorming:,yearsold,He/Sheis,His/Hername/He/Sheis,He/Shewasborn,in+地方；on月日，年,tall/short/thinlonghair/bigeyes,read/basketball,He/Sheis+adj(形容词)He/Shehas+名词短语He/Sheisadjwith名词短语,shy/outgoing/kind,He/Sheis,He/Sheis(not)goodatHe/Shedoeswellin,English/maths,Jim/Kate,He/Shelikesv-ing/n.His/Herhobbyis,.,3,Whatactivitiesdoyourfriendsandyoudotogether?,havedinnertogetherenjoyfood,playbasketballtogetherdosportstogether,.,4,Thethingsthatyourfrienddidmakeyoufeelthankful,helpsbwithhomeworkstudytogether,behurt/illtakesbtothehospital,.,5,写人文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。(叙述的原则是从外到内）,.,6,书面表达5步法,.,7,一、审题注意“四定”,1.定内容：根据要点定内容。2.定句型、定词语：应依据内容。应该先定词语后定句型。3.定时态:记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。4.定人称：用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。,.,8,书面表达（满分25分）初中阶段的学习生活马上就要结束了，在这三年中，你一定和你的同学结下了深厚的友谊。请根据提示要求，写一篇短文，讲述你们之前的交往。80词左右。提示：建议内容如下：（1）whoyourbestfriendis（2）whatmakesyougetonwellwithher/him（3）Oneunforgettablethinghappenedtobothofyou写作要求：（1）短文须包括所给的提示内容,适当发挥想象（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名、班级和地名（3）语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整，词数80词左右。,.,9,二、列提纲根据要点列提纲，列提纲时候应以动宾短语或者系表短语的形式罗列。,.,10,Beginning:,Ending:,Mainbody,Outline,Name：,Character：,Activities：,Oneunforgettablething：,leaveschool;makefriends,behappy/thankful/luckysuchabestfriend,Tony/Jim,bekind/outgoing,havedinner,dosports,studytogether,behurt/illtakesbtothehospital,.,11,Whatactivitiesdoyourfriendsandyoudotogether?,havedinnertogether/enjoyfood,Playbasketballtogether/dosportstogether,.,12,Theunforgettablethingsthatmakeyoufeelthankful,helpsbwithhomeworkstudytogether,behurt/illtakesbtothehospital,.,13,三、扩展成句,将提纲里的动宾短语或系表短语扩展成完整的句子。,.,14,Beginning:,Ending:,Mainbody:,Name：,Character：,Activities：,Oneunforgettablething：,leaveschool.,Iamsohappy/thankful/luckythatIhavesuchabestfriend,Tony.,kindandoutgoing.,makefriends,Iamgoingto,Ihavemadelotsoffriends.,Mybestfriendis,Heis,扩展成句,havedinner,dosportsandstudytogether.,hurt/illatsportsmeeting.,behappy/thankful/luckysuchabestfriend,Weoften,Iwas,Tonyhurriedto,takemetothehospital.,.,15,四、连句成文,补充适当的连词和过渡句，使之时间、空间、细节有逻辑、连贯呼应。,.,16,Beginning:,Ending:,Mainbody:,Name：,Character：,Activities：,Oneunforgettablething：,leaveschool,Ifeel/amhappy/luckythatIhavesuchabestfriend,Tony.,kindandoutgoing.,Iamgoingto,Ihavemadelotsoffriends.,Mybestfriendis,Heis,连句成文,Weoftenhavedinner,dosportsandstudytogether.,Iwashurt/illatsportsmeeting.Tonyhurriedtotakemetothehospital.,soon.,Duringthreeyears,Oneday,Iwasdeeplymoved/thankful.,.,17,五、查错改错,主要检查：(1)人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2)动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3)名词的复数形式；(4)单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否错；(5)格式是否有错。要尽量剔除错误，最后抄正文章,.,18,Iwillleavemyschoolsoon.Duringthesethreeyears，Imadesomefriends.Jellyisoneofmybestfriend.Sheisverykindandeasygoing.Ilearnalotfromher.Weoftendosportsorstudytogether.Oneday，IwanttocopyhermathshomeworkbecauseIwasntgoodinmaths.Butsherefusedme.Iwasangrywithshe.Thenextevening,shecametomyhomeandsaidshewouldliketohelpmewithmymaths.Iwasdeepmoved.Fromthenon,Idobetterinmathswithherhelp.Iamsothankful.,请改正文中的六个错误：,havemade,friends,her,deeply,at,wanted,.,19,A:了解一些新闻人物，如刘翔、姚明等B:积累生活中让人难忘、激动的事件C:关注社会热点，了解时事新闻D:体