高中定语从句与书面表达资料PPT课件

.,1,Attributiveclauseandwriting,.,2,OurAims,1.Combinesentenceswiththeattributiveclause.,Today,wearegoingto,2.Makesentenceswiththeattributiveclause.,.,3,根据所掌握的定语从句的知识，熟练地使用定语从句也是高考英语写作的一项基本要求。定语从句属于较为复杂的语法结构，根据内容要点在短文中适当地运用定语从句有助于提高写作的得分。,.,4,高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：,2.HereIdliketointroduceyousomewayswhichmighthelpyouimproveyourlisteningability.,1.Sofar,wehavedonesomeunforgettablethings,oneofwhichwastalkingwithforeignersintheCentralPark.,.,5,4.Inthiswaywemaymakefriendswiththosewhohavealotincommonwithusbothincharactersandininterests.,3.WewillgototakepartinthesummercampheldbyyourschoolthisJuly,whichmakesusveryexcited.,5.CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,amongwhom75%aremenand25%arewomen.,.,6,写作中定语从句的主要作用:,1.增加词数（100词左右）,2.可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词的重复和句式单一。,3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。,.,7,一、句子的合并题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution:,如何写出定语从句,3.确定关系词,2.再确定主句：根据文章所描述的主题来确定较重要的信息为主句。,1.找两句中共同的名词或代词，将其定为先行词。,.,8,两个句子间的合并,IwenttoHangzhouforthreedays.DuringthattimeIvisitedthewholeWestLake.,IwenttoHangzhouforthreedays,duringwhichIvisitedthewholeWestLake.,Task1预习自测,.,9,Atpresenttherearemoreandmorestudents.Theireyesightispoorerandpoorer.,Atpresenttherearemoreandmorestudents,whoseeyesightispoorerandpoorer.,.,10,Hehadgivenupsuchagoodchance.Ididntknowthereason.,Ididntknowthereasonwhyhehadgivenupsuchagoodchance.,.,11,Thisisthemuseum.Wesawanexhibitioninthemuseumtheotherday.,Thisisthemuseumwhere/inwhichwesawanexhibitiontheotherday.,.,12,两个以上句子间的合并,Johnismybestfriend.Johngavemeagift.HeboughtthisgiftfromUSA.,John,mybestfriend,gavemeagift,whichheboughtfromUSA.,Task2合作探究:,.,13,Kateisanewstudent.Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.Shespeaksadialect.Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.,Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.,.,14,Practicemore,王蒙，女，25岁，黑龙江人；10岁开始滑冰训练,WangMeng,agirlof25whowasborninHeiLongjiangProvince,beganherskatingtrainingattheageof10.,.,15,Iphone，苹果公司制造,深受青少年欢迎。,Iphone,akindofcellphonewhichwasmadebyApple,isquitepopularamongteenagers.,.,16,二、插入语的使用,众所周知：如上所述：情况常常如此,Asweallknow/AsisknowntousallAsismentionedaboveAsisoftenthecase,.,17,1.Asweallknow,lifeisfullofdreamsandhavingagooddreamisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.,我们都知道，生活充满了梦想。在我们日常生活中拥有一个美好的梦想是很重要的。,Task3翻译下列句子,.,18,2.如上所述，我支持后者的观点。,I,asismentionedabove,aminfavorofthelatterview.,3.正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。,She,aswehadexpected,gotthefirstprize.,.,19,4.Asisoftenthecase,thefactthatsomethingischeapdoesntnecessarilymeanitsoflowquality.,情况往往如此，便宜的东西未必就质量不好。,.,20,Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。Forexample:汉语是一门受欢迎的语言。Chineseisapopularlanguage.,Chineseisapopularlanguage,whichisnowspokenandusedbymoreandmorepeopleallaroundtheworld.,怎么受欢迎？为谁所欢迎？,三、在要点增加上的使用,题干中只有一个孤立的简单句,.,21,派对将于十二月二十五号举行。,ThepartywillbeheldonDecember25th.,Theparty，whichisdesignedtowelcometheforeignersfromothercountries，willbeheldonDecember25th.,(派对的目的),Task4Practice,.,22,李明是一个热心肠的人。LiMingisawarm-heartedman.,LiMingisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayshelpsotherswhentheyareintrouble.,(具体化),.,23,温馨提示：用which引导的非限制定语从句可以增添做这些事情的原因或结果。,1.Inthissummervacation,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob，,whichwillhelpmegainmoneyandworkingexperience.,2.Youlookedupsetinclassyesterday,whichmademeworried.,3.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillhelpthoseinneed.,Task5补充细节，丰富文章内容。,.,24,能力提升（2011全国2卷),假定你是李华，你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1说明你是该报的忠实读者2赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,.,25,1)兼顾国内外新闻可以让我见识广阔。Itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnews,whichhelpsmetoknowmoreabouttheworld.2)介绍名人成功故事这会激励我努力学习。Itintroducesmanystoriesofthecelebrities,whichcaninspiremetostudyhard.,.,26,假定你是李华,2022年冬季奥运会将在你所居住的城市张家口举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者volunteer,巩固练习Homework:,.,27,Tips:,定语从句虽好,但不宜过多容易超出字数限制学会将定语从句浓缩为非谓语动词则是写作的最高境界,.,28,个人情况：年龄，性别，学历Iam16yearsold.Iamagirl.IstudyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool.,I,16yearsoldgirl,studyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool,whichisoneofthebestseniorschoolsinZhangJiakou.,.,29,Thankyou!,.,30,DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterOlympicGames.I,16yearsoldgirl,studyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool,whichisoneofthebestseniorschoolsinZhangJiakou.WiththegreatfluencyinEnglishandtheburningpassionforsports,IsupposeIamqualifiedtobeavolunteerfortheGames.Besides,IamgoodatcommunicatingandIamconsidere