高考英语道歉信.ppt

,道歉信,celebratethepreciousmoment庆祝这珍贵的时刻thefinalexaminations期末考试bearoundthecorner即将到来appointment约会acceptsb.sincereapology接受某人真诚的道歉aface-to-facetalk一次面谈formyhealthssake为了我的健康keeptosb.word遵守承诺furtheronesstudies进修；继续学习,【必备词语】,picksb.upattheairport到机场接某人fixanothertimefor安排另外一个时间muchtomyregret让我感到很遗憾misstheopportunity错过机会wishtheactivitytobeagreatsuccess祝这次活动成功placesofhistoricalinterest名胜古迹considermysituation考虑我的情况forgive原谅,【必备词语】,1.ImterriblysorryIcouldntreplytoyouremailintime.十分抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。2.Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.我十分抱歉没有及时回信。3.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.我再次为我的错误真诚地道歉。4.ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechancetogettogether.错过了在一起的机会，我感到很遗憾。,【好句朗诵】,5.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.请再次接受我真诚的道歉。6.Anyhow,Isincerelyhopethatwecanfixanothertimefor.如论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间7.Ihavebeenlookingforwardtoit.我一直都在期待着。8.Imawfullysorryforthesuddenchangeofplanandfeelitagreatpitytomisstheopportunity.对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉，对错过这个机会感到很可惜。,【好句朗诵】,1.IamsosorryformymistakeandIamnowwritingtoapologyformycarelessness.,1.apology改为apologize,2.MuchtomyregretIwasunabletokeepmypromisetoattendyourbirthdaypartylastSaturdaysoIhadtostayathometolookaftermysickmother.,2.so改为because,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,3.Ifeelterriblesorryformissingthechanceofattendingyourgraduationceremony.,3.terrible改为terribly,4.IverysorrytoinformyouthatIdidnotmanagetocompletethebookreportyouassignedlastweek.,4.very前面加am,5.PleaseforgivemeformycarelessandtheinconveniencethatImayhavecaused.,5.careless改为carelessness,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,6.Again,Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapologize.,6.apologize改为apology,7.Iamreallysorry,butIvelostthebookthatyoulendmewhenIstayedwithyouinJune.,7.lend改为lent,8.Iwouldliketobuyanewcopyofthatbookandpostthemtoyou.,8.them改为it,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,9.Mymobilephoneranoutofbattery,becauseIdidntgetyourtextmessages.,9.because改为so,10.IgotthemessageyouleaveatthehotelwhenIgotbacktherelateonThursday.,10.leave改为left,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,【2013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）DearTom,ImterriblysorryIcouldntreplytoyouremailwhichyousentmeaweekagoimmediately.Iwassooccupiedwiththefinalexams.Asforthecomingsummerholiday,Iwillfirstdoaparttimejobinafast-foodrestaurant.NotonlywillIearnsomemoneybutIwillalsogainsomesocialexperiencethroughit.AndthenIwillgoonatriptoSichuan,wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Finally,IllgotoYaantoworkasavolunteer.Thereisnodoubtthatchildrentherearebadlyinneedofhelp.IhopewhatIwilldowillmakeagreatdifferencetothem.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHua,满分赏析先用Imterriblysorry对未能及时回信道歉，terribly加强了道歉的语气。接着简单讲明原因；beoccupiedwithsth./doingsth.(忙于某事/做某事)的运用体现了作者的语言功底，不是用简单的词汇busy，可给评卷老师留下好印象。Notonlybutalso连接并列句，属于本书在“写作基础”部分训练的句型。注意：notonly在句首，谓语动词要用倒装形式；gainsomesocialexperience的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。,满分赏析运用了where引导的定语从句修饰地点，使句式避免简单化；placesofinterest(名胜古迹)也运用得当，考生需注意积累，否则只能生造出中式英语。运用了Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)这样的万能句型；bebadlyinneedofhelp(急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。makeadifference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？,DearTom,满分佳作（二）Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,Ivebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays.Now,Iamwritingtotellyoumyplansforthesummervacation.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreambecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotsinordertoenjoysomeappealingscenery.Whatismore,Iwilldosomevoluntaryworktoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,whatsyourplantospendyoursummervacation?Yourssincerely,LiHua,满分赏析第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。Ifeelterriblysorryfor用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。本段用了tostartwith,inaddition,whatsmore等连接词，使行文连贯；notonlybutalso也是必须学会运用的高级句型；broadenmyhorizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好的印象。Itisafabulouschoiceto(是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级表达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。最后一段，作者再次用Isincerelyapologizeagainfor表达了真诚的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。,【模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约】作文原题假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考试，忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救的方法。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译亲爱的Anne，我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你在考试后进行一次私人的见面？我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。你真诚的，李华,DearAnne,IamindeedverysorrythatIdidntattendyourbirthdaypartythedaybeforeyesterday.Itwasniceofyoutoinvitemetoyourbirthdayparty.Ishouldhavecomeandcelebratethepreciousmomentwithyou.Butthefinalexaminationsarearoundthecorner,soIwassobusypreparingfortheexamsthatIforgottheappointment.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingaftertheexaminations?ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechancetogettogether.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Yourstruly,LiHua,【模拟真题2：道歉不能赴约】作文原题假如你是李华，你和你的外籍老师Mrs.Brown约好明天下午要一起讨论你英语学习中遇到的问题，但是你临时有其他的事而不能赴约，请你给Mrs.Brown写一封道歉信。内容包括：1.对她表示歉意；2.说明原因：你的医生打电话给你，通知你明天下午去医院谈体检结果；3.你想与Mrs.Brown另约在本周六。,作文翻译亲爱的Brown夫人，我非常遗憾地告诉您明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学习的问题，因为我要在同一天看医生。今天早上，我的医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些天进行的健康检查结果。为了我的健康，我必须说我可能会失言了。您可以考虑我的情况并理解我吗？我的确希望和您进行讨论，因此如果我们可以在星期六见面，我将无尽感激。我保证会按时到达。你的，李华,DearMrs.Brown,IamterriblelysorrytotellyouthattomorrowafternoonIwillbeunabletomeetyoutotalkabouttheproblemaboutmyEnglishstudybecauseIhavetoseethedoctoronthesameday.Thismorning,mydoctorcalledme,hopingtohaveaface-to-facetalkwithmeabouttheresultofmyhealthexaminationontheotherday.Formyhealthssake,IhavetosaythatImayfailtokeeptomyword.Wouldyoupleaseconsidermysituationandtrytounderstand?Idohopetohaveadiscussionwithyou,soIwouldbeverygratefultoyouifwecouldmeetonSaturday.Ipromisetobethereontime.Yours,LiHua,【2010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。DearTom,Nicetohearfromyou.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,【全真考场】,【2010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】DearTom,Nicetohearfromyou.ButImsorrytotellyouthatIcantmakeittoBeijingwithyounextweekendasweplannedbeforehand.Yousee,acoupleofdaysago,mycousinLiMing,whohasbeentoAustraliatofurtherhisstudies,calledandsaidthathewouldbecomingbacknextweekend,andIwillhavetopickhimupattheairport.Afterall,itsbeenmorethanoneyearsincewesaweachother.Imterriblysorryforthat.Anyhow,IsincerelyhopethatwecanfixanothertimeforatriptoBeijing,whenIwillshowyouaroundtheplacesofhistoricalinterestthere.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerelyyours,LiHua