2020春新教材高中英语 Unit 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——剧本写作课件 新人教版必修第三册

sectionreadingforwriting剧本写作,本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。戏剧剧本属于记叙文。在写作形式上以对话为主，应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。,.pre-writing()learningtowriteafterthemodelthemillionpoundbanknoteact2，scene1narrator：henryiswalkingalongthestreetholdingthebanknoteinhishand.hiscoatisworninseveralplaces.heseesasignforatailorsshop.henry：(enteringtheshop)idliketohaveasuitcoat.1stclerk：(inarudemanner)seehimthere.(pointingtoanotherclerk)2ndclerk：ready-madesuits？downstairs.,henry：(aftergoingdownsomestairs)canyoushowmeasuit，please?3rdclerk：yes，ican，sir.thisway，please.ah，hereweare，theverythingyouneed.1stclerk：(pullingthe3rdclerkasideandwhispering)mrreidsaysyoudbetterservehimquickandgethimoutquick!3rdclerk：iknowwhatimdoing.ivegoteyes，haventi?henry：itsalittletoobright，isntit?3rdclerk：(lookingathimwithafrown)itsallwehaveinyoursize.henry：well，isupposeitoughttodofornow.illtakeit.,3rdclerk：good.shalliputitinabox?henry：no.illwearit.oh，idrathernotpayyounow.idliketopayinamonth.yousee，idonthaveanysmallchange.3rdclerk：(tryingnottoshowhesangry)isupposeagentlemanlikeyouonlycarriesverylargebills.henry：now，youshouldntjudgepeoplebytheirclothes.ijustdontwanttocauseyoutroublewithalargenote.3rdclerk：itsnotroubleatall.,henry：inthatcase，theresnoproblem.(hegivestheclerkthebanknote.theclerkdropshenryscoat.thenhefoldsthebillandslowlyunfoldsitagain，asiflookingatsomethinghecantbelieveisthere.)owner：well，whatseemstobethetrouble?henry：imjustwaitingformychange.owner：givehimhischange，todd.getgoing.(aftergettingthebanknotefromtodd)wouldit.coulditbetheoneisawinthepaperslastweek？irememberthinkingthatneverwouldiholdsuchanoteasthis.(tohenry)oh，takeoffthiscoat，sir.(totodd)gogettheothers，todd！(tohenryagain)allowme，sir！thisway，sir.(inanotherpartoftheshop，wherethereisawiderangeofoptionsforhenrytochoosefrom),henry：thisisnice，butireallydontneedit.owner：nevermind.(withabroadsmile)oh，itsperfect！itwasmadeforsomekingbuthelljusthavetowait.youllneedmanysuitsformanyoccasions.yes，indeedyouwill.henry：waitaminute.ionlycameheretogetasuitcoattoweartoday.idarenotbuyallthesethings.youwouldhavetowaitalongtimetogetpaid.owner：alongtime，sir？why，youdonthavetoworryaboutthat!,3rdclerk：yes，wecanwaitforever!henry：well，allright.illtakethesuitcoatfornowandgettheotherslater.owner：fine，fine.youraddress，sir?henry：idonthaveone.er.immoving.owner：ofcourseyouare！thatsverynormal！abusyman，imsure.,篇章结构,beforeshowingthebanknote：theclerkslookdownuponhenryandtreathiminarudemanner.aftershowingthebanknote：theclerksandownerrespecthenryalotandeventryhardtopleasehim.,()preparationforwritingwordsandphrases,_一张大额支票_以一种方式_向某人展示_vt.服务_vt.认为,alargebanknote,ina.manner,showsbsth,serve,suppose,_宁愿_vt.支付_小额零钱_通过判断_担心,wouldrather,pay,smallchange,judge.by.,worryabout,.while-writing,根据下面提示，写一篇戏剧，介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。亨利正走在大街上，看见了一家理发店，决定去理他的长头发；理发匠用粗鲁的态度接待了他；亨利坐在椅子上等待；理发匠告诉他是否能够担负得起高昂的费用；理发结束后，亨利出示了百万英镑的钞票；理发匠十分吃惊，告诉他随时光临。,step1listtheoutlineofthepassage.part1：_part2：_part3：_,narration,therudemannerinwhichthebarbertreatedhenry,thechangeofhairdressersattitudetowardshenry,step2listthewords，phrasesandsentences.,1.wordsandphrases,_正在做就在这时_的标志_无论何时你喜欢_做是某人的荣幸,bedoing.when.,asignfor.,wheneveryoulike,itisoneshonourtodo.,_理发_以一种粗鲁的态度_确实；实在_支付得起_零钱；零头,haveoneshaircut,inarudemanner,indeed,afford,change,2.sentences,亨利正在大街上行走，这时他看到一个理发的标志。(when)_您能看到我头发太长了。(as)_无论什么时候，只要您想来就来，即使您仅有很少的头发要理！(evenif)_为您服务是我的荣幸！(it作形式主语)_,henryiswalkingdownthestreetwhenheseesasignforaplacethatcutshair.,asyoucansee，myhairismuchtoolong.,pleasecomeherewheneveryoulike，evenifyouonlyhavetoolittlehaircut!,itwillbemyhonourtoserveyou!,step3draftthepassagebyusingthefollowingwords.,when，indeed，evenif,(henryiswalkingdownthestreetwhenheseesasignforaplacethatcutshair.hedecidestohaveitcut.)hhenrybbarberh：goodafternoon，idliketohavemyhaircut，ifimay.(thebarberlooksathenryshairandcontinuescuttinganothermanshair.)er，idreallylikeahaircut.asyoucansee，itsmuchtoolong.b：(inarudemanner)yes，icanseethat.indeed，ican.,h：fine，well，illhaveaseatthen.(hesitsinoneofthebarberschairs.thebarberturnstolookathenry.)b：itsquiteexpensivehere，youknow!areyousureyoucanaffordit?h：yes.ithinkso.(afterhishairiscut，thebarbertellshenryhowmuchhemustpay.henryshowsthebarberthebanknote.)b：whymr.(looksshocked)h：adams.henryadams.imsorry.idonthaveanychange.b：pleasedontworry!(wearingabigsmile)nothingtoworryabout!nothingatall！pleasecomeherewheneveryoulike，evenifyouonlyhavetoolittlehaircut!itwillbemyhonourtoserveyou!,.postwritingpolishingthepassageexchangeyourpassagewithyourpartnerandpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.,1.doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/shechanged/wantedtochange?2.doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?3.isthetextwellorganised?4.doesthewriterusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?5.arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?6.doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation？,常用词汇,inadditionto，besides，both.and.，notonly.butalso.，nowthat，thus，yet，but，however，otherwise，onthecontrary，unlike，instead，although，differentfrom，inspiteof，actually，asamatteroffact，while，atfirst，obviously,亮点表达,1.thestoryhappenedinguangdongintheearlyyearsofthe20thcentury.这个故事发生于20世纪初叶的广东。2.itisverykindofyou，sir，butwearenotallowedtoaccepttips.先生，您真是太好了，但我们不能收小费。3.imafraiditllcostalargeamountofmoney.恐怕这得花费一大笔钱。4.well，iwonderifyoucouldpermitmetohaveonedayoff.嗯，不知你能否允许我请一天假。,5.ifyoupayyourbillnow,icanhelptheothercustomers.如果你现在能付账的话，我就可以去照顾别的顾客。6.whenhenryopenstheenvelopeandholdsamillionpoundbanknoteinhishands，heissurprisedbuttheownerandwaiterareshocked.当亨利把信封拆开时，他拿出一张百万英镑的钞票，感到吃惊，店主和服务员也惊呆了。,7.weresoverygladthatyouevenenteredourlittleeatingplace.indeed，sir，ihopeyoullcomeherewheneveryoulike.我们非