高中英语写作公开课道歉信写作技能提升PPT课件

.,1,假定你是李华，目前在新西兰作交换生。不久前，你在当地一家旅行社（travelagency）预定了“澳大利亚八日游”，但因故不得不取消出游计划。请你给旅行社负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明情况2.表示歉意.3.询问是否退还定金（deposit）.注意：词数100词左右，可适当增加细节。DearSir/Madam,_yours,LiHua,新西兰交换生旅行社预定取消歉意澳大利亚八日游,NewZealandanexchangestudenttravelagencybook/reservecancelcancelledcancellingapologizetosb.forsth.expressonesapologyforatriptoAustraliafor8daysan8-dayAustraliatrip,Howtoexpressapology,1.我写这封信是因取消旅行向你道歉。2.请接受我真诚的道歉。3.对我所做的我感到很抱歉，但我并非故意取消。,Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouforcancellingthetrip.,Pleaseacceptmyapologyforcancellingthetrip.,IamreallysorryforwhatIdid,butIhavenointentiontocancelit.,Howtoexpressapology,4.我真心希望你能理解我的处境(设身处地为我考虑)，并接受我的道歉。5.对造成的不变再次表示歉意。,Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.,Ireallyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmyposition,andacceptmyapology.,Howtoexpressapology,6.错过了这次旅行我感到非常遗憾。7.我真心希望可以再找一个时间参加你们旅行社组织的旅行团。,Iamterriblysorryformissingthetrip.,IsincerelyhopeIcanfixanothertimeforatriporganizedbyyouragency.,DearSirorMadam,IamliHua,anexchangestudentinNewZealand.Lastweek,IbookedaholidaytoAustraliafor8daysinyouragency.ButnowIamsorrytotellyouthatIhavetocancelmybooking.(写作目的)Iwasreallylookingforwardtoenjoyingtheholiday.However,IwasinformedthismorningthatIwouldnotbeabletotakethosedaysoffasplanned.Idoapologizefornotlettingyouknowearlier，whichIhopewillnotcauseyouanyproblems.Besides,IwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhetherIcangetmydepositbackatyourearliestconvenience.（歉意和请求）Yourssincerely,TeachingObjective,Threewritingskills:,AttributiveClauseTherebeBecause,Ihopeyoucanhappyeveryday.(婉婷)IamexpectingtotraveltoAustralia,wherehaslovelyKangaroosandbreath-takingscenery.(然)Iamwrittingtoexpressmyregret.(君)Ilookforwardtoreceiveyourletter.(信)Andthelastquestionisthatwhetheryoucanreturnmydeposit.（肖）Australiaisabeautifulcitythatpeoplewanttogoandlive.(彦蓉),漏了be动词,关系词错误,不用双写t,to是介词啊！,多了一个引导词,还是关系词错误！,Ihopeyoucanbehappyeveryday.(婉婷)IamexpectingtotraveltoAustralia,whichhaslovelyKangaroosandbreath-takingscenery.(然)Iamwritingtoexpressmyregret.(君)Ilookforwardtoreceivingyourletter.(信)Andthelastquestionisthatwhetheryoucanreturnmydeposit.（肖）Australiaisabeautifulcitywherepeoplewanttogoandlive.(彦蓉),.,10,Skill1,AttributiveClausea.tojoinsentencesb.toexpandsentences,.,11,Joinsentences合成定从,Ihadtogotothehospitaltolookaftermygrandfather.Hewasveryill.(蓝),Ihadtogotothehospitaltolookaftermygrandfather,whowasveryill.,.,12,IverylikeAustralia.Iwenttovisitit12yearsago(峰),IlikeAustraliaverymuch,whichIvisited12yearsago.,Joinsentences合成定从,.,13,YesterdayIreceivedaletterfrommyfamily,itsaidmygrandfatherwasill.(豪),YesterdayIreceivedaletterfrommyfamily,whichsaidmygrandfatherwasill.,Joinsentences合成定从,.,14,IwillhaveanimportantexamonMonday.Icantmissit.,IwillhaveanimportantexamonMonday,whichIcantaffordtomiss.,Joinsentences合成定从,.,15,Expandsentences扩展句子,Beijingisafamoushistoriccity.,Beijingisafamoushistoriccity,_.,whichhasalonghistoryofmorethan3000yearsandalargenumberofhistoricspots,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandsoon.,.,16,Mr.Luoisawarm-heartedman.,Mr.Luoisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayslendsahelpinghandtoothers.,Expandsentences扩展句子,.,17,Nowadaysparentsdoeverythingfortheironlychildren.,Expandsentences扩展句子,Nowadaysparentsdoeverythingfortheironlychildren,whichmakesthechildrenrelyontheirparentsbadly.,.,18,1.Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob，which_.2.Class106isabigfamily,which_.3.PresidentXirecentlyadvisedyoungpeoplenottostayuplate，which_.4.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork，which_.,.,19,1.Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob，whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.2.Class106isabigfamily,whichconsistsof19boysand37girls.3.PresidentXirecentlyadvisedyoungpeoplenottostayuplate，whichweshouldbearinmind.4.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork，whichallowsmetomakeacontributiontosociety.,Skill2,Therebe,Unluckily,therewassomethinghappenedonmyfamily.(权)Butnowtherearesomethingmademeunexpected.(蓝),Unluckily,therewassomethinghappeningtomyfamily.,Butnowthereissomethingunexpectedwhichmakesmeunabletogotravelling.,有许多人持相反意见。有一条河从城中流过。,Thereareanumberofpeopleholdingtheoppositeopinion.Thereareanumberofpeoplewhoholdtheoppositeopinion.,Thereisariverflowingthroughthecity.Thereisariverwhichflows.,Therebe+主语+现在分词/定语从句,满山都是学生种的树。有一个人被困在废墟里。,Therearetreesalloverthemountainplantedbystudents.Therearetreesalloverthemountainwhichwereplantedbystudents.,Thereisamantrappedintheruins.Thereisamanwhoistrappedintheruins.,Therebe+主语+过去分词/定语从句,下星期我要参加一个重要的考试。我有一个会议要参加。,Nextweekthereisgoingtobeanimportantexaminationformetotake.,Thereisameetingformetoattend.,Therebe+主语(forsb)todo,.,25,Skill3,Because,1.IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogo.BecauseIhavejustfoundthatIhavesomethingtodo.(祺婷)雨君雨桃卓文铸斌,IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogotravellingbecauseIhavejustfoundthatIhavesomethingimportanttodo.,IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogotravellingforthereasonthatIhavejustfoundthatIhavesomethingimportanttodo.,1.IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogo.BecauseIhavejustfoundthatIhavesomethingtodo.(祺婷)雨君雨桃卓文铸斌,BecauseIambadlyill,IcannottakeatriptoAustralia.,Beingbadlyill,IcannottakeatriptoAustralia.,Becauseshesawnobodyathome,sheleftthemanote.,Seeingnobodyathome,sheleftthemanote.,BecauseIwrotetheessayhurriedly,Imademanyspellingerrors.,Writingtheessayhurriedly,Imademanyspellingerrors.,BecauseIaminbadneedofmoney,Iwanttogetmydepositback.,Beinginbadneedofmoney,Iwanttogetmydepositback.,Becausemostpeoplewereverypoorinthepast,theycouldntaffordtheoverseastravel.,Beingverypoorinthepast,mostpeoplecouldntaffordtheoverseastravel.,Becauseheworkedveryhard,hepassedtheexamwithease.,Workingveryhard,hepassedtheexamwithease.,.,30,Threeskillsofpolishingsentences: