写作七天会-第五天

第五天 巧用非谓语， 大“家”上等级（掌握作文中如何使用非谓语动词）今天我们学习在英语写作中如何恰当的使用非谓语动词。 作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散， 而文章中过多的出现复合句有显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当的使用非谓语动词（或者介词短语等）对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 写作口诀之五： 老是简单句，文章不高级 总是复合句，写作太费力 怎样来转换？使用非谓语一下介绍使用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换的方法。1. 运用非谓语动词转换简单句（1.）这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。原句：All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.转换：All the people like the novel written by Tom.（2.）这是一家工厂。月产成千上万辆小汽车。原句：This is a factory . It produces thousands of cars a month.转换：This is a factory, producing thousands of cars a month.（3.） 消防队员及时赶到。他们对我们帮助很大。原句：The firefighters came here in time. They helped us a lot.转换：The firefighters coming here on time helped us a lot.（4.）我们应该多讲英语，我们认为这是很重要的。原句：We should speak more English . We think it is very important.转换：We think it more important to speak more English.（5.）我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平？这是个问题。原句：How should we improve our spoken English ? It is a question.转换：How to improve our spoken English is a question.转换：The question is how to improve our spoken English.2. 运用非谓语动词转换复合句（1）这里曾经有一家化肥厂，位于城市的南边。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。原句： There was a large factory, which produced fertilizer. Every day , it gives out a lot of poisonous gas , which polluted the environment.转换： There was a large factory, which produced fertilizer. Every day , it gives out a lot of poisonous gas , polluting the environment.（2）当我们赶到学校门口时，已经8点了。我们见到老师时，不得不为迟到向她道歉。原句： When we got to the school gate, it was eight. When we saw our teacher ,we had to say sorry for our being late.转换： When we got to the school gate, it was eight. Seeing our teacher ,we had to say sorry for our being late.（3）我们认为中学生学习一门外语是必要的。同时我们也认为，中学生掌握一门外语是可能的。原句： We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one.转换： We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one.（4）由于老师的帮助，我英语进步了。因为我英语进步了，我相信我能考上更好的大学。原句： Because my teacher helps me, my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved, Im sure I will go to a better university.转换： my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved, Im sure I will go to a better university.（5） 为了赶上同班同学，李明不遗余力地学习。为了好好学习，他从不玩电脑游戏。原句： Li Ming spares no efforts to study so that he can catch up with his classmates. He never plays computer games so that he can learn better.转换： Li Ming spares no efforts to study so that he can catch up with his classmates. He never plays computer games so as to learn better.3. 段落练笔(1) 北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口，我真感动不已。 一般表达： There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing. They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day, I left my cellphone in the taxi I took . I got in touch with the driver. He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited.高级表达：There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing, serving passengers heart and soul and playing an important part in the traffic of Beijing. In order to make some money to support their family, they work from dawn till night. One day, I got out of the taxi with my cellphone left in the taxi I took .On hearing what had happened, the taxi driver drove to my home as soon as possible and gave the cellphone back to me . Seeing my cellphone again, I was too excited to say a word. （2）大城市里高楼大厦林立，房价越来越高。一方面，很多人无房居住，另一方面，大量房子却卖不出去。不少人即使买了一套住房，恐怕一辈子要辛辛苦苦工作来还银行贷款。他们希望政府采取措施，关心这些收入不高的人群。 一般表达： There are more and more tall buildings in big cities. Their prices are going up day by day. On one hand, there are still lots of people. They have no houses to live in. On the other hand, many apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you buy an apartment, Im afraid you have to pay off the money you borrow from the bank. You will work hard day and night all your life. I hope our government takes strong measures to solve the housing problem and take care of the people. Their incomes are low. 高级表达： There are more and more tall buildings in big cities with their prices going up day by day. On one hand, there are still lots of people having no houses to live in. On the other hand, many apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you buy an apartment, Im afraid you have to pay off the money you borrow from the bank, working hard day and night all your life. I hope our government takes strong measures to solve the housing problem , showing great concern for the people whose incomes are low. 4.跟踪训练1 转换简单句（运用非谓语动词，一空一词）1. 原句： We were touched by the teachers words. We decided to work hard. 转换： by the teachers words , we decided to work hard . 2. 原句： i didnt receive her letter. I had to write again.转换： Not her letter, i had to write again. 3. 原句： The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry. 转换： The boys to school late again the teacher very angry. 4. 原句： The foreigners arrived at the farm at nine. They were given a warm welcome. 转换： at the farm at nine, the foreigners were given a warm welcome.5. 原句： The boys were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier. 转换：The boys were making the most of time so as to work earlier. 6. 原句： Do you like the picture? It is being painted by Tony.转换： Do you like the picture by tony?7. 原句：I succeeded. The listeners understood me at last. 转换： At last i succeeded in making myself . 8. 原句： I saw an old granny. She lay on the ground. I went over to help her. 转换： an old granny on the ground, I went over to help her. 1. Touched 2. having received 3. coming, made 4. Arriving 5. to finnish 6. being painted 7. understood 8. Seeing , lying 2 走进高考-词不离句1. 李华在公共汽车站等601路车上学Li Hua was at the bus station, for Bus 601 to go to school. 2. 我很容易相处， 也很喜欢与他人共事。Im very easy along with and enjoy with others.3. 网上聊天，学生们可以更自由地表达感情和思想. Online, students c